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Lombarsi — Fallen World - Chapter 1 p.1 (remake)

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Published: 2018-07-28 20:10:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 597; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 2
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Description Hey guys!  This is a remake of the first page!  New art, shorter and to the point wording.  And there will be 8 new pages before this one as a Chapter 0 coming in the future.




Some story to go with this page:  Cassidy is napping in his house, which he lives in with his sister, Jasmine, who is currently not home.  Cass and his two siblings, including brother Roland, have lived in this town for four years, with his sister who is his age.  Neither have seen their parents, who are over one-hundred miles away, in that same time.  It is custom at age 18 that a wolf must leave home for no less than 5 years, completely independent, and must survive without any contact with their parents.  Cassidy's older brother is 4 years older and has had contact for the last 3 years, but he has rooted himself pretty strongly in this town.  What does Cassidy do to afford his home?  Odd jobs, he's that guy that will go around town charming or nagging the neighbors for work, and it usually works, especially with the older ladies.  Now that you have a bit of back story, hold tight for what happens next!  

Here it is!  The first page!  This also is the first full size page, which there will be many for key parts of the story throughout!  

 



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Comments: 16

dDarknezZ [2018-07-29 05:19:41 +0000 UTC]

in fact you have improved with the textures, and the better perspective

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Lombarsi In reply to dDarknezZ [2018-07-30 04:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Thankeeee

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dDarknezZ In reply to Lombarsi [2018-07-30 04:38:12 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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CANIDStheInnovator [2018-07-29 01:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Looks better, out of curiosity, why are you starting over?

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Lombarsi In reply to CANIDStheInnovator [2018-07-29 04:13:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm not, just this first page and adding some new stuff to the beginning.  Page 32 is coming soon.  You could blame Skailla's brother, Kryat!  He gave me a ton of suggestions including adding some stuff to the intro.

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SelarisWolf [2018-07-29 00:17:36 +0000 UTC]

whoa, nice! I really liked that original page, and this is even better!

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Lombarsi In reply to SelarisWolf [2018-07-29 00:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Aww thanks it means a lot to hear

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SerenityFeueropal [2018-07-28 21:03:34 +0000 UTC]

I love your new art. It has much softer lighting and Cassidy even looks a little bit happier.

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Lombarsi In reply to SerenityFeueropal [2018-07-28 21:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!  I'm glad you like it better than the original.

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NikoWantsAHug [2018-07-28 20:49:38 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Lombarsi In reply to NikoWantsAHug [2018-07-28 21:06:10 +0000 UTC]

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Fail-Seeker [2018-07-28 20:49:00 +0000 UTC]

Wolftacular remake!

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Lombarsi In reply to Fail-Seeker [2018-07-28 21:06:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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Fail-Seeker In reply to Lombarsi [2018-07-28 21:51:51 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome!

Are we to expect more remakes?

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Lombarsi In reply to Fail-Seeker [2018-07-28 23:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Not soon haha

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Fail-Seeker In reply to Lombarsi [2018-07-30 03:00:21 +0000 UTC]

I can wait.

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