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The house was quiet. The silence was almost painful.

Patiently, Moondancer waited while Sunset Shimmer poured him a fresh cup of tea. The teapot trembled in the grip of her magic, and her eyes were brimming with tears. Starlight Glimmer neatly leaned over to take the teapot from her wife. She wrapped gentle, comforting hooves around Sunset, and the golden unicorn immediately turned and buried her face against Starlight's chest. The silence returned.

Over in the corner, Chakra Blossom sat holding his own cup of tea. It'd grown cold long ago, but he stared down into the still, sweet-smelling liquid, transfixed by his reflection. His eyes were misty.


The air was choked with a fog of thick, crushing grief. The loss was too fresh, like a wound still bleeding.


Anxiety gnawed at Moondancer's belly. He'd come to Midnight's home under the guise of expressing his grief and consoling her mothers, but really he'd hoped to tactfully sniff out hints about what Starlight and Sunset really knew...most importantly, whether they'd be able to trace their daughter's fate back to him. At first, he'd been confident in his probing abilities, but now, taking in the tear-stained, utterly distraught faces of two mothers in mourning...well, it was sparking something far too much like guilt in Moondancer's gut. This would be more difficult than he'd anticipated, but he had to press forward. Moondancer cleared his throat.


"I...came as soon as I heard."


Starlight's eyes numbly slid up to meet his gaze. "...Thank you." She coughed awkwardly, attempting to summon a mask of professionalism. "We're grateful, dear." She said finally. "We...know you and Morning Glory were close."

"She was like a sister to me." Moondancer explained, smiling sweetly. "Not by blood of course. I always tried to guide her, to make use of her incredible talents...I always considered Morning Glory to be my little sister, but I suspect she saw me as a nagging, overprotective nuisance." He chuckled.

"Nonsense, dear." Starlight made a feeble attempt at an assuring smile. "I'm sure Morning Glory appreciated all you did for her. We certainly did." She looked down at her hooves, and her voice grew distant. "....I remember so clearly the day she was born. Holding this teeny thing in my hooves for the first time... just the sweetest, most perfect little ball of pink fluff..." Her eyes began to glitter again, and she bit her lip.

"...She was our sunshine." Sunset said quietly, sagging against her wife. "....I just don't know who could have done it." Sunset whispered. "I...I can't fathom who could have hated our daughter so much." She bit her lip, ears slicking back in pain. "We managed to transport the statue back home without damaging it, but Twilight.....T-Twilight said-" Sunset's breathing hitched. Starlight glanced up at her, and quickly reached to hold her hoof. Sunset sucked in a deep breath, trying to choke down a tidal wave of emotion. Moondancer waited carefully, ears pricked, heart stuck in his throat.

"...Princess Twilight ran so many tests. She stayed up all night." Sunset finally breathed, looking Moondancer in the eye. "But every test yielded the same result. It appears as though something managed to strip away Morning's very being-mind, magic, and soul. The crystal statue is all we managed to recover. Poor Bertram refuses to leave her side, but the fact is, the statue has no soul inside. Twilight says that for all....f-for all intents and purposes...o-our filly is d-dea-" Sunset couldn't finish, leaning forward to bury her face in her hooves. She began to weep now, loud, broken sobs that racked her whole body. Shame settled in Moondancer's stomach like a heavy stone, and he fidgeted uncomfortably.

"Dead." Starlight finished, gritting her teeth. Though she shut her eyes, a few boiling tears still managed to squeeze through. "If...i-if that's true....i-if something, some monster took our daughter away, I...." Her horn began to glow, and air became charged with her magic. "I-I'll....there won't be a corner of Equestria they'll be able to hide from me. I'll blind him, I-I'll tear him to bloody pieces, I'll-" Like Sunset, she too broke suddenly, crumpling into a weak, sobbing mess. "I'll..."

"Oh my." Moondancer reached out to touch her shoulder, comforting and gentle. "Ah...there, there, dear. Please, you shouldn't work yourself up like this. I assure you, there is no monster to be hunted down-please, assuming foul play will only cause you unnecessary stress." He said kindly. "If there was some wicked beast lurking about, stealing away magic in the dead of night, surely there would've been reports of it from all across Equestria? And surely it would've been hunted down by now?" He swallowed, letting his ears droop in sorrow. "...Although it's difficult to accept...I believe that what happened to Morning Glory may have been, ah...self-inflicted."

Starlight's eyes went wide, and she exchanged quick, terrified glances with Sunset. "W-what are you saying? You think....this might've been an accident?"

Moondancer nodded grimly. "Unfortunately. Morning Glory was truly your daughter-so very talented at magic. But she's always had her fixation with the dark arts...and it'd always worried me. Growing up, I always tried to guide her onto a less sinister path, but, ah...well, we all know what a headstrong young lady she was." He chuckled, a bit sadly. "She loved her witchcraft. But the fact is, its always been a very volatile, unpredictable branch of magic. It's quite possible that Morning was testing out some new hex, or curse...and something went terribly, terribly wrong."

Starlight Glimmer covered her mouth, and her wide eyes filled with tears. Sunset echoed her wife's look of horror. It was clear that they believed Moondancer without question...and they were quickly making the mental connections he'd hoped they would. Clever mares. They'd never discouraged their daughter's love of the dark arts...were they then, to blame for her death?


"Bullshit."


A deep voice suddenly cut through the air, startling the trio. It was Chakra Blossom, who seemed to be trembling with barely-contained anger. He stood to his hooves, locking eyes with Moondancer.

"You think Nighty was stupid enough to do this to herself? Midnight Abyss was a damned genius." Chakra growled. "And you'd know that if the two of you were as close as you say, friend."

Moondancer's mouth opened and closed, like a fish. He'd been taken off guard. "Well, I, ah-"

"I don't like your tone, Mister Blossom." Starlight Glimmer stepped boldly between the two stallions, guarding Moondancer. "Moony's just as distraught as the rest of us, and thus far, he's provided the only answer to all this that makes any sense. It...it may not be a pleasant answer, but it does make sense." She reached up to wipe at her wet eyes. "Celestia. Morning Glory was our baby. Our new beginning, our dawn. Sunset and I...we haven't always made the best choices. Haven't always been the best ponies. We'd always hoped that our daughter would be better than us. We were so proud when her magic developed early...Oh, but then the witchcraft business started....Our little filly didn't want to wear dresses and study under Princess Celestia, no, she wanted to brew ancient poisons and test out enchantments on cadavers." She sniffled. "Oh, we should have known no good could come of it..."

"She was happy, Miss Glim." Chakra reached out a comforting hoof. "I remember, back when we were kids, the first time I agreed to let her test out a potion in my ma's kitchen. It ended up exploding, total failure, took forever to clean all that salamander slime off the ceiling, but...you know, I think that's the first time I remember hearing her laugh." Chakra smiled then, and it was nostalgic, tinged with sadness.

He looked to Starlight, hoping that she too had found comfort in the memory, but the mare took a sudden step back from him.

"...That's right." She whispered, her eyes going wide, as though she'd just remembered something. "Morning Glory had always been a good little filly. She never tampered with witchcraft before....not until you came along." She lifted a hoof to her mouth, and her eyes met Chakra's.

"It was your fault."

The atmosphere in the room changed at once. In an instant, Sunset took her place at Starlight's side, and both mares advanced on Chakra, nearly bristling with maternal fury.

"Whoa, easy, easy!" Chakra lifted his hooves, trying to calm them. "Please. Up until not too long ago, Nighty was my friend. I always tried to give her space to be herself. I know she appreciated that-hell, she told me herself!"

Moondancer was nothing, if not an opportunist. A wicked wildfire was blooming in front of him. He only needed to feed it.

"I'm sorry to say it, but I always suspected he was a bad influence." Moondancer said, shaking his head. "I always told Morning Glory that nothing good would come of hanging around some deadbeat, good-for-nothing hippie."

"What, you think Midnight didn't know I was trash?" Chakra laughed, but it was bitter. His eyes were curiously shiny. "She was smart enough to think for herself, dipshit. She ditched me a while ago. Dumped me as a friend, because I was too mean to somepony I was supposed to care about. She hated that."

Moondancer paused, sensing victory. "...Dear me, Mister Blossom. I don't think you're making the best case for yourself."

"It's not about me." Chakra countered, looking round at everyone in the room. "It's about her. Look, I get it." He snorted. "Missus Glimmer, Missus Shimmer, you loved your daughter. I get it. And I do mean no offense here-but none of you knew Midnight like I knew her. She was never your smiling little sunshine fluff filly, or whatever the hell you wanted her to be. She was a person. She was mean, she was weird, she was creepy, and she'd been that way since the day I met her. She was smart. She loved all this witch stuff, she knew curses and hexes like the back of her hoof. There's no way in hell some accident got the better of Midnight Abyss. If she's dead, it's because someone killed her." Chakra's voice became a cold, deadly hiss, and he leaned forward, eyes boring into Moondancer's.

"....And this little prick knows something."


Time seemed to slow to a crawl. For a long, agonizing moment, Moondancer was paralyzed against Chakra's glare. Chakra knew. That damned layabout pegasus knew. Moondancer felt the terrified hammer of his own heart, and desperately, he wondered if it'd be better to confess to his crime, confess now, before the two powerful unicorns before him figured out Chakra's words for themselves-

The words felt heavy on Moondancer's tongue. "I-I..."

"How dare you."

In a heartbeat, Starlight Glimmer shoved in front of Moondancer, her eyes blazing like a volcano ready to erupt. "How dare you?!" She repeated, her voice shaking the walls like thunder. "How dare you accuse somepony in my home!" She bellowed at Chakra, "My daughter is dead, and if any miserable, wretched soul is to blame for it, it's you!"

Wide-eyed, Chakra took a step back, blindsided by her venom. Furious and wounded, he struggled to steady himself. "Ma'am, I'm only trying to help." He tried. "I don't know much, but there's one thing I'm sure of-Midnight hated this little jerk." Again, he turned a withering glare upon Moondancer. "I trust that she had a damned good reason to."

"Moondancer has been a loyal friend of our family since he was a colt." Starlight said coldly. "It's not his character being assessed right now, Mister Blossom. I'd much rather examine the pegasus right in front of me-the big, lumbering layabout that claims he knew our own daughter better than we did."

Chakra's ears slicked back in anger and hurt. "...You know, I'm starting to think that I did." He said darkly. "Some mothers you were."


Sunset flinched, and Starlight's wrath finally boiled over, her patience at its end. "Get out!" Starlight screamed, louder than Moondancer had ever heard her. She caught Sunset, who'd collapsed again into pained sobbing. "Get out of my house, and never come back!"  

Moondancer seized the opportunity. He lit his horn in warning, and took a bold step forward. "Mister Blossom, I believe it's time for you to go."

Chakra looked to him, eyes nearly smouldering with hate. He flared his wings wide, as though considering openly attacking the white unicorn-but suddenly seemed to think better of it. Instead, he simply turned and left, slamming the door on his way out.

 Starlight let out a heavy sigh, slumping against her wife. The fight seemed to have gone out of both mothers.

"I'm sorry you had to see that, Moony, dear." She apologized numbly, "What a terrible mess everything's becoming..."

Moondancer blinked, stunned that everything had clicked into place so smoothly. He hesitated, nearly afraid to believe that somehow, he'd come out victorious. Midnight's parents didn't suspect him. They trusted him. Starlight Glimmer placed a hoof on his back, comforting her daughter's killer.

"You'll stay for dinner, won't you? You're looking so pale these days..."

Moondancer smiled, warm and kind.

"Oh no, Missus Glimmer, I couldn't impose..."

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With a fond farewell to Sunset and Starlight, Moondancer had departed from Midnight's home. The weight of his traveling cloak felt familiar and warm, and it carefully hid the red-tipped horn tied around his neck. Moondancer trotted through the Everfree Forest, his hooves light with a renewed sense of confidence, a feeling of invincibility. The sun had set, casting the forest in still, eerie darkness, but Moondancer pressed on, unafraid.

A voice, faint and irritable, spoke suddenly in his mind.


You worm. You loathsome little scrap of toad waste.


"Celestia above." Moondancer drawled, "You'd be so much easier to mourn if you'd just stay quiet, Midnight."


You think you're clever, don't you? Think you've got my mothers fooled? They'll figure you out, and then they'll skin you alive.
 

"They don't suspect a thing. They trust me. And why shouldn't they trust sweet, polite little Moony?" Moondancer sneered, mocking her. "I'm a model pony, after all."


Says the pony wandering alone through the woods, talking to himself.


Moondancer startled, realizing she was quite right. He'd been speaking aloud to a voice in his head. "....Shut up, Midnight." He whispered, cheeks turning pink.


So, you've managed to stumble your way into getting away with murder. For now. You're still a joke, Moondancer. Tell me, what's next? What's your plan here? Because I really can't wait to see how all this blows up in your stupid, smug little face.


Moondancer's face soured, and he opened his mouth to sneer a response-when quite suddenly, he caught sight of a lone unicorn walking through the forest. He was a thin, young stallion, with a basket of fresh-picked Everfree timber berries slung across his back. The pony was whistling merrily to himself as he skipped along. He hadn't noticed Moondancer yet.


Dimly, Moondancer felt the weight of the horn against his chest. A strange, faint hunger began to stir inside him.


What's next, Midnight? Hmm.


Moondancer began to slink forward, silently stalking the young unicorn. The pony's hind hoof snagged on a tree root, and some of the berries spilled from his baskets. With a swear, the pony lit his horn, trying to gather up the mess.

Poor thing. The woods weren't safe for a pony alone at night.

Moondancer licked his dry lips, and the horn at his chest began to glow a dim crimson, encouraging him onward. He'd take this pony. Just the one. Just one more soul....


Just to see what would happen. Nopony was around to see. Nopony would miss this young fool.


The woods weren't safe for a pony at night.


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so it continues




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Comments: 734

MurrImabutterfly [2017-11-22 06:41:45 +0000 UTC]

God, karma is coming around to Chakra in the worst way. He's in the exact same place he put Rosemary, all those years ago.
Bloody amazing writing, Lopoddity.

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MadMother88 [2017-11-14 21:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Dang lol.

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thesaltypretzel In reply to ??? [2017-11-08 09:54:39 +0000 UTC]

I hate what Moony has become, but this makes for a rather good story; doesn't it? I look forward to the next chapter 

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skaiuoquer In reply to ??? [2017-10-21 01:52:51 +0000 UTC]

But how the F did it pour a cup of anything?

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TXCleverGirls In reply to ??? [2017-10-20 19:04:56 +0000 UTC]

They're going to kill him when they find out the truth...

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Reading4halfmylife In reply to TXCleverGirls [2017-11-04 22:33:53 +0000 UTC]

No, Starlight's gonna go back in time and make sure he was never born

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ApparentlyImStupid [2017-10-19 22:01:59 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Lopoddity In reply to ApparentlyImStupid [2017-10-19 22:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Sooooo would book authors have no lives as well? Does anybody who spends time drawing or writing have no life? What a strange thing to propose. I think you'd be better off if you dropped the cynicism. Lashing out at creators won't help you justify your own mediocrity, friend.

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Poppynia In reply to ApparentlyImStupid [2017-10-19 22:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Actual, this is a talent that they are taking time to show, and express. 

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Yowhatsupbro In reply to ??? [2017-10-19 01:06:05 +0000 UTC]

Is that lil pump

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DeePartWolf In reply to ??? [2017-10-19 00:53:11 +0000 UTC]

._. Starlight glimmer and sun set shimmer.... Am i the only one who notices it? Or am i crazy...

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ematati97008 In reply to DeePartWolf [2017-11-11 15:12:30 +0000 UTC]

You're not alone but it gets weirder

Twilight, Sunset, and Starlight all have to do with light at dusk/evening.

Sparkle, Shimmer, Glimmer are all sparkly/shiny words.

We know that all three are extremely powerful, and they all have turned to evil, but then turned back to good (Twily turned evil in Equestria Girl: Friendship Games. I know its her human doppelganger, but it still kinda counts.)

These fillies even have slightly similar hair, but Sunset's is a lot different than the others

Weird, right?

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Ghost--Moth In reply to ematati97008 [2018-02-23 05:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Sorry if this came kind of late scrolling through Lopps stuff and saw this and thought I would input another small detail I noticed on this

as you said starlight sunset and twilight all either dusk or dawn words 
Day is Celestia 
night is Luna 
day night dawn and dusk 
the three unicorns powerful unicorns at some point were all under the princess of the sun or twilight 

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ematati97008 In reply to Ghost--Moth [2018-02-25 04:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Cool, I never thought of that. But did starlight study under one of the princesses? It's been awhile since I've watched the series

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Ghost--Moth In reply to ematati97008 [2018-02-26 04:51:26 +0000 UTC]

No I think Starlight studied under Twilight later in the series 
I haven’t seen too much MLP either but I’ve seen certain bits and pieces of it and I think that’s what happens

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DeePartWolf In reply to ematati97008 [2017-11-11 16:46:57 +0000 UTC]

wow you really know your stuff

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ematati97008 In reply to DeePartWolf [2017-11-11 21:28:07 +0000 UTC]

Lol, kinda

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cookiecarrot892 In reply to ??? [2017-10-17 17:10:27 +0000 UTC]

wow SUNSET SHIMMER X STARLIGHT GLIMMER IS BEST SHIP!!!!!!!!!

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Lordoffantasy In reply to ??? [2017-10-16 02:37:37 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Lopoddity In reply to Lordoffantasy [2017-10-16 02:45:01 +0000 UTC]

Sure is fun to write tho

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BLACKjack0007 In reply to ??? [2017-10-14 23:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Damn and i used to like Moondancer, but iv come to like Chakra way more now.

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Jas5576 [2017-10-07 00:29:57 +0000 UTC]

oh moony-

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BlazeFr0st [2017-10-06 22:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Why is moondancers hair so washed out? It’s usually a much brighter blue and blonde. Is it from stress?

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BenevolentBovine In reply to BlazeFr0st [2017-10-26 16:48:14 +0000 UTC]

According to Lop, Moondancer tried to dye his mane black but failed so it's just washed out and gray instead

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BlazeFr0st In reply to BenevolentBovine [2017-10-27 18:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Ah that makes sense thank you for clearIng hat up :3

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CrescentScript In reply to BlazeFr0st [2017-10-12 05:00:35 +0000 UTC]

I thought it might be from using the dark magic

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BlazeFr0st In reply to CrescentScript [2017-10-12 11:22:39 +0000 UTC]

Ah I see that’s cool :3 

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AlanNights2013 In reply to ??? [2017-10-06 19:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Moondancer, you prick :v

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Anubis-hound In reply to ??? [2017-09-28 20:59:55 +0000 UTC]

The way Moondancer is going he's going to get caught easily. He never should have gone to see the parents of his victim.

Goodness I made his sound like a murderer or something....

I'm glad that Chakra sees through Moony's crap though.

And plus, if stealing magic from everyone didn't work for Tirek, what makes Moondancer think it'll work for him? Lol. 

Moondancer's magic talisman/medallion/whatever leaves behind a huge trail and it'd be easy to track his movements. A statue here, a statue there. It'd be like following a map, only a lot more morbid.

Lastly, I'm excited to see how the story will progress. I kind of hope Moony comes close to accomplishing his plans because I want to see how far the heros will go to take him down.

P.S. Since Midnight's consciousness still exists I think she has a chance to live again. I mean, look at Discord. Dude was trapped in a statue for millennia probably and he turned out just fine!

And sure, MAYBE it had something to do with him being the all-powerful god of chaos, but.... Whatever I can dream can't I?

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DuskaDoesEverything In reply to Anubis-hound [2019-08-23 02:46:48 +0000 UTC]

Technically he IS a murderer.

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SatyrSong99 [2017-09-28 20:33:09 +0000 UTC]

AHUFSHGFUIWGEEWGEWOHGEIGEHGESHVUIGE

MA HEART

...

MA SOUL

TTT-TTT


Keep up the good work Lop! X3

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Cynder997 [2017-09-22 05:45:02 +0000 UTC]

So... where do I start with this series?

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Helloitsyellow In reply to Cynder997 [2017-09-24 04:43:23 +0000 UTC]

This is the chronological folder, but it's not finished yet: lopoddity.deviantart.com/galle…

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AlanNights2013 In reply to Helloitsyellow [2017-10-06 19:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Lopoddity In reply to AlanNights2013 [2017-10-15 13:33:03 +0000 UTC]

That folder is in chronological order.

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AlanNights2013 In reply to Lopoddity [2017-10-15 16:38:12 +0000 UTC]

then sorry's from my friends. (they had my account for use)

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Helloitsyellow In reply to AlanNights2013 [2017-10-07 00:22:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh, really? I don't think so... I mean, I see the drawing of Starswirl the Bearded before a few little comic things of young Cupcake, and I know that the drawings of young Cupcake were posted before Lop came up with female Starswirl. Even if you weren't around back then you can still see that the drawings aren't in Lop's earlier style. It's just, not only do I see a mix of old and new in the folder, they all seem to go from "this happened first" to "this happened last", like first Starswirl, then Trixie and Blueblood, then Trixie being taken in by Maud, Moodancer calling Maud "mama", etc. etc. The characters go from baby to child to teen to adult. I'm pretty sure it's in chronological order.

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AlanNights2013 In reply to Helloitsyellow [2017-10-08 00:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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Helloitsyellow In reply to AlanNights2013 [2017-10-13 22:55:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay.

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NomeArts [2017-09-20 02:14:47 +0000 UTC]

I NEED MORE 

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SlowBluntSmoka [2017-09-19 17:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Moondancer you are pissin me off boy 

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MudkipzUniverse [2017-09-16 17:01:56 +0000 UTC]

oh no...


MOON WTF BOI YOU GONNA DIE AND NOT EVEN FRIENDSHIP WILL BE ABLE TO SAVE YOU OH SHIT OH MY GOD

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OhBandera [2017-09-09 02:31:35 +0000 UTC]

OH SHIT

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autumntoxicity [2017-09-07 19:44:08 +0000 UTC]

That....little... BASTARD

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Procket12 [2017-09-05 08:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Yep, Moondancer's going to go on a kill crazy rampage of anyone he thinks has ever wronged him, even if they have or not. *Grabs Popcorn*

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urzapw2000 [2017-09-05 06:06:07 +0000 UTC]

just a couple short stories about various characters of Lopoddity  reacting to Midnight's crystallization.

one~
Pandora floated in mid-air above Midnight's crystalline body. the violet glow emanating from her body shifted and swirled, sometimes brightest around her chest, othertimes around her eyes. wisps of magic occasionally connected Pandora to Midnight, as if probing the unyielding once-flesh. she had arrived in Ponyville as soon as she had heard the dire news about her friend and somewhat rival. Sunset and Starlight sat on the couch with tear stained faces, leaning on each other for support. the door to the kitchen slowly opened and Cupcake emerged, bearing tea and her namesake on a platter that was balanced on her back.
"Boss? you told me to tell you when three hours was up."
with a groan Pandora loosened her pose and floated herself down to the second couch. she looked rather drained.
"can't you do anything?" asked Sunset while Starlight made a whimpering sound in her throat.
Pandora sighed, looking into the tea that Cupcake had given her. "I have good news and bad news. first off the bad news is that there's nothing i can do right now. whatever did this to her was thorough... there isn't a single trace of her essence left in her body. i can't rebuild from nothing."
"so she'll stay like this for- for-" Starlight bust into tears, unable to continue.
"no" said Pandora.
"what?" both Sunset and Starlight's eyes had widened at Pandora's firm tone. "but you said-"
"I can't do anything right now." Pandora repeated. "whatever did this- and I do mean what- was thorough. nothing of her being or essence is left within her body. but that is itself some good news." Sunset and Starlight stared at Pandora, uncomprehending. Pandora continued, "if her essence is completely gone, that means that it is whole. wherever she is, whatever took her, the core of her being is intact. and that means that if we can find this thing and defeat it..."
"she'll come back to us!" Sunset murmured, Starlight looking too choked up for words. "but are you sure something did this to her?"
"there is no way a misfired spell could have completely removed her being from her body. there would be traces left. I've read of spells gone bad like that and this doesn't fit at all." again the grieving mothers were struck by the former Princess's newfound confidence.
"Pandora-" began Sunset.
"you've changed" finished Starlight.
"I've been trying to find myself since i left." Pandora looked embarrassed while she said this. "maybe i succeeded a little. so, um..." a pause fell across the room. "I'll keep in touch and send word if i find anything, alright?" Pandora snapped her fingers and a door appeared in the middle of the room. "oh, one last thing," Pandora looked back into the room while Cupcake slid through the door under her. "Please don't tell mom that I was here. I'm really not ready for that yet."
Starlight and Sunset's answers were made to a closed and fading door.

two~
"AAAAAND I'M STILL HERE, MIIIIISSING YOOOOOOOOU" Prima Donna's tears cut through even her mascara and left trails down her cheeks. this was her saddest song and left her drained, her head hung almost between her forelegs as the curtain closed in front of her. almost at once a chant of 'encore' began from the audience. Written Note, Prima's manager and PR consultant, walked past the members of Prima's back-up band.
"they want an encore." she said with a ghost of a smile, knowing full well what Prima Donna's reaction was likely to be.
a smile formed on Prima's lips. "and they'll get one." she said. "but i need a few minutes to recover."
"I'll tell them." said Written Note, now fully smiling. she liked these signs that Prima was still herself despite the dark tone of her newest song. as Prima headed to the makeup room, Written Word pushed through the curtain to the stage. the crowd quieted at once as Prima's fans stared at Written Note, some looked fearful, others hopeful. "Your attention please," she said, unnecessarily, "Prima Donna will do an encore," the crowd cheered, "but i'm afraid she needs a moment to recover from that last song. in the meantime there is time for you to use the facilities or visit the concessions or souvenir stands. if you want to pre-order a recording of this concert, that's where to go! also before i forget, please remember to keep an eye and ear out for any information pertaining to Midnight Abyss, aka Morning Glory. thank you! Prima will be right out." she finished with a grin and ducked back trough the curtain. walking past the band, she made her way to the Makeup room. "Prima? are you-" she paused in the doorway, watching Prima Donna fiddle with a bottle of pink liquid. Prima's makeup no longer showed signs of her earlier tears. "Prima?"
"this was the last thing she brewed," said Prima, turning the bottle so Written could see it. 'Throat Restoring Elixir' was written in elegant writing. "she was the only one who could make it like this. it tastes good, it doesn't feel like i'm drinking cement when i swallow, and it actually works." Prima sighed as she replaced the bottle in her bag. "I miss her. she was cranky and creepy but I miss her."
Written Note gave Prima a sad smile of her own. "we'll find something out. just believe."
Prima smiled. "you sound like me."
"my inspiration."
Prima laughed. "you're good! OK! I'm ready! Time to storm the battlements!" Prima spun and left the room at a full gallop. soon Written heard her voice from the stage. "Alright every-pony!! Are you ready to get loud?! one two a one two three four! It doesn't matter what shape you're in, you've been my friend trough thick and thin!" the crown cheered and sang along to 'Truffle's Song', a Prima Donna fan favorite. Written Note's smile widened. this had been another great concert.

i hope you liked those!

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GamzeenMakaral [2017-09-04 21:25:01 +0000 UTC]

I want someone to come by and knock him down. HARD. Knock him off his pegs and bruise his pride, destroy that hope, and WRECK his devious little mind. He ruined his own life with obsession and then started ruining the lives of those around him. Literally the worst. Imma cry! My boy's gone and I'll never see him again!!!! 😭😭😭😭

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Tyrell97 [2017-09-04 15:26:21 +0000 UTC]

Omg! I l a rescue mission coming on! All we need is Chakra, Skyla, um...hhm....someone unexpected and a fourth pony. Because I really want this band of odd squads to happen!

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urzapw2000 In reply to Tyrell97 [2017-10-18 05:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Pandora and Thorax?

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Tyrell97 In reply to urzapw2000 [2017-11-05 05:07:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes!

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