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LilayM β ACB Know your place 1-2
Published: 2011-11-11 22:21:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 9444; Favourites: 154; Downloads: 58
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Soo... yeah. Finally - it's the comic I've been talking about since a while ago. Constructive criticism welcomed, since it's my first "real" comic, probably full of mistakes which I'd like to avoid in the future.You know that making a comic page is waaay more difficult than doodling, or even drawing a comic strip? Well, I didn't - not until today. What I've also learned is that black n' white isn't as easy and fast in use, though I won't switch to color - geez, it took me AGES (this evening) to finish these pages - I'm exhausted D:
About the story itself... since it's a beginning, I'm not gonna spoil. Lynx, you won't do it either.
Enjoy?!
(To be or not be, go to sleep or back to killing templars?)
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Well actually... yes XD Though pony reference, too. But mainly LFG, as it was inspired by it.
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I freaking love Richard so much!Β
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Me too! When my "schedule" loosens up a bit, I hope to draw him... a whole lot XD He's one of the funniest characters I know. Exactly my type.
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FOR NARNIA!!!! AND FOR ASL-POINES!!!!!!!!!!!
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FOR NARNIAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
you my lady, are too epic.
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M., also called Lilay, who is my persona and Lynx's persona. ^.^ I draw that comic mainly for lulz, that's why we're there.
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So... you can say itΒ΄s YOU. Great. xD
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Yyyeah. All this comic originates from discussion Lynx and me had: π: 0 β©: 1
"Hey, what would we do if we really were in Roma?"
"I'd like to say we'd assassinate people, but I'm too much of a failure for that."
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"Hahaha, it's so stupid it could actually work! I'll draw it! 
Most of my ideas come from talking with her xP
ThatΒ΄s so awesome!!! LOL x'D
DonΒ΄t stop talking with her! *_* NEVER!
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when she said ponies I hope she didn't mean MLP...
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Relax, it was this [link] xP
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is for pony and looking for group reference
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You're the first person to notice that!
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I am a huge looking for group fan my friend ebby wants to be richard and poke people with fork
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"Ink digitally"? Oo You mean do it as lineart?
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Yup. So many liiines D: So many freakin' lines. I love sketching, but as soon as I'm done with a pic, I just lose interest. So when my pencils look pretty neat, it's like pointless/boring for me to keep working on it.
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I know what you mean XD Sketching is the funnets part... thats why I have over 25 unfinished,ongoing arts on my computer...XD Or was it 35?
Good work by the way. Now when Im gonna play Revelations (only 3 days more
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Only 35? I've got much more files, not to mention they're sometimes just stuffed with doodles. Ya know, the worst thing is, that I could find the time to finish them all but I often just don't feel like D: And geez, what's the point in doing something you don't have to do when it's not even pleasant? Drawing is my passion, not a duty tho. Although I dream of getting better and working as an animator 
Look at [link] and "For ponies" gets another meaning XD
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XD'
OMG ACR is coming out TOMORROW! Cant wait
Ah and besides.The art dont have to be overdetailed to look nice. I have seen many unfinished scetches that look better than some finished art....
And thanks for that link..now my mind is completly crewed up XD
yes right now 35...had more but my computer got a virus and a lot of them got well..destroyed x.x
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I will enjoy this one really XD "FOR PONIES!" I really can see Ezio screaming that when he realize that some girls are obsessed with horses...and guys who ride horses are pretty few in our time...XD
Cant wait for more ;D
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when i read this i was like... "The panels are backwards... oh wait this is in Englisg style *slap forehead*"
I seriuosly gota layoff the Jap Manga x3
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Hahaha
Very well done in my view. Keep up the excellent work!
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yes kill the templars for Narnia and for ponies!!!! >
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Hahaha!! was NOT expecting that!
I was expecting Ezio to bust out some moves there!
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haha
for constructive criticism some lines lok a LIIIITLE bit like a rough sketch, so maybe you could clean them up a bit
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Actually... It's all one big sketch xDDD I just used some red for guide lines and worked in pencil then. I'd die if I had to ink this all digitally D:
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FOR PONIES!
Looks good
Also I should remember to look carefully at every sound effect
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You'll point uncleaned spaces with your own finger, coz I can't see any. And if you're wrong, that finger will go elsewhere, if you know what I mean...
By the way, my mood sucks, I keep eating to cheer myself up which gets me down and all and FUCK, I'm not MEANT to be left ALONE for so LONG! Healthy or not, I'll drag you to my place next weekend.
I'm vomiting templars, novices and borgias now, can you believe it? Fuck. That's why I should NEVER EVER play on my own - I tend to overdo.
Geez, I gotta moan a bit, you get it, right? Riiight?
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For example one biiig thing beetween two pages, but it's less visible on my monitor than on phone
You think I feel better? Dammit, I wanna go to school, you know? It's really not normal.
Stop playing, turn of computer and go do something else. Your novices will not die XD So many things to draw, yeah? Try to start something... not assassin-related, soon you will really start vomiting it.
You can moan as much as you want, I'm immune 
Ah, did I mention my body act like it's holidays? I can't sleep before 4-5 am XD
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LOOOL. Geez, I'm actually feeling better right now. Well, you'll see why... Anyway, go to school as me, coz I feel completely otherwise - my head hurts and I DO NOT WANT to go there ;\
But I'm feelin' good. It's screw-it-all kinda mood, feels good nonetheless.
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