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DrManticore [2007-11-27 00:43:27 +0000 UTC]
Another great one. You do facial expressions really well, and your subtle use of action realy helps create dramatic effect. My only criticism would be that you should probably check your spelling before you write out the text.
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LionheartXIII In reply to DrManticore [2007-11-27 20:30:43 +0000 UTC]
Spelling is not my strong point but i'm working at it.. thanks for the tip
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Biofoxx [2007-11-27 00:38:10 +0000 UTC]
woe ^^
IΒ΄ve just read the pages of your story ^^
It really looks nice \o/
hope you continue the story ^^ *curious XD*
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Biofoxx In reply to LionheartXIII [2007-11-27 23:32:46 +0000 UTC]
YouΒ΄re welcome \^^
Everytime you need.. ^^
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