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LightningBob — BNM Pt. 1 pg.27

Published: 2010-01-30 05:51:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 1294; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 5
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Description Not quite completely colored but it's here! Hinata's having trouble with Naruto's comforting words a bit.
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ZombieMoshPit [2010-03-06 18:12:17 +0000 UTC]

hinata came out really cute looking in this page. and dude, nice handling with coloring.

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LightningBob In reply to ZombieMoshPit [2010-03-07 08:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Flyerscurse [2010-02-12 00:45:28 +0000 UTC]

I so fu.. miss him... JIRAIYA!!!!!!!!!!!! and is good to have "him" carry her?

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LightningBob In reply to Flyerscurse [2010-02-12 10:11:00 +0000 UTC]

well you've never seen him hit on a minor before have you? He might tease with words but little else and since he's on a mission and concerned about her health he's almost all business.

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Flyerscurse In reply to LightningBob [2010-02-12 17:13:13 +0000 UTC]

u are right but u may have played a little

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LightningBob In reply to Flyerscurse [2010-02-13 06:04:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm just sticking with the story as it was written. THe teasing will be soon.

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Flyerscurse In reply to LightningBob [2010-02-13 14:35:15 +0000 UTC]

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LightningBob In reply to Flyerscurse [2010-02-14 06:01:15 +0000 UTC]

I just might put some mental imaging in there as well...

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Flyerscurse In reply to LightningBob [2010-02-14 12:52:51 +0000 UTC]

u do that

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Roger64 [2010-02-08 17:34:21 +0000 UTC]

I see improvement in the dynamics too, you have Jirana's arms swaying to help show movement, a little thing I noticed but those little things really help convey so keep goign!

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LightningBob In reply to Roger64 [2010-02-08 23:01:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I've been trying to work those in, especially because theres actually some action happening now instead of talking and standing around.

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deadmeat888 [2010-01-30 09:55:31 +0000 UTC]

yay naruhina stories much better than all those damn yaoi stories my sis reads and whatnot

ahem anyway poor hinata fainting like that but he was only encuraging her and then jiraya comes and think that naruto done something bad again

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LightningBob In reply to deadmeat888 [2010-01-31 06:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Yea...so many things happening and it;ll only get better soon. Plus more NARUHINA!

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deadmeat888 In reply to LightningBob [2010-01-31 09:07:15 +0000 UTC]

yay

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LightningBob In reply to deadmeat888 [2010-02-01 11:52:51 +0000 UTC]

haha =^_^=

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Stojke13 [2010-01-30 08:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Aw, Hinata passed out

Oh well, nothing new in there, though

Ahem, anyways, great comic! I've read it all at once and I simply adore it Please keep up with making this

Over and out

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LightningBob In reply to Stojke13 [2010-01-30 09:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Should have the chapter finished soon!

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Stojke13 In reply to LightningBob [2010-01-30 12:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, and one more thing: Add in author's comments a link to previous and next page of your comic. That will make reading a comic much more easy...

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LightningBob In reply to Stojke13 [2010-01-31 06:51:32 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to try that. Plus rearrange the order of the BNM gallery a bit.

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Stojke13 In reply to LightningBob [2010-01-31 09:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you should do that
Good luck

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