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exploring more of Phoenix Fire (later Phoenix Forge), Rainbow Dash's secondborn



1-2.) Rainbow wasn't a bad mom (in fact she got softer and more empathetic as the years went on), but she made a similar mistake as Lightning Dust- viewing her kids as extensions of herself. At least while Stormy and Phoenix were kids. She pushed her own interests onto them, and while Stormy took to high level aeronautics from the moment his flight feathers grew in, Phoenix didn't. She was an okay flier. Average, really. She preferred to box and wrestle with her dad. Dash was disappointed, but she'd never force Phoenix into flying if she really didn't want it. Instead, Dash focused her attention on her son, Aerostorm, diligently training him as a ruthless flight coach. Stormy, lazy and uncompetitive though he was, enjoyed this nonetheless, because he's a big dumb mama's boy at heart. So he and Dash moved forward, forging an iron-strong bond. And Phoenix sort of....got left behind.

Rainbow didn't mean to do it. She thought Nixie was happier this way. Stormy's training (and her own career) kept her pretty busy, but she still tried to make time for Nixie's little roller derbies and math-athons and what-have-you. Most of the time. Some of the time. Look, Dumbbell had it covered, alright?

Then Cloudy was born, teeny-tiny and needing near-constant care, and Phoenix was once again pushed into the background. Dash didn't mean to. Nixie started trying harder to capture her mom's attention. Getting good grades (pfft, no contest against her dummy of a brother), helping out with Cloudy, even entering (and losing) a few Junior Speedster races. Dash made time for her daughter when she could, but it wasn't enough. But that was okay, right? Nixie had more in common with her dad anyway. Nixie was a big girl now. Nixie would understand. They could always catch a buckball game tomorrow, after all. Or maybe next week.

And slowly.....well, Phoenix began to resent her mom. Resent Stormy. Resent the stupid Wonderbolts, and all the shiny flight trophies in the house. And that's when she began acting out......Because any attention was better than none.


Pictured: Dash celebrating Stormy's unexpected racing victory and shiny gold medal (Phoenix only got a flimsy "you tried" sticker), Dash and teenage Phoenix having one of their increasingly frequent arguments

3.) Some of y'all asked about that felony Cloudburst mentioned here: WELP:

Phoenix grew up into sullen, troubled teenager, and developed a number of unhealthy coping mechanisms. Smoking, shoplifting, vandalism.....setting stuff on fire. It started off harmless enough. Burning garbage, her report cards, stuff that wouldn't be missed. One night, after yet another explosive fight with her mother, she sneaks out for a prowl around town....and happens upon an old abandoned shed. 

The windows are broken, the wood is rotting with age. Deep within, she feels the familiar flicker of excitement, the urge to burn. So she sets it alight, and it burns. And burns. And right when it looks to be puttering out....a dry, overhanging branch catches fire. 

Phoenix doesn't panic at first, she gets to work putting that out, but it's spreading a lot quicker than you'd think. She's so busy with this she doesn't notice the dead, brown grass around the shed catching aflame. The bushes going up in smoke. So much smoke. It's getting hard to breathe. Hard to fly....and just like that, an inferno comes roaring to life. 

The flames rip through the forest, engulfing trees, turning the night sky a hellfire red. Phoenix can't put it out. It's moving too fast, blown by the wind, carried down the valley, headed.....right toward Fluttershy's animal sanctuary.


Oh no.        

Terrified, coughing, Phoenix fights her way through the smoke and heat to get to the bell that sits atop Ponyville's town square. She kicks it with all her might, sounding out a brassy ring that echoes all throughout Ponyville. Citizens stumble out of their homes, roused by the noise, the smell of smoke. Phoenix passes out before she can see the weather ponies rushing in with rain clouds- and fortunately, the fire is contained in time. Fluttershy's family, home, and animals are safe, and her sanctuary is not too damaged. 

But Phoenix wakes up to a whole new WORLD of trouble. For one, her parents are FURIOUS, both at what she DID and the fact that she could've very nearly DIED.....Dash is so angry she can hardly speak. Nix has never, not once, seen her mom cry like that. Phoenix is charged with the crime of arson, and sentenced to a stint in a juvenile detention facility. She's so rattled by the experience that her rebellious inner fire fades away into nothing. She becomes withdrawn, quiet, depressed, and badly misses her family. Partway through her sentence, Princess Twilight proposes trading the remainder of Nix's time locked away for entry into a youth behavior reform program. Rainbow, Dumbbell, and the authorities agree to this plan, and Nix is placed into what is more or less boot camp, under the Royal Guard. 

Although she initially hated the training, studying, rules, and public service expected of her, Nix eventually began to adjust and flourish under this strict discipline regimen. (This is also how she got so jacked). She finishes out her schooling in Canterlot and trains to become a blacksmith for the royal guard, eventually finding her calling in forging weapons and armor, and sometimes, (rarely) the occasional work of art.


As an adult Phoenix still has a bit of her old rebel streak, but she's a lot more relaxed, and better at managing her once turbulent emotions. Although Auntie Fluttershy has mercifully long-since forgiven her for the accident, and she maintains a good relationship with her dad and Cloudy, her relationship with Stormy is tense and rather bitter (Nix has always felt second best in regard to her big brother, and after years of her being mean and petty to him, Stormy remains mistrustful of his sister, even viewing her as the family black sheep). 

Her relationship with Dash is the worst of all. Phoenix is secretly very ashamed of the disgrace she's brought to her mother's legacy, and covers this up with hostility and avoidance.






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Comments: 159

Aisheyru-Fox [2023-11-17 21:35:06 +0000 UTC]

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NO-SoupForYou [2021-02-26 23:04:52 +0000 UTC]

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KingJSA In reply to NO-SoupForYou [2021-12-08 02:46:19 +0000 UTC]

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NightstormXStarstorm [2021-01-18 13:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww poor girl. Srry bout this rd *punches rd

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KingJSA In reply to NightstormXStarstorm [2023-08-13 13:15:06 +0000 UTC]

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KingJSA [2020-09-13 04:31:04 +0000 UTC]

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Missy-Saxon [2020-07-10 19:49:01 +0000 UTC]

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KingJSA In reply to Missy-Saxon [2020-09-13 04:29:42 +0000 UTC]

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Missy-Saxon In reply to KingJSA [2020-09-13 22:38:46 +0000 UTC]

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kinda-lost [2020-06-14 18:09:57 +0000 UTC]

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Lopoddity In reply to kinda-lost [2020-06-17 15:41:40 +0000 UTC]

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Nafinarose [2020-06-05 01:58:48 +0000 UTC]

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AilbeStar In reply to Nafinarose [2020-06-08 17:48:56 +0000 UTC]

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KingJSA In reply to AilbeStar [2020-10-10 21:36:58 +0000 UTC]

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teeneetinee [2020-05-19 17:03:40 +0000 UTC]

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jendoes [2020-05-14 08:10:32 +0000 UTC]

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tehwatcher [2020-05-10 05:45:27 +0000 UTC]

i want to help this poor child TwT

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Nautilus18 [2020-05-07 06:44:54 +0000 UTC]

The entire nation of Australia would like to have a word with Phoenix

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TamaTheLion [2020-05-04 17:52:53 +0000 UTC]

Holy HELL the fire in that last picture is AMAZING. I love Phoenix's silhouette against the flames, gosh- I can't wait to see more about her and Dash's relationship in particular!

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MightyMorphinPower4 [2020-05-01 21:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Exxllcent work poor dash and stomry

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HisFavoriteDarkAngel [2020-04-30 01:29:35 +0000 UTC]

I love this development!!! Learning more about Phoenix and Cloudburst has been amazing~! But I read back through the links on more Phoenix stuff and am left with one question: All your past posts do say that Phoenix wishes/wants to reconcile with her brother. Does this new development scrap that? Is the bitterness too much? Thank you for your amazing work and characters~!

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BugABooStreak [2020-04-28 19:27:17 +0000 UTC]

It's really been awesome seeing you push your art style in different directions lately. So much variety and experimentation it seems. I look forward to seeing more!

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Xarsha [2020-04-28 12:50:46 +0000 UTC]

Friendly neighborhood reminder that Phoenix also lit Chakra's tent on fire for abusing her brother. ...And that Cloudburst helped

I love them so much XD

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KingJSA In reply to Xarsha [2020-10-10 21:41:27 +0000 UTC]

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Featherthefurry [2020-04-28 04:25:13 +0000 UTC]

I love Nix, I don't know what it is about her that grabs me but she's def one of my favorites ^^

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Dashiell0 [2020-04-27 23:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Now I'm really curious as to whether or not they'll make up..

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Colbyr [2020-04-27 21:52:07 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow feeling like she's failed her kids seems to be a recurring theme, between Phoenix turning to arson (yikes) and Stormy's dyslexia not being discovered/treated until... when? His last years of school? 

Either way, does Dash feel like she failed Cloudburst at all?  

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Tigersolder002 [2020-04-27 20:10:18 +0000 UTC]

Somehow, this song reminds me of the Phoenix:  www.youtube.com/watch?v=VP9f5D…

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CastoroChiaro [2020-04-27 19:58:14 +0000 UTC]

i like that dash isn't necessarily a bad mother, but she still made plenty of mistakes along the way. i think a lot of kids (and parents) can relate to that experience. i feel like dash often gets put in the position of forcing her kids to be into her interests, so i could def see her TRYING to support her kids if they weren't like her but unintentionally favoring the ones she could relate to more.

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FeralSunflower [2020-04-27 18:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Your story telling is impeccable as always. You're really good at making everything feel so real when it comes to your characters and it's awesome. It's been really cool to see you develop them over the years cause I started following you when nix was still ember. Honestly I wasn't that into her character at first but the way you focused on her development has changed how I thought about her. She's kinda relatable to how I grew up, and it's nice to see that delved into more. Anyway lots a love from a huge fan!!!<3

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Ghostdaprettybad [2020-04-27 13:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Now I really wanna see a confrontation between Dash and Nix where they finally get it all out,,,ik know thats not always how real life works out but man.

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tritos [2020-04-27 13:19:08 +0000 UTC]

I demand that all participation medals and trophy say "meh" henceforth!

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Chrissyartz [2020-04-27 06:37:52 +0000 UTC]

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Adventwolf5 [2020-04-27 03:53:09 +0000 UTC]

Don't feel bad for Dash here. It doesn't matter if you don't mean to be a bad parent if that is the result. If you neglect one of your children unintentionally it is still your fault. Nix got the short end of the stick and now has to deal with all the baggage that comes with it. Good way to show her growing and maturing as a character but sad that it needed to be fixed in the first place.

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Zcat91819 [2020-04-27 03:31:33 +0000 UTC]

The amount of psychology that goes into your stories is always a fun read. Pheonix is pretty awesome and yeah, misunderstood. But all in all, she's a good pony.

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KuroNeko369 [2020-04-27 01:52:03 +0000 UTC]

So sad!

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Lycanrosie [2020-04-27 01:08:25 +0000 UTC]

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DragonTurtle2 [2020-04-27 00:40:30 +0000 UTC]

Celestia is still an expression, sweet.  Also, it's surprising to see Phoenix with long hair, it looks pretty fab.  But I see why it would have to go when working a forge.  So did she get her cutie mark at probationary-boot camp?

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Lopoddity In reply to DragonTurtle2 [2020-04-27 00:54:28 +0000 UTC]

She lost the long hair when her braid caught fire at work. Cropped it short ever since! And yeah, she got her cutie mark in boot camp, she was a late bloomer that way (not suuuuper uncommon for a pony to still be a blank flank as a teenager)

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StudioNji8 [2020-04-27 00:01:20 +0000 UTC]

waaaiiittt a minute, in the first section, all the ponies have hoofs, but in the second picture they have hands ?

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OliveTheDingo In reply to StudioNji8 [2020-04-27 00:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Anthro versions

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StudioNji8 In reply to OliveTheDingo [2020-04-27 03:41:05 +0000 UTC]

oh ok thanks u lmao

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RuneSoldierDan [2020-04-26 23:58:06 +0000 UTC]

...Oof. You goofed, Dash.

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SanctuaryoftheMind [2020-04-26 23:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I wonder, could this be one of the reasons why Vogue feels a connection to Phoenix? Because they both understand what it's like to have troubling relationships with their mothers? 

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Pack-Leader-Sally [2020-04-26 23:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Man, I really wish Rainbow Dash didn't play favoritism in her family smh

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Sikudhanii [2020-04-26 22:22:45 +0000 UTC]

Her metal, sad but still...lol

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BloddLust [2020-04-26 20:02:18 +0000 UTC]

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SkaiDaHogwartsGal [2020-04-26 17:45:49 +0000 UTC]

I feel so bad for Nix. Like I know Dash didn't MEAN to leave her behind but...jeez.

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patrick-p [2020-04-26 17:34:39 +0000 UTC]

I love how you draw RD'S hooves as pink!!! its such a fun detail

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United-ARPG [2020-04-26 17:26:16 +0000 UTC]

I've been watching these for a while and I am now inspired to fill out my own characters as such ^^ The sketches are so simple, but fill in so much

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