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Lockpick β€” Graveside Contemplations
Published: 2004-05-14 02:02:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 382; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 20
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Description I stand alone at the gravesite of a friend.

Through my grief knowing the pain will never end.

All that is left of a lifetime of pain,

Knowing those lost can't be brought back again.



"Together forever" was the promise we made.

Through heartbreak and trial that was all we prayed.

Together forever through the blackness of night,

Through stromy weather to the end of the fight.



I kept my promise, loyal and true.

Alas but the same could not be said of you.

You left when you'd reached your sanity's end

leaving only a note saying "I'm sorry old friend."



You left never knowing how sad I would be.

Your only thought was: 'No one cares for me.'

Then with a quick slash and a splatter of blood,

You ended your life inΒ Β your deathbed of mud.



I'll never forget you, I'll never forgive

You left me with nothing, how can I live?

I always loved you, I always cared.

If you'd stopped to notice, your life would have been spared



I cried alone where nobody could hear

Never knowing I sobbed, never seeing my tears.

Around others I stood proud and tall.

"Never slip," You told me. "Never fail, never fall."



Even though you're gone, you still influence me.

I still live by your words, however strange they may be.

Well, so long old friend, for your soul I will pray.

I leave to endure another day.
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Comments: 55

Lockpick In reply to ??? [2004-09-12 02:46:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Aladdin-Sane [2004-07-21 16:40:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice, well told narrative. Good shift of emotion through the piece.

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Lockpick In reply to Aladdin-Sane [2004-07-21 18:23:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much
^_^

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bellabarolo [2004-07-21 06:05:35 +0000 UTC]

you bring back haunting memories - pain never forgets and certainly doesn't go away. *very* evocative, thank you!

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Lockpick In reply to bellabarolo [2004-07-21 16:34:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!! also, thanks for fave-ing this
^_^

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Lockpick In reply to Lockpick [2004-07-24 01:41:57 +0000 UTC]

yay!! i feel luved!!!

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bellabarolo In reply to Lockpick [2004-07-23 05:34:43 +0000 UTC]

you betcha. your stuff is too cool - pure artistry.

~bb

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bellabarolo In reply to bellabarolo [2004-07-27 06:37:28 +0000 UTC]

hearts 'n roses at ya - sincerely.



!! I can't wait to get through this comment stuff to get to your page!!

~bb

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Lockpick In reply to bellabarolo [2004-07-24 02:00:01 +0000 UTC]

i feel luved!!
^_~

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BishiLover16 [2004-06-29 15:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow! That was so deep You should submit that to a publisher or something.

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Lockpick In reply to BishiLover16 [2004-06-29 19:21:12 +0000 UTC]

^_____________^ thank you!!!!!
i might send it to get published, that's a good idea!

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NSV [2004-06-14 01:50:58 +0000 UTC]

woa that so sad

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:02:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks much ^_~

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Yw ^_^

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:05:32 +0000 UTC]

:eace sign::

^____________________________^

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:08:22 +0000 UTC]

^_^ oh and ty for adding me to favourites made me happy ^_^

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:13:07 +0000 UTC]


glad it did
^_^

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:15:30 +0000 UTC]

lol ^_^

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:22:43 +0000 UTC]

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:26:33 +0000 UTC]

lol nice emotion

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:27:21 +0000 UTC]

aren't they phun??




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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:31:42 +0000 UTC]

lol duno O.o poking one is funi O.o

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:34:44 +0000 UTC]






ing is good for bad mood days, or for everyday use
i choose the second option!!!

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:40:29 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:41:44 +0000 UTC]

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:46:10 +0000 UTC]

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:47:35 +0000 UTC]

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:51:04 +0000 UTC]

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:53:04 +0000 UTC]

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 02:55:17 +0000 UTC]

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:58:58 +0000 UTC]

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 03:02:37 +0000 UTC]

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 03:04:05 +0000 UTC]


gotta go, i have to work at vacation bible school tomorrow


g'night

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 03:06:03 +0000 UTC]

night lol ^_^

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 17:45:05 +0000 UTC]

good morning vietnam!!

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-15 04:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Good morning lol...well afternoon here O.o

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-15 18:02:47 +0000 UTC]

afternoon now too

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-16 04:14:20 +0000 UTC]

lol same here

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-16 04:18:30 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-16 04:20:55 +0000 UTC]

anywho i g2g i'll bbl ^_^

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-16 04:22:44 +0000 UTC]

toodles

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 02:57:51 +0000 UTC]


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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 03:00:24 +0000 UTC]

is that a cow sheep thing O.o

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 03:00:56 +0000 UTC]

yeup

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-14 03:04:47 +0000 UTC]

lol fish

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-14 17:49:44 +0000 UTC]




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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-15 04:20:54 +0000 UTC]

mwahahahaha

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-15 18:03:01 +0000 UTC]

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NSV In reply to Lockpick [2004-06-16 04:15:18 +0000 UTC]

gotta love the evil laughing face

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Lockpick In reply to NSV [2004-06-16 04:22:38 +0000 UTC]

yeup!!!

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