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The 14th Assault Platoon weaved its way through the woods. Suddenly Technical Specialist Shackler paused as he heard the scream of an inbound shell."INCOMING!!!"
The members of the 14th responded to his warning, diving for cover amongst the forest dead fall. Only the Captain, Kiara-Ne remained standing. Shackler watched as she drew her gun and used the advanced tracking systems in her bionic eye to sight and lock onto the shell. She fired two shots, and the shell detonated. Shackler reacted, stepping in front of the Captain, and covered them both with his long coat. Shrapnel whistled past, and those pieces that hit were stopped by the special Kevlar weave in the coat. Shackler and Kiara-Ne braced against each other as the shock wave passed over them, and then Shackler stepped aside, drawing his own gun. Shoulder to shoulder, the two soldiers started to fire upon the enemy, and the rest of the 14th rose up, adding their own firepower. It was a smooth battlefield ballet, created by the discipline and trust the platoon had in each other. Under the assault, the enemy were forced to momentarily retreat into cover. Kiara-Ne took stock of the situation and began to issue orders.
"Cyclan! Seenas! Zippa! Push forward and hit their center line. Ali-Co! Miki-Ce! Kiera! Angle right and take their flank!"
The troopers acknowledged and set off on their missions. Kiara-Ne turned and addressed the 14th's communications officer, Lieutenant Gien-Nu.
"Contact Syntar and find out his status."
Gien-Nu nodded and activated the powerful communications array in her bionic dreadlock as she got in touch with the platoon's sniper.
"Syntar reports he is in position and awaiting orders."
Kiara-Ne smiled.
"Tell him, the word is given. Target enemy officers. Afterward, contact Deimos and get him to bring up our armoured division. Wait for him here, and coordinate our movements from the command APC."
Gien-Nu set about carrying out her orders.
"That still leaves us, Ma'am," Shackler said.
Kiara-Ne gave him a sadistic smile.
"That artillery fire came from the left," she told him. "I was thinking you and I should be able to take it, and then turn it back on the enemy."
Shackler gave a short laugh.
"Sounds like fun, Ma'am."
Kiara-Ne paced around the enemy command bunker. The spear head created by the 14th Assault Platoon had allowed the rest of the Dark Egg Legion to carry the day. In one corner of the bunker, Gien-Nu sat at a computer bank, gathering incoming reports, and coordinating the final clean up with Shackler. In the center of the room, knelt the enemy commander, flanked by Cyclan and Zippa. The man didn't know when he was beaten, and had been ranting the whole time. Not that it bothered Kiara-Ne. He would be turned over to Intelligence and become their problem soon. She gave a nod to Cyclan, and he and Zippa grabbed the commander to drag him out of the room.
"This is outrageous!" he protested. "Just who do you people think you are?"
Cyclan thumped him across the back of the head to shut him up. The last thing the enemy officer heard as he faded into unconsciousness was Captain Kiara-Ne's reply, her bionic eye blazing brightly as she stared into his soul.
"We are Legion!"
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Gien-Nu belongs to
Zippa and Kiera belong to
Syntar and the Dark Egg Legion belong to SEGA/Archie comics.
Cyclan, Ali-Co, Miki-Ce, Shackler, Deimos, Seenas and the 14th Assault Platoon belong to
Kiara-Ne is my fan/original character.
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Comments: 44
lizardman22 In reply to GhostlyPhantazy [2012-07-06 02:12:06 +0000 UTC]
It's some of the members of the 14th Assault Platoon, Dark Egg Legion.
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bawls34 [2012-03-31 18:12:38 +0000 UTC]
pretty awesome, i love when you write about the 14th's exploits, it always turns out well!
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lizardman22 In reply to bawls34 [2012-04-01 06:28:48 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
And thanks for the fave too.
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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2012-02-09 05:12:52 +0000 UTC]
Just a generic enemy.
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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-09 11:24:49 +0000 UTC]
ok. (oh and I met somone on SFW you might like to meet: [link] (I like her charecters and would want her on DA, I even made a group for her charecters: [link] but she does not want to be on here, can you help me pursuade her?)
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JaredtheFox92 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-10 02:18:52 +0000 UTC]
maybe just rp with her and if you have the time offer her a request (lets not force her, I like her characters and think she would be at home her)
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Gigantlover20 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-11 04:31:18 +0000 UTC]
your welcome.
Esca: *nearby air forces are heading towards the group and he uses his power to shoot lightning at the airships downing them*
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lizardman22 In reply to Gigantlover20 [2012-02-12 08:06:27 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: Well done, Esca.
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Gigantlover20 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-12 14:13:32 +0000 UTC]
Esca: thanks mom. (its his nickname for her)
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lizardman22 In reply to Gigantlover20 [2012-02-16 06:47:07 +0000 UTC]
kiara-Ne: Now, let's make sure there are no survivors...
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Gigantlover20 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-17 00:05:24 +0000 UTC]
Esca: *energy is crackling in his finger tips* yes mom.
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lizardman22 In reply to Gigantlover20 [2012-02-17 03:47:19 +0000 UTC]
(The head over to the wreckage)
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Gigantlover20 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-17 03:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Survivor: you monsters..... not one of you deserves to live......
Esca: But we that are strong dictate these worlds. You'd do well to remember that! *fires a stream of white energy killing the man*
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Gigantlover20 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-17 05:11:58 +0000 UTC]
Esca: Well i need to show im willing and always going to serve right?
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lizardman22 In reply to Gigantlover20 [2012-02-18 00:14:55 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-ne (Smiles and cups his chin): You will be a fine soldier when you grow up.
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Gigantlover20 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-19 02:08:17 +0000 UTC]
Esca: *smiles* And i hope it so.
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Gigantlover20 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-19 21:26:19 +0000 UTC]
Esca: *smiles as well*
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lizardman22 In reply to Gigantlover20 [2012-02-24 02:18:03 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: Now, let's see what other enemies we can find...
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lizardman22 In reply to Gigantlover20 [2012-02-24 08:32:00 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: Good boy. Now, let's test your training... Where shall we look?
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Gigantlover20 In reply to lizardman22 [2012-02-25 04:05:33 +0000 UTC]
Esca: *using his bionic eye he looks for more targets* cowards... *points to the retreating force*
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lizardman22 In reply to Gigantlover20 [2012-02-25 05:24:49 +0000 UTC]
Kiara-Ne: Easy now Child. We will get our chance to show them our might.
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Web-Disaster [2012-02-07 12:12:06 +0000 UTC]
"Sir, yes sir!"
"Locked and Loaded!"
"We will bury them!"
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lizardman22 In reply to Web-Disaster [2012-02-09 05:16:16 +0000 UTC]
"Semper Fi"
I tried to give it a real 'badass'/'epic' feel.
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lizardman22 In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2012-02-09 05:14:24 +0000 UTC]
It does look like one, but hey... Who doesn't like AK-47's
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Web-Disaster In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2012-02-07 11:11:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm gonna make it Gien-Nu's signature weapon. Like Amy's hammer and Flare's Scythe.
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JaredtheFox92 In reply to Web-Disaster [2012-02-07 12:54:24 +0000 UTC]
so she automaticly pulls out a AK-47 out of thin air? XD (does it have unlimited ammo?)
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Web-Disaster In reply to JaredtheFox92 [2012-02-07 13:00:26 +0000 UTC]
No no. She carries it on her back when not using it, She also has to regularly reload it, but a bottomless clip might be cool.
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