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Published: 2011-03-26 19:43:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1470; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 7
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THE END.Whew! I hope it wasn't too anticlimactic, but I felt that this comic really deserved something simple and pure to finish it up.
I'll keep editing the other pages, and as per a very good suggestion from , I'm going to try making a new cover. That will be coming soon, but for now, homework!
I hope you all enjoyed it.
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Edit: The glowing man is intended to be a personification of Logic. Hence the floaty equations and his ability to detach himself from emotion. I think he's a pretty smart guy, and we should all listen to him a little more often.
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Thanks! I love clean lines and strong shapes, so there you go!
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Incredible job! I loved it! You worked so hard and it came out amazing! Gah I wish I could just take logic by the hand and have him help me up sometimes.
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Don't we all.
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Wow this was really great! I love your simple use of colors and the design of Logic. I appreciate the way you told the story, and the message was very good. Bravo!
The only thing I might consider in your next story is how fast you end it. I think you started off the character very clearly, giving lots of time for the reader to absorb the color, the feeling, and her situation. For this last page, I was stuck on the quizzical, "do you mean the walls or my friends?" and I almost wanted to go back a page to connect what had just happened. Then when I got to her determined smile, her quirky exchange with Logic and the moment she grabs the helping hand, I felt a little alienated and not ready for it.
I think the moment she and Logic are having that quiet exchange (panel 3) should be given way more spotlight. Maybe even the rest of the page! It gives us a moment to rest our eyes and ponder on that quizzical piece of the dialogue, and then prepare us for that magical ending.
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Wow, I love it when readers give such in-depth feedback. Thank you for that excellent advice! I'll keep it in mind.
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I'm probably one of the few reading this who sympathizes more with Mr. Reason than the girl; and it's always so NICE to get that smile, after talking and talking and talking yourself hoarse just to get some basic engagement.
The smile in her eyes at the end is perfect.And the swirl of reason coming up around her, combined with his outline breaking up, says to me that this is her internal sense of judgement, breaking up and being reintegrated into her; she won't be needing to talk to herself quite this way now. Huzzah!
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That sounds like you're talking from experience. ^^ Have you been the voice of reason before?
Thank you for your observations. It's really great to learn about what people think and the impressions this piece gives them. Everyone seems to get something different from it, and that's excellent.
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aah.. i've read it from the begining and it's absolutely adorable) Thank for your work)
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Thank you for reading!
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I just read this whole comic, and I loved it! The theme, the personification of the logic-man, the color scheme...everything!
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I'm really glad! Thanks for telling me!
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I forgot to mention how awesome this was, didn't I?
Well this was fantastic.
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This was such a sweet comic <3 I loved the uplifting mood and the personification of our logic and how it can help us in times of need. The art was so entrancing too and I loved the calm colours. Fabulous work ;u;
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Thank you! I'm very glad that you got something out of it.
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wow, i was expecting something like the firey gates of hell to open and there stood the unicorn with a bazooka, just kidding. Nice ending art work is lovely as always.
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You know me, unpredictable to a fault! Thank you!
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Excellent! Excellent!
It's such a great story, and you did a fantastic job with it. Looking forward to more comics from you.
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you read and enjoyed it! I'd like to ask for more suggestions from you in class before I start editing.
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Ha, ha! So he is Mr. Logical!
Not at all antclimactic! I think that pages 9, 10, and 11 work well together as an ending. The effect you made with the numbers really makes the page beautiful, matching the tone of the ending perfectly.
I really like Mr. Logical's expression in the second panel. Its very sweet.
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Yeah! You did a great job guessing! It's been interesting to hear what you think of it all. Thank you for your comments!
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Thanks.
Was happy to be along for the ride. Great story. Can't wait to see what you have coming up next.
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I like happy endings as well.
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Amazing.
I really love the way you gave her presence in those final panels ! Great smile and relief. Well done !
(and remember to count me in if you do prints !)
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It was wonderful to finally see her smile, I agree.
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(in a way, I'm -kinda- sad it's over, but happy for her).
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Me too. I'm sad to lose the characters. But I agree: It's great that she finally got out!
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I love it I really do
B-but will I ever know what magical-glowy-math-man actually represented?
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Oh! I forgot to put that in the description and I promised I would! *Fixes it*
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That was so wonderful.
Such a great ending.
You did an excellent job on this comic.
The characters and setting were amazing and the story was just such a great story.
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Thanks for reading! I'm glad that you appreciated it.
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Of course!
You know, if you printed this, I would totally buy it.
It's a collector's item.
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I absolutly love these pages <3 Are you going to be putting this in book form =3?
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Yes, I'm planning on printing a few copies. If there's enough interest, I'll sell a few as cheaply as I can.
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Well Id definatly be interested X3
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