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Published: 2015-02-19 21:05:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 2482; Favourites: 114; Downloads: 32
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Beautiful colours, contrast is excellent. I love how you can see the pencil crayon tip in the bubble and the fact that the bubble it's in is a totally different colour in itself. The sharpness and the blurry parts are in perfect placement.
I love the black in the background, it makes the colours pop. (No pun intended e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g⦠" width="17" height="15" alt="
The only thing I can see that "bugs" me (and that's just me personally) is the pencil crayon. There's one black strip on it, I don't know why but it just draws my eye towards it.
Other than that, this is an exceptionally beautiful and breath taking photo. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p⦠" width="15" height="16" alt="
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Thank you for take time wo write this critique.Β I am very grateful!Β
The black strip on the pencil is maybe not optimal.Β And for the next photo in this style, which is in the works, I'll consider that.
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You're welcome!
Don't get me wrong, it was an exceptionally beautiful photograph, just sometimes those kind of things happen. You might be able to edit it a bit and raise the brightness there.
I wouldn't stress about it though, I almost didn't see it until I took a closer look.
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Lovely contrast to to vibrant colours and black BG. Interesting how only the one about to "die" is fully, uniformly gold on its edges.
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Thanks for your Text! Please write a Critiqe with this
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Fascinating observation! Scientifically, the colours are a result of the thickness of the wall - I wonder if the tension in the about-to-pop bubble is changing, and thus the thickness changes, and thus the colour? You have prompted a whole train of thoughts here...
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Glad you like it
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wunderbar wenn jemand kreativ ideen umsetzt und dabei handwerklich gut arbeitet
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Erst jetzt registriert! Vielen Dank, das freut mich natΓΌrlich wenn man es so sieht!
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