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lokiisawesomest — The Curse of Candor Part 3
Published: 2015-05-28 02:07:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 8912; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 0
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Description It's an hour or two later before Cisco receives a call from Barry.  You try not to eavesdrop, but you can't help it.
"Hey, what's up?-  Yeah, okay....-  Alright-   I'll let her know-  Um....I don't think so- (Cisco glances at you) Okay, bye,"  Cisco clicks the off button on his phone, eyes still on you.
"So, Barry's at the station.  He found a weird case and needs help."
"Okay,"  you stand up quickly, searching for your purse.  Cisco holds it out to you and you take it sheepishly.  
"He also mentioned you aren't answering your phone."
"Oh,"  you frown.  You forgot about your phone.  You open your purse, digging through the contents, but it's not there.  Then you remember.  You slap your palm against your forehead, groaning.  
"I assume that's not a good thing,"  Cisco comments.  
"No....when I fell I dropped my phone.  I left it on the sidewalk,"  you sigh.  
"I can track it for you, if you want."  
You shake your head.  "Don't bother.  I'm pretty sure I broke it anyway."  You move to walk out but Cisco stops you.
"Hey...is something going on between you and Barry?"  he asks.
"Um.  No.  Why?"  You shift uncomfortably.
Cisco eyes you up and down.  "No reason."
"Okay, see ya,"  you rush out of the lab before the discussion becomes too awkward.
Once at the crime scene, you search for Barry.  It isn't hard; he stands taller than most of the crime unit there.
Then you see Detective Joe and you make your way over to him instead.  You just don't think you can act normal around Barry right now.
"Detective West.  You needed me?"  Out of the corner of your eye, you see Barry make his way over.
"You'll have to ask Barry,"  Joe nods to Barry.  "He's the one that called you."
You turn to Barry, staring at his shirt to avoid eye contact.  "What's up?"
"You haven't been answering my calls.  Are you mad at me?"  Barry asks quietly.  
"Sort of,"  you say, flushing red.  Why can't you seem to lie today?  
"Whoa,"  Joe holds up his hands.  "I can see this is personal and I'm gonna talk to some witnesses."  He walks away faster than you've ever seen.
Barry watches Joe leave, then turns back to you.  "What did I do?"
"You saw Iris,"  you bite your lip.  
Barry narrows his eyes.  "What-"
"Do you need me or not?"  you ask impatiently, really not wanting to get into this discussion because you can't seem to can it today.
Barry studies you a second longer before sighing.  "Yeah."  He runs his hand through his hair, pointing at a corner of the room.  "So, there's some barely half fingerprints.  You're the expert on those."
You hurry past Barry, eager to concentrate on something else.  He lets you work and it isn't long before you have samples to bring back to the lab.
You check in with Joe, then quickly head for the door.  You're almost there when Barry steps in your path.  
"Want to tell me what's going on?"  
"No,"  you say truthfully.
"(y/n).  Tell me,"  Barry glances around, then lowers his voice.  "Did Iris do something?"
You shake your head.
"Then what?  Is it me?"
You struggle to keep the words from spilling from your mouth, but something forces them out.
"It's me."
"What about you?"  
"I have feelings for you,"  you shut your eyes, praying you're dreaming and you did not just say that.  But when you open them, Barry is staring at you with wide eyes, speechless.  
Your own eyes widen and then water.  You quickly push past Barry, tears dripping down your cheeks.  He doesn't stop you.
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Comments: 44

Blinkingapple58 [2016-12-28 07:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Am I the only person who wants to kick Barry's ass at the moment and isn't asking for a 4th part? I admit, this story is awesome.

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Blinkingapple58 [2016-12-31 06:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you very much!!!!
lol and I'm sorry I made you want to kick Barry's ass

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lolo12321 [2016-09-07 05:34:26 +0000 UTC]

fourth part please

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lokiisawesomest In reply to lolo12321 [2016-09-08 05:49:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry I don't know if there will be one....

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NewWholockian [2016-04-02 21:33:22 +0000 UTC]

4th part!!!!! I am an addict!!! Soooo good!!!! ♡♡♡♡

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lokiisawesomest In reply to NewWholockian [2016-04-07 04:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!

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Lesori [2016-03-29 03:21:16 +0000 UTC]

it'd be awesome if you made an update on this story, i'd love to see the end of it. 

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Lesori [2016-04-07 04:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!! I know there seems to be a lot of people that like it. I will try to update!

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White-Flames [2016-03-28 22:17:54 +0000 UTC]

Please update this











pls

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lokiisawesomest In reply to White-Flames [2016-04-07 04:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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Lifeinsixwords [2015-12-04 22:38:55 +0000 UTC]

I need the 4th part to this! This is amazing!

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Lifeinsixwords [2015-12-05 05:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! Maybe I'll write one for Christmas

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Lifeinsixwords In reply to lokiisawesomest [2015-12-06 05:57:59 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome and that would be wonderful!

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Lifeinsixwords [2015-12-06 12:42:52 +0000 UTC]

<3

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Angelbaby456 [2015-10-30 16:24:03 +0000 UTC]

More please!!!!!

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Angelbaby456 [2015-10-31 05:36:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I certainly will as soon as I can

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Angelbaby456 In reply to lokiisawesomest [2015-10-31 12:26:18 +0000 UTC]

your welcome I look forward to reading it!!!!!

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Angelbaby456 [2015-10-31 16:23:58 +0000 UTC]

<3

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AlphaProwl [2015-10-17 20:42:08 +0000 UTC]

IF YOU DON'T CONTINUE THIS FRIGGING AMAZING STORY I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN WITH MY SUPER META HUMAN POWERS AND MAKE YOU WRITEEEE IIITTTTTTTT

Ps, great story!

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lokiisawesomest In reply to AlphaProwl [2015-10-18 08:05:47 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh😳😳😳😳😳 I guess I'd better!! Certainly knowing people love it will definitely help me make it a priority! I'm glad you like it so

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AlphaProwl In reply to lokiisawesomest [2015-10-22 05:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Like it? I FREAKIN LOVE IT

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lokiisawesomest In reply to AlphaProwl [2015-10-23 18:45:51 +0000 UTC]

😳 I'm speechless and humbled.

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darkshadowkhanqueen7 [2015-10-14 05:26:16 +0000 UTC]

U MUST MAKE MORE!!!!

Cant wait for the rest of the chpts

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lokiisawesomest In reply to darkshadowkhanqueen7 [2015-10-15 07:20:13 +0000 UTC]

Lol! I'm not sure if the story will be continued but I'm glad you liked it so much!

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darkshadowkhanqueen7 In reply to lokiisawesomest [2015-10-15 11:19:17 +0000 UTC]

but, you have to continue it. Its very good. Its fangtastic absolutely clawesome

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lokiisawesomest In reply to darkshadowkhanqueen7 [2015-10-16 05:27:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It is definitely on top of my list when I start writing again!

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darkshadowkhanqueen7 In reply to lokiisawesomest [2015-10-16 11:21:15 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome and yay

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Cleo-DP [2015-09-12 13:43:14 +0000 UTC]

I just found this serie and I already love it! Keep up the Great job!
When is the next chapter coming up?

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Cleo-DP [2015-09-13 05:23:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it I'm really not sure if there will be one

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Cleo-DP In reply to lokiisawesomest [2015-11-01 20:15:21 +0000 UTC]

aww really? that's a shame, it really is a nice story

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Cleo-DP [2015-11-02 02:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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lioness94 [2015-08-22 04:42:09 +0000 UTC]

I was going through my favourites (yet again) and I came across this and I remembered how much I loved this fic series of yours when I first read it- I mean, it's seriously brilliant!! I feel like you've written Barry perfectly- I can hear the character's voice in the lines. And I'm also kind of in awe of the way you write the dialogue- it flows so easily and just fits in really well with your story and its pacing.
I mean, you're a great writer!! <3 Just thought you should know.

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lokiisawesomest In reply to lioness94 [2015-08-23 03:32:40 +0000 UTC]

There are no words to describe what your comment means to me:,) I was really actually feeling uneasy about the story in all the things you said! I'm so glad you can actually picture Barry. I was so worried about that. It makes me want to continue the story! Thank you so much!<3

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lioness94 In reply to lokiisawesomest [2015-08-24 13:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you're welcome! <3  I'm so sorry you were feeling uneasy about those things. I'm glad I could change that a little. And if you do continue the story, I will be right here, reading and loving every single bit of it.

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lokiisawesomest In reply to lioness94 [2015-08-24 17:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!<3

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Heroesofolympus2024 [2015-07-18 17:00:10 +0000 UTC]

When is the next one coming out

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Heroesofolympus2024 [2015-07-19 02:14:27 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea

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moonlightdragonrider [2015-06-21 15:58:40 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, hope you update soon. 😄

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Yesimthatcountess [2015-06-07 02:37:28 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait for the next one!

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Yesimthatcountess [2015-06-07 05:23:47 +0000 UTC]

XD

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YouWontForgetMe [2015-06-02 03:37:28 +0000 UTC]

I need more. More. I'm so greedy and I apologize BUT I TS SO GOOD HDHSJWHGEDGSSHFSGS

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lokiisawesomest In reply to YouWontForgetMe [2015-06-02 05:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh my lol!! Thank you!! I need to figure out where I'm headed with this story, but I will try to update soon!

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Soul-eater-for-life [2015-06-01 17:41:00 +0000 UTC]

Please write more.

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lokiisawesomest In reply to Soul-eater-for-life [2015-06-01 18:46:49 +0000 UTC]

Lol I'm working on it! Thanks

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