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LiyuConberma β Commission for MariaTheHedgehoge (part 2)
Published: 2014-02-26 01:32:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 68043; Favourites: 1431; Downloads: 87
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COMMISSION FORThe OC is Abis and his creator is . I have finished this for a while, but I want to submit my commission in order. ^^'
There's another commission for her:Β
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Drawn by me
OC (Abis) owned by
Shadow the Hedgehog belongs to
Thanks for the commission!
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I'll laugh for a long time because of this πππ
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As always your comics look awesome! Though there's something i don't like in the 2 panel (the last part in the first page). Maybe its the background, but its seem kinda empty and simple. And Shadow is lack detail in comparison with what we know you can do. He looks.. flat. His mouth it missing (know its on purpose) and the main spine is crooked. (Sorry for been so picky and meticulous)
A really funny and lovely idea. And the little hedgehog is adorable.
Awesome that we never get to know who the mom is, so EVERYONE CAN LOVE IT!!
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Oh, quite frankly, I agree with you, because the last time I colored it, I found it quite flat. But it was too late to correct then. Although I was surprised that many people like it. ^^
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I love it! And dont worry. Dont really think many people are paying attention to that '^w^ Keep the awesome work!! And i love your new icon (though its not that new XD)
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Okay, this was one of the first things I looked at in your profile, and I absolutely have to say I can't think of a way to improve on this. Shad polishing the (Chaos?) Emerald is a perfect touch to the pages, making the conversation more, for instance, "homely." Defiantly copying Shads in the last panel. From Sonic's eyes, I can tell that heads are going to ROLL. But, on and on, you did a very good job. The lighting is VERY nice, and I'm loving the face of (okay, I'm sorry but I have no idea what the kid's name is) Shadow, Jr. in panel 4. Keep it up!!
-Jack F. Schafman
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I absolutely love the color the little storyline to this. I love the idea for the commission. I, in my opinion, would have never of thought this up. Kudos to you and the deviant who wanted this done. I loved you're technique for this as well. It reminds of the Archie comics technique as well as your own. The impact was when I immediately clicked on your gallery! It was the first thing my eyes were attracted to with the words and bright, dark, and cute colors. All the black colors, in my opinion, contrasted well to me with the humorous and cute story line. I can't wait for more of your work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
-Aster R. Frey
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First critique ever!!
Okay, I'm not a profi on that, but I really like it.
It's funny! Just sad, that things like that excist a Million times in the Internet...
I think it's quiet cute, how that little guy asks so many questions, making one to be the most embarrasing to answer. XD
I also think that you did well on the poses. But something that bothers me is, that the room, they are in, seems pretty empty. You could have put some other furniture or other objekts in it.
I apologise for my bad english. (I'm german)
And again: I'm not a profi in writing critiques and I'm not as accurate in looking at the Picture a other artists:
After all it's a great Picture! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Oh my dear god, that's SO awesome!! XD
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Well if sonic really wants chest fur he can have my brother's chest hair xD he doesn't like his chest hair he rather have non hair in his chest xD
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And Then Sonic Beat The Crap Out Of Shadow
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Sonic doesn't have his because he shaves his arms and chest
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Hehe, I like Sonicβs face at the end panel from the right side.Β Β
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The mother is Maria The Hedgehog
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i don't think sonic will be getting one anytime soon XD
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This is like one the smartest ways to make a character cute.
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SNNNRRRRKKKPFFTAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHA! Too funny! XD
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Lol sonic got BURNED by a kid XDΒ
anyway,good job~
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Awe poor Sonic! xD lmao I'm done!!!! >w<
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Gosh, I couldn't resist coming back to read this! 
I actually believe it's what inspired a story I had started some time back. It was a story about my version of Shadow and his son. Maybe I'll go back and work on it again at some point, because it really is cute. Probably not as cute as this, but cute.
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"when will uncle Sonic get his?"
XD Never! he will Always be little kid, his body decides toΒ develop without him!
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