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Published: 2014-08-08 04:25:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 902; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 3
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Description Jasmine Vex wandered through the palm grove that surrounded the small oasis. In her hand she carried a woven basket, half full of dates she had picked. Jasmine was lucky in a way. Her role as the Pharaoh's personal chef allowed her a degree of freedom to do what was necessary to fulfill her tasks. However, despite being a 'free-slave', she still had certain restrictions. The tall dark asp guard that shadowed her movements was proof of that. It was the guard's duty to make sure she didn't try to run away. The guard, Kumult, paused and smiled at her. Out of all the Pharaoh's guards, he had always been the one who showed the most kindness and respect to the slaves. Jasmine smiled back at him and continued her harvest. She paused by a small palm and looked up. It bore a rich cluster of dates, and the cobra reached up to pick them. Suddenly a sharp pain lanced down her back, causing Jasmine to gasp and drop her basket. Just as she dropped to her knees, a strong pair of hands gripped her arms from behind, supporting her, and Kumult's deep voice spoke out.
"What happened?"
Jasmine shook her head.
"It's nothing," she replied. "I'm alright."
Kumult frowned, seeing through her lie.
"It's bothering you again, isn't it?" he hissed.
Before Jasmine could reply, Kumult undid her robe, slipping it from her shoulders to reveal the ugly scar that marred her back. Gently he traced a finger along the wound.
"You haven't been moisturizing it, have you?" Kumult said. "You need to keep rubbing salve into it to make sure the scar tissue remains supple."
Kumult removed a small clay jar he kept on his belt and scooped out a glob of ointment, massaging it into the scar on Jasmine's back. Once he was finished, the asp held onto her shoulders in an almost tender way.
"Jasmine," he hissed, breaking protocol by using her first name. "I'm sorry."
The scar the cobra bore was a source of shame for the guard. It had been Kumult who was chosen to inflict the punishment on her that wounded her so. Jasmine twisted in his grip, turning around to face him. She pulled up her robe, slipping it back into place, and smiled softly.
"For what?" she asked.
"For the pain I caused you."
Jasmine blushed slightly at Kumult's concern. To have a palace guard worry about her, a lowly slave, was uncommon.
"Do not worry yourself," Jasmine said. "It is only pain of the flesh. And that is something I can endure."
"But I should have done something," Kumult contended. "I could have refused."
"And then what?" Jasmine retorted. "You would have been stripped of your position, and flogged. And I would still have been punished for my crimes."
Jasmine pulled free from Kumult's arms, and picked up her basket.
"My dear, Kumult," Jasmine said softly. "You are a kind, gentle man, but you are far to hard on yourself. I forgave you a long time ago. It is time you forgave yourself."
With that, Jasmine headed of to gather up more dates, leaving the asp alone with his thoughts. He watched as Jasmine worked, and smiled. Her capacity for forgiveness was amazing to behold. She was truly a gift from the Gods...


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Kumult belongs to (if he wants) and I

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lizardman22 In reply to ??? [2014-08-08 12:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Originally I was trying to work something out for Alpha, but couldnt quite get it set in my mind. This little story however, I had the basics for, for a while now (that she has a close relationship/friendship with the guard who whipped her). It just seemed to snap firmly into place the other day.

Like I said in the description, im more than happy to share Kumult with you, if you think you can use him

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sonicinterface In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 13:07:48 +0000 UTC]

I'll keep that in mind.

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lizardman22 In reply to sonicinterface [2014-08-08 13:41:55 +0000 UTC]

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sonicinterface In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 15:58:48 +0000 UTC]

I guess it's time to think about our next collab.

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lizardman22 In reply to sonicinterface [2014-08-08 23:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Sure. What did you have in mind, mate?

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sonicinterface In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 23:41:09 +0000 UTC]

...I'm still deciding.Β  I've got a few different ideas.Β  When I've got it, I'll send you a note.

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lizardman22 In reply to sonicinterface [2014-08-08 23:47:26 +0000 UTC]

Sure mate

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sonicinterface In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-09 00:26:22 +0000 UTC]

On a side note, I think Kumult was tasked with punishing Jasmine specifically because he was the nicest of the guards.Β  The Pharaoh probably wanted to use the opportunity to tarnish his positive reputation in the slaves' eyes, as well as punish him for his mercy by putting an innocent's blood on his hands.

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lizardman22 In reply to sonicinterface [2014-08-09 23:04:04 +0000 UTC]

fantastic
i'm glad that seeped through. it was one of the ideas/plots that i had in mind. The fact that he is far too kind to the slaves at times is one of the reasons that Kumult was selected to perform jasmine's punishment. and in a way it has worked. he still feels that guilt for harming jasmine, and i suspect some of the less trusting slaves now see him in a different light. But at the same time, jasmine's capacity for forgiveness (Influenced by her ability to see the goodness/trustworthiness in others) has only made him kinder (Which is why he carries the salve pot for jasmine's scar)

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sonicinterface In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-09 23:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Would you have thought things out this far if not for my influence?

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lizardman22 In reply to sonicinterface [2014-08-10 04:09:20 +0000 UTC]

quite possibly not, Mate

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CNSH-Society [2014-08-08 06:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Woooow!

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lizardman22 In reply to CNSH-Society [2014-08-08 06:12:11 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

And thanks for the fave

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CNSH-Society In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 08:31:50 +0000 UTC]

No proooob!

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TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 06:01:17 +0000 UTC]

I sense a love interest! XD

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 06:12:26 +0000 UTC]

maybe. i never really thought about that.

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 06:19:07 +0000 UTC]

I can sense it...XD

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 06:21:23 +0000 UTC]

I may have to talk to interface about it

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 06:28:59 +0000 UTC]

I know XD

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 06:42:02 +0000 UTC]

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 06:43:18 +0000 UTC]

Love is in the air! XD

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 06:46:47 +0000 UTC]

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 06:58:47 +0000 UTC]

I feel like kissing someone! How about you Kiara?

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 07:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Kiara: what!? no way!

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 07:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Come on! Pucker up!

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 07:38:18 +0000 UTC]

kiara: no!

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 07:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes!

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 07:43:29 +0000 UTC]

(kiara tries to walk away)

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 07:44:11 +0000 UTC]

(I get in front of her) Do it!

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 07:49:20 +0000 UTC]

kiara: NO!

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 07:59:18 +0000 UTC]

That's an order!

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-08 10:03:59 +0000 UTC]

kiara: as if I'll follow those orders

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-08 16:30:42 +0000 UTC]

You must.

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-14 04:17:43 +0000 UTC]

kiara: No!

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-14 04:22:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't give a shit if you refuse. An order is an order.

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-15 02:44:10 +0000 UTC]

Kiara: bah...

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-15 06:09:09 +0000 UTC]

Do it.

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-17 05:01:06 +0000 UTC]

Kiara: No!

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-17 05:16:12 +0000 UTC]

You're violating my command.

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-22 04:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Kiara: You don't command me

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-22 04:22:20 +0000 UTC]

Uh. Yes I can.

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-08-30 08:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Kiara: i seriously doubt that

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-08-30 14:34:51 +0000 UTC]

I could care less about your doubts.

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-09-07 05:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Kiara: Humph

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-09-07 06:02:39 +0000 UTC]

Follow my commands and lock lips with me!

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-09-10 06:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Kiara": no. (Grumbles) i do not kiss...

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-09-10 11:05:54 +0000 UTC]

You do now.

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-09-12 10:21:27 +0000 UTC]

kiara: bah...

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TheTitanOfGeek In reply to lizardman22 [2014-09-12 11:33:16 +0000 UTC]

Hurry up and lock lips.

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lizardman22 In reply to TheTitanOfGeek [2014-09-21 05:23:23 +0000 UTC]

kiara: no...

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