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Published: 2003-09-14 17:23:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 6171; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 1057
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He's staring at meThe man from the movie poster
And the lights are shining through my eyes
Mischief. Mayhem. Soap
It reads me like the caution label
On this bottle of Asprin
No matter where I go his eyes are there
And they are almost like yours
Filled with haunting sighs of relief
Mishchief. Mayhem. Soap
It speaks to me like the words
Of my kindergarden play
Even between closed eyes I vision that face
Mocking my cries to a pillow named "why"
Mischief. Mayhem. Soap
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Comments: 96
one of the best fight club fan art deviations i've viewed.
very impressive.
"in tyler we trust"
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That will always be one of my fav movies. Have you ever read the book, its fucking great? I like that, you wrote that a year ago. Your brother did a great job on the art.
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so funny and nice...who'se jack supposed to be anwyay?
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i really love how you've managed to turn something like a movie poster (which happens to be from one of my favorite movies, starring the best actor in my opinion of all existence) into a very odd, demented little poem; an odd, demented, FANTASTIC little poem. thanx as always for sharing my friend, i hope to see more in the future, so take care hun, i appreciate it,
namaste (the god in me honors the god in you)-p.
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i dont know. it seems random and sporadic. you could definitely give greater detail. its got potential. i'm not downing you or nothing i just don't get any picture from it.
but speaking of picture, i like the pic at the top. fight club was one of those movies that really hit me hard. you see, i have schizophrenia too. not the same type as the guy in the movie but i'm schizo.
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Awsome work! This is the first poem i've read in a while thats really painted me a picture.... very nice
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awww thanks 
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"you are jacks sniggering revenge"
loved the film, this image has done well to bring back the memories
nice one
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the fear is there... the fear is there... the fear is there... the fear is there... why cant it stop
from this one i really got the sense of losing it
awesome poetry
and tell your brother he did a great job
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wow...that's awesome. i love that movie. and yes, "where is my mind?" at the end...was great....my favorite song and favorite band in my favorite movie. and this is a fav.
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amazing movie, amazing picture, and some great writing. very damn cool.
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Wow!
I love it!
especially the picture!
Really good work! Really!
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Nice poem, i loved it.
i've saw fight club many times, and i just finished to read it for the first time. the book is even better :dev3261493:
tell your bro he did a great job too !
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I think the only reason this achieved 18 +favs is because of the graphic, and because it's Fight Club. Your metaphors are jumbled together, and out of place. You jump from one idea to another without bridging the gap between them. It's hard to make sense all together as one piece of work. I'm even at a loss for a general theme of this. You go from talking about a man on a poster looking at you, to talking about a bottle of aspirin. I've read minimalistic poetry before, where you need to draw the lines to make a conclusion, but this is scribble.
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I like the colors and i really like the tagline. Haven't seen fightclub but that's a good line. Almost looks like a neo-nazi modern racism poster or something. Great work.
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I loved the soap bit. It kinda made me laugh. Congratulations on a great piece of work!
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fuck this is horrible. be original, make sense. and then we will talk.
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stunning/freakish poster. i likes your poem. nice rhythm.
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hmm, i guess it would be prudent to say, at least, that it's a good thing that poster isn't bugged. that would probably be the ultimate final straw,..to have your apartment bugged with a fight club poster. i mean if someone was listening, recording what you do, and the device they used to track you was hidden behind those eyes, ....that gives me the creeps. but this is how you've inspired me, all the same.
Nice feeling
I like.
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the poem is alright... really great idea though.
anything fight club automatically gets a thumbs up in my book. :] gj.
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Regardless of what other ass-holes think, good-job, the image helps as well.
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Quite good! Fightclub is an excellent and provocitive movie
not to mention the preview picture is kool in itself!
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PS your image at the top is very eye catching, very very well done on that.
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i like how you refer to the poster, but it seems as that if you had personnified the poster more, given it a malevolence and more violence in the descriptions then the poem could be stronger. at the moment the poem feels abit weak, as i never really got a sense of forboding from the poem, but rather the reaction of the 'voice of the poem' gives the impression. so maybe focus ont he poster rather than the reaction?
hope that helps.
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Don't you hate it when you sit there at like 1 a.m freakin out and pratically twitching because posters are staring at you and just won't stop? Yeah me too lol. Anyway, this is a nice little poem you've got here. Me likes it mucho much!
Eh, I think I might fave it ... Yeah what the Hell, I'm gonna fave it
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This is pretty out there. But I like it's eccentricities. It might've been better if you hadn't told us why you wrote it. It's abstract, after all. Let us figure it out
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i liked the line:
"Mischief.Mayhem.Soap"
it gave it a nice rhythm..like a cadence....anyways,good job!
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fightclub is genius, as is this poem..its too bad it had to sit and wait a year before it finally got to shine.
great job
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I like the poem but I realy like the art, its cool
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I'm a sucker for anything to do with fight club, Great poem and the poster kicks
Cheers
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I love how you can turn something as simple as being freaked out by a poster into a great poem like this. I admire poets that can turn a minor even into a major poem. Great work, great art.
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