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Leptocyon — 'Monsters of Hoenn' - part 3
Published: 2011-10-29 16:16:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 2350; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 15
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UPDATED!! (some mistakes corrected and arrows added
)FINALLY IS OVER!
You've been waiting for this part more than two weeks and I am terribly sorry but school and all I have to for school don't give me any space to breathe. Also, I wanted to participate in one contest so I was making that picture but at the end it looked all wrong so I gave up entering contest. And there goes four days to waste.
And you must know this: This part is made of 10 A4 papers so while I made frames on all of them, put them together properly and put all those dialog boxes (all my day goes away because of them)... yeah, it takes some time.
So, in this part Althea finally starts his journey and catches her first Pokemon. Actually I wanted dustox, but that silcoon messed up my plans. Demet.
Maybe the plot is developing too slow but I'm creating this like regular comic, not just nuzlocke run, so I must do it in way that people who never played pokemon games can understand (i mean all those explanations of Pokedex and pokenav). If there are not this part with Brendan at the end this part would be completely miss (he and his story really saved me this time :^^
. And after all, I dumped it . Poor boy.I can't tell you when the next part will be out because I'm planning to draw new ID picture and finally start with project "Draw your friends like pokemon trainers" but it will be shorter then this (story is over, I just need to draw it). XD
P.S. there are probably some grammar mistakes and I would be really grateful if you point me where they are and how to correct them. Thank you.
Enjoy everybody!
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Part 3 (here)
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Comments: 30
*After battle panel features the rivals exhausted* Congratulations, now I can interpret battles as coitus sessions. It's...kinda funny actually.
So Brendan's just following orders? Huh. Just don't screw that up by making him follow her like a lovesick puppy.
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so what, nicknames dont have to have meaning to be viable, and interesting way of introducing the nuzlocke concept. interesting how you have them traveling together, the rivals and such, I always felt the rivals in this game were pretty good friends and were pretty chummy and not so much rivals more so competitive buds
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Well, to tell you the truth Nava's name does have a certain story behind it. Some guys from my school and I were toying around with our names and we would switch first and last syllable and see how then name sounds. One of they was called Vana and when you switch syllables you get Nava. That sounded so good that it actually stayed in my head for some time and when I was starting this game this name came first to my mind. But Birch cannot know that, so it's actually meaningless name for him. I agree that they don't need to have meaning to sound good and fit to the character, too.
Yes, RSE "rivals" as much as BW "rivals". They are all good friends. Actually, I count only kanto and johto rival as a real rival. Barry is too quirky to be considered a real rival X)
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heh, that's pretty interesting, gives it a personal touch
and indeed, rivals have been much more friends than anything in the past few generations
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I like it more when rivals are friends. I don't know why. I was really enchanted with the story of BW games and with how often Bianca and Cheren appear. I really like those two.
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yeah, was really surprised how much they showed up, shame you didn't get a part to tag team with Bianca too, you got 2 chances with Cheren
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Lol, i have to say, cool professor, lol somehow he looks like 10 years younger than what I imagine him to be
aww! i wanted them to be together! and he isnt even saying good bye he just left them, not cool bro.
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hahaha, I must agree with you on this one. My Birch really looks like he is in his early twenties XD I guess, without that beard he would look even more younger XI Lucky for me that he has it.
mmm, we shall see
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jejeje, lets see what will happen
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I really like it. Though your style were you do the mouth but still have the side of the face with the lips kinda freaks me out XD.
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haha, this were drawn long ago and my style I had there freaks me out too 
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Same thing happens to me as well.
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I'm confused. You said Winnie was your third? Who's the second?
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She is third team member. Team makes Althea, Nava and Winnie, three of them
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That makes sense. Thanks for clearing that up!
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I really enjoy how you're bringing the story together. It's very refreshing from the othe nuzlockes I've seen.
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wow, I'm glad you think so. 
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I can catch some mistakes for you i hope I'm not actually being rude by telling you to correct stuff since you've worked on this pretty hard and i don't know the slide number so ill just quote the sentences and already put them in correct format for you.
"Yup! Some Corporation bought the professor's idea and developed the pokedex so any trainer can have it."
"Few people have them so you must be aware of great responsibility you will carry from now on."
"What is it professor?"
"It's the ultimate test which should make you grow faster and make you stronger."
"To tell you the truth, i thought you would oppose more."
"I know we already said goodbye to each other, but i forgot to give you this."
"Yes, its a pokenav."
"It represents the shell of an omanyte, an extinct pokemon from kanto that lived tens of thousands of years ago."
"My mother bought it for me on my first trip to the natural history museum when i started getting obsessed with extinct species."
"That is the same wurmple that we met before and its the first pokemon we ran into here."
"You don't have to fight me I'll go without any opposition."
"The thing is...there are so many poochyenas and they constantly attack us wurmples, and they make our lives full of stress."
" First time i met you i wanted to join and get out of here cause you looked really awesome."
"Why do you keep Zuko in a pokeball all the time?"
"Pokemon live in pokeballs."
"Tough. But I think it was worth it."
"Yeah, nothing feels better then resting after some good training."
"I planned it like that from the start."
"Time to set up camp."
"Yeah, well it looks like you listen to your father too much."
"Im supposed to light a fire in your heart and bring out that independent and selfish part of you."
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Wow, man!
Thank you so much for doing this! This took you some decent time so i truly respect what you've done.
You are an angel!
You pointed me some typing mistakes I missed while I was checking this part (like form-from) and God knows I need help with past tenses and articles in your language
Thank you so much! 
And you can be rude like this all the time
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"Your language?" Pray tell, what's your first language?
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I've never met someone who speaks Croatian before, that's all. (Really, the only thing I know about the country is that Dalmatians come from there...typical American)
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hahahaha, there is a icon of Croatian coat of arms. I didn't know that
I don't see why would you need to know anything about us, we are such a small country. hehe, dog's breed. I'm surprised that you even know that they are Croatian breed
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