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In the crisp mountain airDeep inside the forest
The dawn is breaking free
From the nighttime sky
As the dusk dies away.
But up in the Colorado Rockies
There is no individual
That cares in this settlement,
For there is no one here.
The town that once
Was a thriving community
Is no more,
No more people live here.
The elk and also the deer
Far back into the forest
Are the residents now
Who dwell at peace
Free from the fear of town people.
The wind blows gently,
From the one end to the other end
Of the formerly vibrant streets
That is now forever only animated
With the phantasms of long-ago past
And the once upon a time flourishing stores.
The long ago memories are over
And done with for all time,
Never to return to
Living consciousness again
Forgotten by time in the forest.
They are like the ghosts
That is whirling after a gust
Of wind in the dusty streets
Or stay behind buried
In the cemetery plots.
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Comments: 11
Corvidae65 [2012-02-27 03:33:27 +0000 UTC]
Excellent! I love poems with a story behind them. This reminds me very much of a song C.W. McCall did way back in the 70's called 'Aurora Borealis' [link] Not exactly the same but in the same vein. He lives in Ouray, Colorado (real name is Bill Fries)
Well done
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Anchor-Jealousy-On [2011-06-09 20:22:00 +0000 UTC]
amazing, this planted vivid visuals in my mind, great job!
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lit360 In reply to Anchor-Jealousy-On [2011-06-09 20:55:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. I try to.
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wolfdude186 [2011-06-07 21:15:17 +0000 UTC]
Love this, reminds me of Rye, CO... except that town is still alive.
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lit360 In reply to wolfdude186 [2011-06-07 22:26:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much. I have noticed several "ghost towns" that still had a small population in them and the town looked the same since the 1800's.
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kallia-goldenwings [2011-06-07 20:14:07 +0000 UTC]
I just love the imagery it brings one there
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lit360 In reply to kallia-goldenwings [2011-06-07 20:51:48 +0000 UTC]
I thank you very much for the kind feedback, I really do appreciate it. I kind of write stories but in poem form.
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