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exploring more of Phoenix Fire (later Phoenix Forge), Rainbow Dash's secondborn
1-2.) Rainbow wasn't a bad mom (in fact she got softer and more empathetic as the years went on), but she made a similar mistake as Lightning Dust- viewing her kids as extensions of herself. At least while Stormy and Phoenix were kids. She pushed her own interests onto them, and while Stormy took to high level aeronautics from the moment his flight feathers grew in, Phoenix didn't. She was an okay flier. Average, really. She preferred to box and wrestle with her dad. Dash was disappointed, but she'd never force Phoenix into flying if she really didn't want it. Instead, Dash focused her attention on her son, Aerostorm, diligently training him as a ruthless flight coach. Stormy, lazy and uncompetitive though he was, enjoyed this nonetheless, because he's a big dumb mama's boy at heart. So he and Dash moved forward, forging an iron-strong bond. And Phoenix sort of....got left behind.
Rainbow didn't mean to do it. She thought Nixie was happier this way. Stormy's training (and her own career) kept her pretty busy, but she still tried to make time for Nixie's little roller derbies and math-athons and what-have-you. Most of the time. Some of the time. Look, Dumbbell had it covered, alright?
Then Cloudy was born, teeny-tiny and needing near-constant care, and Phoenix was once again pushed into the background. Dash didn't mean to. Nixie started trying harder to capture her mom's attention. Getting good grades (pfft, no contest against her dummy of a brother), helping out with Cloudy, even entering (and losing) a few Junior Speedster races. Dash made time for her daughter when she could, but it wasn't enough. But that was okay, right? Nixie had more in common with her dad anyway. Nixie was a big girl now. Nixie would understand. They could always catch a buckball game tomorrow, after all. Or maybe next week.
And slowly.....well, Phoenix began to resent her mom. Resent Stormy. Resent the stupid Wonderbolts, and all the shiny flight trophies in the house. And that's when she began acting out......Because any attention was better than none.
Pictured: Dash celebrating Stormy's unexpected racing victory and shiny gold medal (Phoenix only got a flimsy "you tried" sticker), Dash and teenage Phoenix having one of their increasingly frequent arguments
3.) Some of y'all asked about that felony Cloudburst mentioned here:
WELP:
Phoenix grew up into sullen, troubled teenager, and developed a number of unhealthy coping mechanisms. Smoking, shoplifting, vandalism.....setting stuff on fire. It started off harmless enough. Burning garbage, her report cards, stuff that wouldn't be missed. One night, after yet another explosive fight with her mother, she sneaks out for a prowl around town....and happens upon an old abandoned shed.
The windows are broken, the wood is rotting with age. Deep within, she feels the familiar flicker of excitement, the urge to burn. So she sets it alight, and it burns. And burns. And right when it looks to be puttering out....a dry, overhanging branch catches fire.
Phoenix doesn't panic at first, she gets to work putting that out, but it's spreading a lot quicker than you'd think. She's so busy with this she doesn't notice the dead, brown grass around the shed catching aflame. The bushes going up in smoke. So much smoke. It's getting hard to breathe. Hard to fly....and just like that, an inferno comes roaring to life.
The flames rip through the forest, engulfing trees, turning the night sky a hellfire red. Phoenix can't put it out. It's moving too fast, blown by the wind, carried down the valley, headed.....right toward Fluttershy's animal sanctuary.
Oh no.
Terrified, coughing, Phoenix fights her way through the smoke and heat to get to the bell that sits atop Ponyville's town square. She kicks it with all her might, sounding out a brassy ring that echoes all throughout Ponyville. Citizens stumble out of their homes, roused by the noise, the smell of smoke. Phoenix passes out before she can see the weather ponies rushing in with rain clouds- and fortunately, the fire is contained in time. Fluttershy's family, home, and animals are safe, and her sanctuary is not too damaged.
But Phoenix wakes up to a whole new WORLD of trouble. For one, her parents are FURIOUS, both at what she DID and the fact that she could've very nearly DIED.....Dash is so angry she can hardly speak. Nix has never, not once, seen her mom cry like that. Phoenix is charged with the crime of arson, and sentenced to a stint in a juvenile detention facility. She's so rattled by the experience that her rebellious inner fire fades away into nothing. She becomes withdrawn, quiet, depressed, and badly misses her family. Partway through her sentence, Princess Twilight proposes trading the remainder of Nix's time locked away for entry into a youth behavior reform program. Rainbow, Dumbbell, and the authorities agree to this plan, and Nix is placed into what is more or less boot camp, under the Royal Guard.
Although she initially hated the training, studying, rules, and public service expected of her, Nix eventually began to adjust and flourish under this strict discipline regimen. (This is also how she got so jacked). She finishes out her schooling in Canterlot and trains to become a blacksmith for the royal guard, eventually finding her calling in forging weapons and armor, and sometimes, (rarely) the occasional work of art.
As an adult Phoenix still has a bit of her old rebel streak, but she's a lot more relaxed, and better at managing her once turbulent emotions. Although Auntie Fluttershy has mercifully long-since forgiven her for the accident, and she maintains a good relationship with her dad and Cloudy, her relationship with Stormy is tense and rather bitter (Nix has always felt second best in regard to her big brother, and after years of her being mean and petty to him, Stormy remains mistrustful of his sister, even viewing her as the family black sheep).
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Comments: 159
Wirlog [2020-04-26 17:22:23 +0000 UTC]
On the cheer leading coach episode Dash deserved to fail, it could've been a better lesson for her.
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Yagimitsu [2020-04-26 16:22:14 +0000 UTC]
Why do they have hands on the seconds slide and hooves on the rest?
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cristal0930 In reply to Yagimitsu [2020-04-26 17:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Because Lop likes to draw her characters as antros some times
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Chrismilesprower [2020-04-26 15:54:34 +0000 UTC]
I actually wonder if Phoenix ever stares at the fires of workplace and ever feel this trauma of that one particular memory of her life. Like just one look at the roaring flames she just freezes up from that one moment. No matter how much she tries to fight it, she can't escape from that. While many people have forgiven her and perhaps forgotten for the trouble, deep down she could never forgive herself for what she's done.
Worst of all, she could never have the strength or courage to talk to her mom so she wears this tough personality around. But everyday she goes around as the rebellious tomboyish tough gal, she loses more and more of what she used to be. She's good at hiding her feelings, but not her memory or the guilt. And though she's molded into what she is now, every now and then she's spent so many sleepless nights crying alone. No longer able to show it or get the help she needs.
Her guilt is her own punishment. This is her personal hell.
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StreetLightsAtNight In reply to ??? [2020-04-26 15:08:42 +0000 UTC]
I love phoenix's backstory!
It's very relatable in the sense that stress & self-doubt can cause damaging coping mechanisms-
I've developed some in my time, but have gotten through them and tossed them aside.
It's great to see characters who have struggled with these same issues, because it makes people
going through similar things feel less alone.
Your stories never cease to immerse your audience. ^^
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ToraNoKo123 [2020-04-26 14:57:15 +0000 UTC]
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SnowyLilacs In reply to ??? [2020-04-26 12:58:45 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful and tragic. I love it once again!
I so want to see Nixie doing her Roller Derby stuff.
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HayStarlight [2020-04-26 12:43:04 +0000 UTC]
soooooo mommy issues? there seems to be a lot of that going around. hey, does Phoenix get along with Pandora? I think she would
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Anubis-hound In reply to ??? [2020-04-26 11:50:58 +0000 UTC]
Great work (as always!) But did you have to cut my heart out? Haha 😫
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SerendipitousPosts In reply to ??? [2020-04-26 11:29:21 +0000 UTC]
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MugenSeiRyuu [2020-04-26 10:49:12 +0000 UTC]
1) Yeah, kinda obvious who the favorite is...
2) Ah, Wonderbolts Weekly. What a fine piece of journalism. Also great parenting there, Rainbow Dash.
3) Like a phoenix burning bright
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Gischtkralle [2020-04-26 10:38:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh my, I can so relate to Phoenix, having a sibling whose talents simply align better with your parents sometimes really sucks and it can definetly turn into resentment (but I'm glad Stormy isn't kicking down too, it can be easy for some "golden boys" to do that)
But will Phoenix ever talk to her mum about it? Or do her and Vouge bond over complicated parent child relationship?
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bornthiswayfox [2020-04-26 08:31:09 +0000 UTC]
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Lopoddity In reply to bornthiswayfox [2020-04-26 14:58:11 +0000 UTC]
You never have to ask permission to write fanfiction. Send me a link if you do!
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bornthiswayfox In reply to Lopoddity [2020-04-26 16:51:56 +0000 UTC]
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Lopoddity In reply to bornthiswayfox [2020-04-26 17:24:01 +0000 UTC]
Okay, thanks, I'll get to it as soon as I can! :> You don't gotta post it all over the place here
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bornthiswayfox In reply to Lopoddity [2020-04-26 17:35:31 +0000 UTC]
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bornthiswayfox In reply to Lopoddity [2020-04-26 18:12:53 +0000 UTC]
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bornthiswayfox In reply to Lopoddity [2020-04-26 15:09:13 +0000 UTC]
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bornthiswayfox In reply to ShimiMouse [2020-04-26 10:32:47 +0000 UTC]
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Dawn-Watcher [2020-04-26 08:28:53 +0000 UTC]
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drawingshady [2020-04-26 08:17:35 +0000 UTC]
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sammyjayne66 [2020-04-26 07:33:36 +0000 UTC]
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Sanluris [2020-04-26 07:26:49 +0000 UTC]
.....show me the one who gave such a ribbon to Phoenix. Yeah, not everyone can win, but I think participation prizes are great, especially if everyone really has a good attitude and tries hard. Recognizing effort is important. Rainbow's the parent that gets angry when their kid gets a B, isn't she? Her parents would always love her, but Rainbow was an over achiever and didn't have to work very hard for positive attention. She obviously doesn't understand what it feels like to not always be the best.
I remember getting third place in an eighth grade science fair with a project my dad and I worked on together, and it was the best day of my life.
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Lopoddity In reply to Sanluris [2020-04-26 15:09:52 +0000 UTC]
The projects you worked on with your parents were the best, weren’t they? I have lots of fond memories of the projects I made with my dad, even if they didn’t win me any prizes.
Rainbow doesn’t care a whole lot about academic achievement, tbh. She was a poor student herself (I think the show mentions she flunked out of flight school?), and has always had trouble focusing and studying. Stormy has similar problems. She didn’t begrudge him his lackluster grades until they started getting really bad in high school, whereupon he dropped out to attend flight academy. Phoenix has always gotten good grades, and while her parents were proud of that, it didn’t win as much praise as Stormy’s athleticism, and she was pretty bitter about that
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Sanluris In reply to Lopoddity [2020-04-27 03:17:36 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. They were.
You’re right. I forgot Rainbow wasn’t good at school, but she was really good at athletic stuff. It’s good her parents encouraged that. I know what it’s like to have trouble with school. Feels awful, especially if the school isn’t good at helping students who have trouble with learning. Guess even Equestria has trouble helping students with learning troubles.
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Ketumii [2020-04-26 06:53:27 +0000 UTC]
Do she and Bruce ever meet? Maybe during her time in juvie?
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Lopoddity In reply to Ketumii [2020-04-26 15:32:00 +0000 UTC]
I dunno, Bruce is older than Phoenix. I’m not sure if they would’ve been locked away at the same point in time. Even so, I doubt teenage mares and stallions would be allowed to share the same facility.
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PokemonTrainerMax [2020-04-26 06:39:17 +0000 UTC]
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Skjolty [2020-04-26 05:14:39 +0000 UTC]
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Godzillamaster69 [2020-04-26 04:51:29 +0000 UTC]
Geez, I kinda feel for Phoenix here. She just wants her mom to love her. Does Dash ever open up about missing Phoenix. The Dash siblings make me think of me and my brothers.
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happychipmuk In reply to ??? [2020-04-26 04:11:14 +0000 UTC]
I've noticed that between the three siblings designs Phoenix is the most drastic in terms of coat color (Stormy and Cloudy having cool colors while Phoenix's are warm).
You mentioned that Stormy sees her as the black sheep of the family. I'm wonder if this is intentional.
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bvnnibal [2020-04-26 04:11:06 +0000 UTC]
all of your art is amazing! you've continued to be an inspiration for awhile! I love when you go in depth on character its fun to learn more about them!
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DatArtisticYoshi In reply to Desmond06 [2020-04-26 05:48:19 +0000 UTC]
Mmm that’s some good spam right there if I say so myself.
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GoldenGalleon [2020-04-26 03:52:56 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful work as always. I must say.
And I definitely know how she feels...
I'm my family's black sheep. Basically grew up in my big sister's shadow. And my cousins... They always did better than I ever could. They did sports, got great grades, were sociable and going out living lives. While I was always the... introvert, lazy, stay at home loser. Not all of it was my fault though.. I have a lot of medical issues I've had to deal with in my life, and will have to deal with for the rest of my life. So.. alot of my time was spent around doctors and hospitals. So i did get some reprieve. But I still got flak for.. basically not being more like them, when I was able to. While no one ever really outwardly said it... I knew my family was disappointed in me.. for not being better and trying harder and, well, being more like them. My mother especially.. while my sister hasn't always been the best, she has made big life mistakes, she is still held in higher regard than me..
and you can tell... when you're around them.. there's a certain air about it. you can feel the... disappointment..
despite their smiles, and kind words and everything... I know that I have been a blight on people's lives... both family and others...... some who I miss terribly.....
What I would give to be someone else.... or not around in the first place...
SO yeah.. I feel her pain.
And I don't blame her for some of the shit she did.. Hard to not be villain or loser when everyone always sees and treats you as such.
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PerfectlyPastel In reply to GoldenGalleon [2020-04-26 04:22:54 +0000 UTC]
You're a wonderful, beautiful, and valid person. You deserve nothing but the best. Stay safe.
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sympatheticQuill [2020-04-26 03:37:18 +0000 UTC]
once again you make a wonderful char
aside from being the ideal buff girlfriend of my dreams, shes genuinely a very interesting character! and i love how you leave both rainbow(and presumably dumbbell) have room to make mistakes as well
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Bwolf515 [2020-04-26 03:21:46 +0000 UTC]
Damn. This one hit home, and it hit home HARD. Being a little sister myself, I have ALWAYS felt second best. Excuse me, not just felt, but AM second best. If thats even what you can call it. My brother is a star child. My mother's pride and joy. The son a mother dreams of. He never got into trouble, always did his homework, got admiration and praise from his teachers. He was always the one to be. Classmates had nothing negative to say about him. He is a good guy, with strong morals. He's everything my parent's ever could have asked for.
And then I came along four years later. I in no way had a bad childhood. I have everything I could ever want, except for my parents adoration to the extent they give my brother. I have learning disabilities (ADHD and dyscalculia to be exact) I had trouble making friends even in elementary. I was what teachers considered a "handful". Once I got into highschool things got even worse. I'd get into fights with other students. Argue with my teachers. When grade 10 hit I started drinking, and became an alcoholic shortly after. My parents were ashamed and embarrassed. I don't blame them. They had such a perfect son, how could their daughter turn out so horribly? Even my extended family acts that way. At family gatherings, they dote on my brother. "How is everything? I am so proud of you!". And turn to me with pity.
My mother always says she doesn't have a favourite, but in her eyes you can tell she does, and it isn't me.
Sometimes all I can think about are these words;
"Why can't you be more like your brother?"
Anyways, amazing art as always Lop
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GogglesPizano [2020-04-26 03:21:41 +0000 UTC]
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