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MERCY- hold your flamming please^^' Yes I know occ's pairing with game characters are LAME, but at the very least I tried to make this one a special case- (if only barely >_>', plus they're not actually a pairing)This isn't real Riku.
The Riku you see here is a figment this pictomancer has kept inside her own mind/heart ( it's hard to tell in the KH universe which is which isn't it?) to keep her company back home on earth. She lived an isolated life.
Kids come up with coping mechanisms for various reasons, this was simply hers, a variation of the age old ' Imaginary friend.'
This figment did what was needed: listened to her problems, insecurities: and was there inside her mind when things got scary and violent. Someone needed to tend to her mental wounds, and this was his job.
NOW- flash forward to the timeline of the RP itself.
She's in the Kingdom Hearts world for real, working along side a team of survivors to save the universe from Darkness.
And she's met the REAL Riku.
Reality is always different from fiction.
This protagonist eventually begins to realize more she gets to know him, the less and less easy it is to see the figment in her dream world.
The figment Riku is fading away, as his creator interacts with the real one more and more.
It's hard to say if the real one will ever be as close to her as this figment was. Will he care, or even be her friend?
I wanted to explore the gravity of reality, when things you used to believe are torn away. ( sort of a coming of age story I guess)
She had a conversation with another figment who's closer to her in terms of personality symmetry.
Part of the conversation was this...
' It's easy when you've never met someone, or spoke to them, to pretend they care about what happens to you.'
' But then if by some cruel twist of fate you meet them... it's a real reality check to understand they're like a blank slate.
They don't know you at all. You're a complete stranger, and they could care less.'
So this girl weeps as slowly, little by little, she's losing her best friend... to reality itself.
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Comments: 46
Lithiel In reply to earthgoddess11 [2012-12-30 13:07:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. Those typos can be a pain sometimes.XD
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ku-kiwi [2010-10-12 09:02:34 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely amazing! The picture itself tells a sad story all on it's on. But the background only enhances it and gives it life.
If it's a fiction or is going to become one...I'd defiantly read it all the way!!
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Lithiel In reply to ku-kiwi [2013-02-18 06:08:22 +0000 UTC]
It's just a illustration from an rp. ^^"
I'm glad you like the back story.
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konatachanizhilarous [2010-10-09 21:34:49 +0000 UTC]
how sad.....
(is this a fanfic? if so you're good!^^)
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Lithiel In reply to konatachanizhilarous [2011-07-24 21:18:53 +0000 UTC]
It's actually an a rp guild.XD
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konatachanizhilarous In reply to Lithiel [2011-08-02 05:15:28 +0000 UTC]
Really? That's cool!
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SkylaRose [2010-10-09 19:41:25 +0000 UTC]
OMG! This is just amazing *pours love and fave's all over this picture*
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Riku-of-Darkness [2010-10-09 18:02:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow. I must say, you are a creative and emotionally charged writer. What a fantastic, and saddening, concept you have created for this fandom. Especially with what we know about memories being altered and the heart being a fickle thing.
Bravo.
My only irk is that you need to work on your spelling. It will make your writing really shine.
Do you have more of this story somewhere? ^-^
And CanonOC pairings are awesome!!
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Lithiel In reply to Riku-of-Darkness [2013-02-18 06:12:36 +0000 UTC]
I've cleaned it up some now, hope it's better. Spelling and grammar are something I consistently tackle with. Thank GOD for the spell check in firefox/Chrome
All in all the rp is very fun and very in depth. the experimentation with philosophies and relationships was very enriching and is STILL on going.
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Riku-of-Darkness In reply to Lithiel [2013-07-03 15:58:08 +0000 UTC]
Just one thing:
Loose is the opposite of tight. When you are loosing something, you are causing it to be less tight or to become loose.
Lose is the spelling you want. "She is losing her best friend."
(Sorry, this typo always throws me out of the mood of the story lol). Spell check isn't perfect. ^_~
But you've done and excellent job and I still want to devour this psychological epic you are creating.
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Lithiel In reply to Riku-of-Darkness [2013-07-29 09:51:46 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! thanks for catching that part for me.Β
As someone who's mind misses and reverses letters- often switching words for others, it's an annoying thing I just got to live with, so it's very kind of people to point that stuff out and in a non-patronizingΒ sort of way.Β
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Riku-of-Darkness In reply to Lithiel [2013-07-29 13:10:35 +0000 UTC]
*hug* You're welcome. As a note though, lose/loose is one of the most common mistakes made in writing by a lot of people, so don't blame yourself too much.
I think it is because "choose" sounds similar to "lose," so people assume the spelling is the same. Unfortunately, this is not the case. It has something to do with the phonetics, as "ch" being two letters somehow changes things (though I cannot remember the exact rule).
However, if you can remember the difference, your writing will be stronger. It is a common mistake but it's a big atmosphere changer.
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Loralata [2010-10-09 14:30:28 +0000 UTC]
Aw this is so beautiful and such a touching story!
Also, occ's pairing with game characters aren't LAME! Their awesome!
Very nice drawing!
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xSkyeCrystalx [2010-09-16 00:50:49 +0000 UTC]
Your art is beautiful. And your story... Well, even if it's sad... It's very touching, yes, it touches my heart very much...~
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Lithiel In reply to xSkyeCrystalx [2010-09-28 00:28:09 +0000 UTC]
awww, glad you like it. XD I'll be honest- drawing canons was something I've been very cautious about.
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jackie-marie95 [2009-12-17 03:19:27 +0000 UTC]
OMGZZ!!!! i luv this pic and kingdom hearts!! <3 naminexroxas!!!!
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ShamanQueenRaine [2009-03-02 02:45:02 +0000 UTC]
What a fantastic story behind this pic! I almost wish she was a real character...!
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onlyforyou345 [2008-12-01 02:47:49 +0000 UTC]
YAY!! LOVES YOUR WORK. TIS SOOOOO................pretty ^_^
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BPurg [2008-11-16 05:25:36 +0000 UTC]
That is a very beautiful concept you wrote, beautiful, sad and true in some forms.
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Whitefang-7 [2008-09-13 02:26:12 +0000 UTC]
So this is part of story your from????
Well, wherever you got the idea, for the pic and the reason behind it, I love it!!!! It's great!!!! As always great job, Enji! ^-^
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Lithiel In reply to Whitefang-7 [2008-11-16 22:46:55 +0000 UTC]
The name of the group is called "Heartfelt Adventure" in another guild. So far the plot is moving slowly.. but it's progressing.
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Whitefang-7 In reply to Lithiel [2008-11-17 03:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Isn't it like that in all guilds though??? lol XD
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DarkWitchPixy [2008-09-12 14:01:58 +0000 UTC]
Reading your artist comments to this pic made my eyes tear, that's no easy feet... Beautiful picture and a touching background. Excellent work.
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rainbowd00dles [2008-09-12 08:11:19 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing, i love how much detail there is in it and the story behind it is beautiful is it for a real fanfiction or is it just a one off side story cos if its for a fanfiction i wanna read it. love ur work XD
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Lithiel In reply to rainbowd00dles [2008-11-16 22:47:28 +0000 UTC]
It's actually an rp in a guild.^__^
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LovelyLadyGray [2008-09-12 03:38:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm all for stopping abuse. A really wonderful job on both of these characters. I'm not a big fan of Kingdom Hearts, but I like this absolutely gorgeous digital painting enough to it. There's something about this pic that the girl will find the strength and the will to come through. The story is a very interesting idea and all of my OCs are like real people even though they are a part of my vast imagination.
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sam92088 [2008-09-12 02:01:32 +0000 UTC]
I like the story behind it alot, and the picture is so soft and smooth. Great work
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KingdomInc [2008-09-12 00:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Fantastic picture, and the entry about the girl was really something. I enjoyed reading it. It's sad, but keeps you thinking that there still may be hope for her.
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Lithiel In reply to KingdomInc [2013-02-18 06:13:54 +0000 UTC]
We shall see! It's been years since the rp started and only 7 days have passed in the rp's time. XD it's nuts!
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josesephiroth [2008-09-11 20:21:58 +0000 UTC]
beautefull pic by the way, i am suffering X3 your the best rper ever
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josesephiroth [2008-09-11 20:20:57 +0000 UTC]
D: please come in early this friday, i come in 4:18 pm to the house frome school and i miss you friend, i so whana rp X3 and this pics you done make me even more whanting to rp with ya, i whander if you finished the pic of kai
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rhaeigan [2008-09-11 17:46:08 +0000 UTC]
this picture is really beautiful!
great job on this
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Lithiel In reply to renataisacrazychick [2008-09-11 17:13:24 +0000 UTC]
*gives first post cookie*
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renataisacrazychick In reply to Lithiel [2008-09-12 20:19:38 +0000 UTC]
Thnak you i eats it
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