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Leviathan-Ryder — Female Model Sheet

Published: 2009-03-08 00:57:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 8792; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 242
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Description I wanted my next character to have some exaggerated features to stylize her. She will be carrying a 2 handed scimitar like sword that she normally wouldn't be able to carry.
I've started modeling her, and so far my poly flow is looking great

Edit: Lengthened the torso a bit.
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Comments: 10

maxlender [2010-03-15 19:50:54 +0000 UTC]

yeah thanks alot

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Leviathan-Ryder In reply to maxlender [2010-03-16 03:19:45 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome, the proportions are still exaggerated so they're not correct.

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Barefootorc [2009-03-08 22:45:49 +0000 UTC]

Give her a sword, and a crossbow that would look cool.

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Leviathan-Ryder In reply to Barefootorc [2009-03-09 06:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Sword is a must, already have it drawn I just want to get a good clothing concept for her.

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allete [2009-03-08 03:37:36 +0000 UTC]

i agree with the person above me, her torso looks kind of gross... otherwise nice

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Leviathan-Ryder In reply to allete [2009-03-08 08:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the torso is too short, but I think what really makes the torso look gross is the hips, I gotta get back to the sketchpad on this one lol

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Alemja [2009-03-08 03:09:45 +0000 UTC]

She either has a super short torso, or super long legs...I'm also curious as to when the hips came up to the ribs. But yeah I think you're best bet would be to make the torso longer, and make the legs a bit shorter. Just if you do make the torso longer don't forget to re-proportion the arms as well. If you are going for stylized you may want to exaggerate a few proportions a bit more like her hips maybe...You could probably do these things easily in 3D to fix her up and I think you're on the right track.

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Leviathan-Ryder In reply to Alemja [2009-03-08 08:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, yeah I do realize the torso is short. If you look at the front view the hips look a bit ridiculous. I really appreciate the feedback, I am going for longer then regular proportion legs, but the hips really need to be reworked.

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Alemja In reply to Leviathan-Ryder [2009-03-08 21:27:21 +0000 UTC]

I actually don't think the hips look too bad... just a longer torso will make them look better, because it looks like you are trying to squish it all in that one section.

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Leviathan-Ryder In reply to Alemja [2009-03-09 06:16:58 +0000 UTC]

I was trying to go for a short torso long legs, but I did exaggerate too much and I definitely see what you are saying thanks, might be some time before I fix it due to finals though

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