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Published: 2011-12-16 20:13:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 630; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 13
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Description EDIT: I changed the clouds a bit, let the forest look a bit better and added the breathcloud of the horse .

I just wanted to hear feedback about the background because I kinda like the clouds somehow . Please write a real critique, with that I mean posive and negative things about this. No Kiddi-critique please D:! A Kiddi-critque is when you only say bad things about it, just like Kiddi XD (my sis). The horse is a silluette because this is a christmas gift and it isn't christmas yet, right ? Hope you like it

art © me (=Lilafly 2011)
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Comments: 82

Freiha In reply to ??? [2011-12-17 10:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Hab ich gesehen, du kommst wirklich gut voran

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Lilafly In reply to Freiha [2011-12-17 10:49:06 +0000 UTC]

sogar schon die hälfte .....das schaff ich nie bis weihnachten !

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Freiha In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-18 17:43:09 +0000 UTC]

Doch! *anfeuer*

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Lilafly In reply to Freiha [2011-12-18 17:49:33 +0000 UTC]

danke

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Freiha In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-18 17:52:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.


Btw: Ich bin doch on xDD Ich wollte nur kurz was aufn PC von meinem Paps ziehen...und...naja...du kennst das sicher


Ich hatte übrigens grad ein Erlebnis:
*kommt on* Oh, 29 Nachrichten...keinen Bock die zu beantworten... *10 Minuten später* *beantwortet Nachrichten* Joaah, endlich geschafft, jetzt müsstens nur noch 3 sein... *F5* Wie? 7?! Kann ich nimmer rechnen? ach ne...is bestimmt Larina da...*guckt nach* Jep... xDD

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Lilafly In reply to Freiha [2011-12-18 18:01:39 +0000 UTC]

haha, ich bin immer schuld XD

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Freiha In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-18 18:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh ja, du bist immer Schuld

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Lilafly In reply to Freiha [2011-12-18 18:18:29 +0000 UTC]

D:

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Freiha In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-18 18:25:41 +0000 UTC]

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StartItWithASmile In reply to ??? [2011-12-17 00:49:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow Larina! This is stunning, you've got it perfect! This is one of the best pieces of art I've seen on dA and I've been on here for 3 years! You've got a really special talent, you should be so proud of this. Whoever gets the gift should be really honored. Excellent, best piece you've ever done

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Lilafly In reply to StartItWithASmile [2011-12-17 06:58:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks, but there are still some bad things (you also were allowed to say XD). And I don't think it's THAT'S perfect, I now mayn artist who can draw such backgrounds better (for example =griffsnuff and *Aomori )
nevertheless thank you

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StartItWithASmile In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-17 18:27:07 +0000 UTC]

I think you're just as good as them, if not better! I feel that the only thing that needs improvement is the anatomy of the horse. I don't want to say bad things as I don't want to be mean

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Lilafly In reply to StartItWithASmile [2011-12-17 20:30:19 +0000 UTC]

You only want to suck up to me, right? I'm 100% NOT as good as them and definitaly not better! Everyone can see that! My backgrounds aren't detailled enough to catch up with theirs. It's just so
I asked for saying bad things, so it's no problem here XD. The horse anatomy maybe looks strange here because it's a silluette, the real picture looks better, but anatomy is anyhow one of the most difficult things

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StartItWithASmile In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-18 17:08:31 +0000 UTC]

I don't want to suck up to you. I'm just saying I think you should be really pleased with how it turned out, it's a lot better than many people.

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Lilafly In reply to StartItWithASmile [2011-12-18 17:09:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks, but it nevertheless isn't as good as the ones of real artists. I'm just 15, so my art isn't THAT good

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StartItWithASmile In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-18 19:39:10 +0000 UTC]

A simple thank you would've been fine

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Meerkatgirl1342 [2011-12-16 21:59:13 +0000 UTC]

how did you do the moon n clouds so good!?!? like..did u use pre made brushes 4 them?

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Lilafly In reply to Meerkatgirl1342 [2011-12-16 22:02:15 +0000 UTC]

I drew just a circle/point as the moon, erased with a soft eraser brush the one side of the moon a bit and drew some darker dots at the moon. At a layer below it I drew the shining thing. The clouds are just drawn with a low opacity and a soft brush. I can't explain how I drew them because I just drew over and over a lot of times XD
and I never use pre made brushes for things I can do by myself, only for trees SOMETIMES, but normally all brushed I use are self-made

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Meerkatgirl1342 In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-16 22:13:55 +0000 UTC]

ohhh okay..ive always wondered how u did this kinda stuff tho lol. n thats how i make some clouds when i do..lots of airbrushing ^.^ im gonna go try sumtin like this

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Lilafly In reply to Meerkatgirl1342 [2011-12-17 07:07:21 +0000 UTC]

the best tip I can give you is: use a soft airbrush for things like that and keep practicing

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Meerkatgirl1342 In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-17 17:14:20 +0000 UTC]

yupp..thank u!

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Bella-Mia-D In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 21:31:31 +0000 UTC]

the clouds look amazing! I love it! If I may say one bad thing, it's the between the snow and trees. it looks kinda lumpy Maybe if you make more strait likes like grass or (if it's in PhotoShop too) blur or smggle it
Other weise is it really good. I ADORE the sky!

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Lilafly In reply to Bella-Mia-D [2011-12-17 07:00:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you
grass in a snow landscape ? Not very fitting XD. Ok, then I change the forest for the third time now XD
thank you

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Shehy In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 21:08:37 +0000 UTC]

Sieht besser aus

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Lilafly In reply to Shehy [2011-12-17 07:00:26 +0000 UTC]

danke

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sparkle-bubba In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 20:29:21 +0000 UTC]

i love the clouds and the moon
and i love the horse

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Lilafly In reply to sparkle-bubba [2011-12-16 20:45:07 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Shehy In reply to ??? [2011-12-16 20:17:51 +0000 UTC]

WOLKENSINDOSWASVONGENIALOOOOOO Ich würde allerdings bei den erhellten Stellen einen weicheren Übergang machen, so sieht des aus, als hätte es auf die Wolken geschneit

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Lilafly In reply to Shehy [2011-12-16 20:21:43 +0000 UTC]

danke ! Oh, na das hat's natürlich nicht . Danke für den tipp, ich probier mal ob ich da noch was ändern kann

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Shehy In reply to Lilafly [2011-12-16 20:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Bitteschön

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Lilafly In reply to Shehy [2011-12-16 20:26:06 +0000 UTC]

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