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The house was quiet. The silence was almost painful.

Patiently, Moondancer waited while Sunset Shimmer poured him a fresh cup of tea. The teapot trembled in the grip of her magic, and her eyes were brimming with tears. Starlight Glimmer neatly leaned over to take the teapot from her wife. She wrapped gentle, comforting hooves around Sunset, and the golden unicorn immediately turned and buried her face against Starlight's chest. The silence returned.

Over in the corner, Chakra Blossom sat holding his own cup of tea. It'd grown cold long ago, but he stared down into the still, sweet-smelling liquid, transfixed by his reflection. His eyes were misty.


The air was choked with a fog of thick, crushing grief. The loss was too fresh, like a wound still bleeding.


Anxiety gnawed at Moondancer's belly. He'd come to Midnight's home under the guise of expressing his grief and consoling her mothers, but really he'd hoped to tactfully sniff out hints about what Starlight and Sunset really knew...most importantly, whether they'd be able to trace their daughter's fate back to him. At first, he'd been confident in his probing abilities, but now, taking in the tear-stained, utterly distraught faces of two mothers in mourning...well, it was sparking something far too much like guilt in Moondancer's gut. This would be more difficult than he'd anticipated, but he had to press forward. Moondancer cleared his throat.


"I...came as soon as I heard."


Starlight's eyes numbly slid up to meet his gaze. "...Thank you." She coughed awkwardly, attempting to summon a mask of professionalism. "We're grateful, dear." She said finally. "We...know you and Morning Glory were close."

"She was like a sister to me." Moondancer explained, smiling sweetly. "Not by blood of course. I always tried to guide her, to make use of her incredible talents...I always considered Morning Glory to be my little sister, but I suspect she saw me as a nagging, overprotective nuisance." He chuckled.

"Nonsense, dear." Starlight made a feeble attempt at an assuring smile. "I'm sure Morning Glory appreciated all you did for her. We certainly did." She looked down at her hooves, and her voice grew distant. "....I remember so clearly the day she was born. Holding this teeny thing in my hooves for the first time... just the sweetest, most perfect little ball of pink fluff..." Her eyes began to glitter again, and she bit her lip.

"...She was our sunshine." Sunset said quietly, sagging against her wife. "....I just don't know who could have done it." Sunset whispered. "I...I can't fathom who could have hated our daughter so much." She bit her lip, ears slicking back in pain. "We managed to transport the statue back home without damaging it, but Twilight.....T-Twilight said-" Sunset's breathing hitched. Starlight glanced up at her, and quickly reached to hold her hoof. Sunset sucked in a deep breath, trying to choke down a tidal wave of emotion. Moondancer waited carefully, ears pricked, heart stuck in his throat.

"...Princess Twilight ran so many tests. She stayed up all night." Sunset finally breathed, looking Moondancer in the eye. "But every test yielded the same result. It appears as though something managed to strip away Morning's very being-mind, magic, and soul. The crystal statue is all we managed to recover. Poor Bertram refuses to leave her side, but the fact is, the statue has no soul inside. Twilight says that for all....f-for all intents and purposes...o-our filly is d-dea-" Sunset couldn't finish, leaning forward to bury her face in her hooves. She began to weep now, loud, broken sobs that racked her whole body. Shame settled in Moondancer's stomach like a heavy stone, and he fidgeted uncomfortably.

"Dead." Starlight finished, gritting her teeth. Though she shut her eyes, a few boiling tears still managed to squeeze through. "If...i-if that's true....i-if something, some monster took our daughter away, I...." Her horn began to glow, and air became charged with her magic. "I-I'll....there won't be a corner of Equestria they'll be able to hide from me. I'll blind him, I-I'll tear him to bloody pieces, I'll-" Like Sunset, she too broke suddenly, crumpling into a weak, sobbing mess. "I'll..."

"Oh my." Moondancer reached out to touch her shoulder, comforting and gentle. "Ah...there, there, dear. Please, you shouldn't work yourself up like this. I assure you, there is no monster to be hunted down-please, assuming foul play will only cause you unnecessary stress." He said kindly. "If there was some wicked beast lurking about, stealing away magic in the dead of night, surely there would've been reports of it from all across Equestria? And surely it would've been hunted down by now?" He swallowed, letting his ears droop in sorrow. "...Although it's difficult to accept...I believe that what happened to Morning Glory may have been, ah...self-inflicted."

Starlight's eyes went wide, and she exchanged quick, terrified glances with Sunset. "W-what are you saying? You think....this might've been an accident?"

Moondancer nodded grimly. "Unfortunately. Morning Glory was truly your daughter-so very talented at magic. But she's always had her fixation with the dark arts...and it'd always worried me. Growing up, I always tried to guide her onto a less sinister path, but, ah...well, we all know what a headstrong young lady she was." He chuckled, a bit sadly. "She loved her witchcraft. But the fact is, its always been a very volatile, unpredictable branch of magic. It's quite possible that Morning was testing out some new hex, or curse...and something went terribly, terribly wrong."

Starlight Glimmer covered her mouth, and her wide eyes filled with tears. Sunset echoed her wife's look of horror. It was clear that they believed Moondancer without question...and they were quickly making the mental connections he'd hoped they would. Clever mares. They'd never discouraged their daughter's love of the dark arts...were they then, to blame for her death?


"Bullshit."


A deep voice suddenly cut through the air, startling the trio. It was Chakra Blossom, who seemed to be trembling with barely-contained anger. He stood to his hooves, locking eyes with Moondancer.

"You think Nighty was stupid enough to do this to herself? Midnight Abyss was a damned genius." Chakra growled. "And you'd know that if the two of you were as close as you say, friend."

Moondancer's mouth opened and closed, like a fish. He'd been taken off guard. "Well, I, ah-"

"I don't like your tone, Mister Blossom." Starlight Glimmer stepped boldly between the two stallions, guarding Moondancer. "Moony's just as distraught as the rest of us, and thus far, he's provided the only answer to all this that makes any sense. It...it may not be a pleasant answer, but it does make sense." She reached up to wipe at her wet eyes. "Celestia. Morning Glory was our baby. Our new beginning, our dawn. Sunset and I...we haven't always made the best choices. Haven't always been the best ponies. We'd always hoped that our daughter would be better than us. We were so proud when her magic developed early...Oh, but then the witchcraft business started....Our little filly didn't want to wear dresses and study under Princess Celestia, no, she wanted to brew ancient poisons and test out enchantments on cadavers." She sniffled. "Oh, we should have known no good could come of it..."

"She was happy, Miss Glim." Chakra reached out a comforting hoof. "I remember, back when we were kids, the first time I agreed to let her test out a potion in my ma's kitchen. It ended up exploding, total failure, took forever to clean all that salamander slime off the ceiling, but...you know, I think that's the first time I remember hearing her laugh." Chakra smiled then, and it was nostalgic, tinged with sadness.

He looked to Starlight, hoping that she too had found comfort in the memory, but the mare took a sudden step back from him.

"...That's right." She whispered, her eyes going wide, as though she'd just remembered something. "Morning Glory had always been a good little filly. She never tampered with witchcraft before....not until you came along." She lifted a hoof to her mouth, and her eyes met Chakra's.

"It was your fault."

The atmosphere in the room changed at once. In an instant, Sunset took her place at Starlight's side, and both mares advanced on Chakra, nearly bristling with maternal fury.

"Whoa, easy, easy!" Chakra lifted his hooves, trying to calm them. "Please. Up until not too long ago, Nighty was my friend. I always tried to give her space to be herself. I know she appreciated that-hell, she told me herself!"

Moondancer was nothing, if not an opportunist. A wicked wildfire was blooming in front of him. He only needed to feed it.

"I'm sorry to say it, but I always suspected he was a bad influence." Moondancer said, shaking his head. "I always told Morning Glory that nothing good would come of hanging around some deadbeat, good-for-nothing hippie."

"What, you think Midnight didn't know I was trash?" Chakra laughed, but it was bitter. His eyes were curiously shiny. "She was smart enough to think for herself, dipshit. She ditched me a while ago. Dumped me as a friend, because I was too mean to somepony I was supposed to care about. She hated that."

Moondancer paused, sensing victory. "...Dear me, Mister Blossom. I don't think you're making the best case for yourself."

"It's not about me." Chakra countered, looking round at everyone in the room. "It's about her. Look, I get it." He snorted. "Missus Glimmer, Missus Shimmer, you loved your daughter. I get it. And I do mean no offense here-but none of you knew Midnight like I knew her. She was never your smiling little sunshine fluff filly, or whatever the hell you wanted her to be. She was a person. She was mean, she was weird, she was creepy, and she'd been that way since the day I met her. She was smart. She loved all this witch stuff, she knew curses and hexes like the back of her hoof. There's no way in hell some accident got the better of Midnight Abyss. If she's dead, it's because someone killed her." Chakra's voice became a cold, deadly hiss, and he leaned forward, eyes boring into Moondancer's.

"....And this little prick knows something."


Time seemed to slow to a crawl. For a long, agonizing moment, Moondancer was paralyzed against Chakra's glare. Chakra knew. That damned layabout pegasus knew. Moondancer felt the terrified hammer of his own heart, and desperately, he wondered if it'd be better to confess to his crime, confess now, before the two powerful unicorns before him figured out Chakra's words for themselves-

The words felt heavy on Moondancer's tongue. "I-I..."

"How dare you."

In a heartbeat, Starlight Glimmer shoved in front of Moondancer, her eyes blazing like a volcano ready to erupt. "How dare you?!" She repeated, her voice shaking the walls like thunder. "How dare you accuse somepony in my home!" She bellowed at Chakra, "My daughter is dead, and if any miserable, wretched soul is to blame for it, it's you!"

Wide-eyed, Chakra took a step back, blindsided by her venom. Furious and wounded, he struggled to steady himself. "Ma'am, I'm only trying to help." He tried. "I don't know much, but there's one thing I'm sure of-Midnight hated this little jerk." Again, he turned a withering glare upon Moondancer. "I trust that she had a damned good reason to."

"Moondancer has been a loyal friend of our family since he was a colt." Starlight said coldly. "It's not his character being assessed right now, Mister Blossom. I'd much rather examine the pegasus right in front of me-the big, lumbering layabout that claims he knew our own daughter better than we did."

Chakra's ears slicked back in anger and hurt. "...You know, I'm starting to think that I did." He said darkly. "Some mothers you were."


Sunset flinched, and Starlight's wrath finally boiled over, her patience at its end. "Get out!" Starlight screamed, louder than Moondancer had ever heard her. She caught Sunset, who'd collapsed again into pained sobbing. "Get out of my house, and never come back!"  

Moondancer seized the opportunity. He lit his horn in warning, and took a bold step forward. "Mister Blossom, I believe it's time for you to go."

Chakra looked to him, eyes nearly smouldering with hate. He flared his wings wide, as though considering openly attacking the white unicorn-but suddenly seemed to think better of it. Instead, he simply turned and left, slamming the door on his way out.

 Starlight let out a heavy sigh, slumping against her wife. The fight seemed to have gone out of both mothers.

"I'm sorry you had to see that, Moony, dear." She apologized numbly, "What a terrible mess everything's becoming..."

Moondancer blinked, stunned that everything had clicked into place so smoothly. He hesitated, nearly afraid to believe that somehow, he'd come out victorious. Midnight's parents didn't suspect him. They trusted him. Starlight Glimmer placed a hoof on his back, comforting her daughter's killer.

"You'll stay for dinner, won't you? You're looking so pale these days..."

Moondancer smiled, warm and kind.

"Oh no, Missus Glimmer, I couldn't impose..."

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With a fond farewell to Sunset and Starlight, Moondancer had departed from Midnight's home. The weight of his traveling cloak felt familiar and warm, and it carefully hid the red-tipped horn tied around his neck. Moondancer trotted through the Everfree Forest, his hooves light with a renewed sense of confidence, a feeling of invincibility. The sun had set, casting the forest in still, eerie darkness, but Moondancer pressed on, unafraid.

A voice, faint and irritable, spoke suddenly in his mind.


You worm. You loathsome little scrap of toad waste.


"Celestia above." Moondancer drawled, "You'd be so much easier to mourn if you'd just stay quiet, Midnight."


You think you're clever, don't you? Think you've got my mothers fooled? They'll figure you out, and then they'll skin you alive.
 

"They don't suspect a thing. They trust me. And why shouldn't they trust sweet, polite little Moony?" Moondancer sneered, mocking her. "I'm a model pony, after all."


Says the pony wandering alone through the woods, talking to himself.


Moondancer startled, realizing she was quite right. He'd been speaking aloud to a voice in his head. "....Shut up, Midnight." He whispered, cheeks turning pink.


So, you've managed to stumble your way into getting away with murder. For now. You're still a joke, Moondancer. Tell me, what's next? What's your plan here? Because I really can't wait to see how all this blows up in your stupid, smug little face.


Moondancer's face soured, and he opened his mouth to sneer a response-when quite suddenly, he caught sight of a lone unicorn walking through the forest. He was a thin, young stallion, with a basket of fresh-picked Everfree timber berries slung across his back. The pony was whistling merrily to himself as he skipped along. He hadn't noticed Moondancer yet.


Dimly, Moondancer felt the weight of the horn against his chest. A strange, faint hunger began to stir inside him.


What's next, Midnight? Hmm.


Moondancer began to slink forward, silently stalking the young unicorn. The pony's hind hoof snagged on a tree root, and some of the berries spilled from his baskets. With a swear, the pony lit his horn, trying to gather up the mess.

Poor thing. The woods weren't safe for a pony alone at night.

Moondancer licked his dry lips, and the horn at his chest began to glow a dim crimson, encouraging him onward. He'd take this pony. Just the one. Just one more soul....


Just to see what would happen. Nopony was around to see. Nopony would miss this young fool.


The woods weren't safe for a pony at night.


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so it continues




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Mage-elf-Tyra [2017-08-26 00:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Sooooo.... when are you going to draw/write how Starlight, Sunset Shimmer, and Chakra find out? Because I can imagine that when Starlight finds out, she is going to go so ballistic that her fury will unlock a level of power within her that not even amateur magician Moony could even fathom of obtaining

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AromaLadyNova [2017-08-26 00:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Interesting/sad to see that Midnight's parents still don't use her chosen name.

One thing that confuses me is Chakra's presence in this scene. If Starlight and Sunset didn't approve of Midnight's friendship with him, I can't imagine that their house would be the most welcoming of settings for a tea party. I don't really understand why he'd want to go visit them, especially since he's been shown to be kind of a sociopath anyway; was he so shocked by Midnight's death that he was forced to finally acknowledge a need for the comfort of others?

Anyway. Brilliant art and story, as always.

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Gay-L0ser In reply to AromaLadyNova [2017-08-26 00:11:25 +0000 UTC]

He cares about Nightyyyy. They've been best friends since primary school.

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Juniper-Speedpaint In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 22:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Is Midnight going to come back? I'm so worried about her!

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superwaffle350 In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 22:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Okay... Chakra's a jerk, but Moondancer is just DEPLORABLE at this point... lying through his teeth to Midnight's moms... letting Chakra take the blame... 

DOUCHE! 

Ugh... I'm just glad that Midnight's essence is still seperate and fighting. Maybe she can get her body back. Heck, if she can reanimate a corpse, and return soul to flesh, someone else could read her notes. The just need to gt her out of Moondancer first. 

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TaiCat In reply to superwaffle350 [2017-08-25 23:36:06 +0000 UTC]

my bet is that after absorbing so many souls, Moondancer will become a literal Legion and all of these voices will leave him nutri-brain blendered

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ShadeySix [2017-08-25 21:53:26 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see what comeuppances Moondancer gets.

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InkedGalaxies In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 21:02:14 +0000 UTC]

I love Moony
I just do
he's amazing

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Clarity83 In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 19:43:38 +0000 UTC]

no pity for moondancer

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ThePilot1124 In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 17:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Hidden by Owner

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KingArthur5 In reply to ThePilot1124 [2017-08-25 18:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Fandom. This is now less about the show and more about a side universe Lopidity made of it. Not to sound brash, but creating a whole world to tell a story is very difficult, and it is much more fun and you can go much further if the basics are already developed. Alternate universes like this one take the starting point of a show or story or game or anything to set up some ground rules, then artists are allowed to have more time and energy to focus on the aspects they care morea bout.

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Brot-Dae In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 17:12:34 +0000 UTC]

Is it only me or Moondancer's horn is actually longer than other's?

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BerryPunchrules In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 15:33:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh holy heck, I'm worried Moondancer will hunt down Chakra.

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spiritlit In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 11:37:36 +0000 UTC]

takes one to know one, I guess. also was actually rooting for pre-redemption arc Charkra freakin' Blossom, Douchebag Extraordinare in this one, so. Wow, congrats. 
and hey I guess Moony has been staring into the abyss so long that the abyss is actually replying back!! Three cheers for my boy Moondancer yo (( but not really cause he's kindaaaa an A grade scumbag now. oopsie. )).

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tita2703 In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 11:35:26 +0000 UTC]

What's going on tho

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jobot343 In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 11:23:48 +0000 UTC]

Wish I had a modicum of interest in MLP. Then I'd more enjoy your art being on my front page every other day lol.

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radiiiance In reply to jobot343 [2017-08-25 20:52:17 +0000 UTC]

I don't care for MLP much anymore, but I love Lop's Next Gen more than the show anyday

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SilverWolfMyght In reply to radiiiance [2017-08-29 19:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Ikr!

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TaiCat In reply to radiiiance [2017-08-25 23:24:59 +0000 UTC]

^ concur

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ThePilot1124 In reply to jobot343 [2017-08-25 17:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

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Crysomandiaz In reply to jobot343 [2017-08-25 13:22:07 +0000 UTC]

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aquadove In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 10:59:01 +0000 UTC]

Right in the feels 

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unitress In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 08:32:55 +0000 UTC]

lemme just take a step back
wipe the tears from my eyes
breathe
THEN SCReaM WTH OMG I LOVE THIS SM I JUST JUST JUST JUST JUST JUST READ THIS AND ADJFIBGUOERWINKACLJ GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD LORDY LOOOOO


bless

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Vespayik In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 06:49:33 +0000 UTC]

DANG. I really want to see Midnight's parents apologize to Chakra if they ever learn the truth... he seems to understand ppl really well and so he makes a skilled manipulative jerk, but then at the same time he can sniff out Moondancer's backstabbing bullshit.

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vgmaster9 In reply to Vespayik [2017-11-20 02:01:40 +0000 UTC]

And if they do, I hope Chakra rejects their apologies. Just the fact that they trust Moondancer more than they trust him.

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urzapw2000 In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 05:58:49 +0000 UTC]

small story:

Pandora: Moondancer! Mooney it's time to go!
Moondancer: ...gone... they're all... gone...
P: Moondancer this place is falling down around our heads, we need to get out of here!
MD: I...I let them go...I beat the darkness...the horn...I won...
(another large chunk of the ceiling broke loose and fell toward Moondancer)
P: Graa! (Pandora managed to halt and hold this mass of rubble as well but she was at her limit) Moondancer snap out of it! WE NEED TO GO!!!
MD: ERK HACK (black tar splattered from Moondancer's mouth. he wobbled and his left foreleg shattered, the crystal suddenly brittle. now on only three legs, Moondancer collapsed)
P: Moondancer! Move! (with a resounding crunch, the floors above broke and fell toward the still prone Moondancer) MOOONEY!!!
(a bright, shining light burst forth from around Moondancer, catching the falling stone and holding it in place. in the ringing silence, Moondancer looked up at the source of the light and uttered one, single, impossible name)
MD: Midnight... but... how... why?
Midnight: Why? because even as misguided as you are, not even you deserve to die for something that can be so easily undone. How? because i willed it. you had my very being trapped inside of you for this long and you don't have the slightest idea what I am capable of, do you? keeping myself here long enough for you two to escape is child's play compared to what I did every day. (a small smile crossed Midnight Abyss's face) Live Moondancer. heal. return to who you were you meant to be. Pandora.
P: (Pandora started, having been staring at Midnight's spectral form)uh, what?
M: I can hold the debris, get him out of here!
P: what will happen to you? (Pandora's aura wrapped around Moondancer, lifting him off the floor)
M: I'll return to my body as soon as I relax my focus. I can feel it calling me.
P: alright then, see you in five.(Pandora's aura wrapped around herself as well and her and Moondancer began to fade)
MD: Midnight
M: we'll talk when we've both somewhat recovered, Mooney.
(a smile lifted the corners of Moondancer's face as the teleport spell took effect. soon all that was left was the fading light of Pandora's magic. Midnight remained for a brief moment after before she herself winked out. the dark castle collapsed into ruin)

almost at that very moment in Ponyville

she could feel herself. her body was her own again. she could tell, without opening here eyes, that she was in her old room in her Mothers's house. so many memories. she inhaled, the first time in far too long. almost instantly she felt something nearby shift. smiling, Midnight opened her eyes.
M: hello mothers, hello Bertram.
Starlight and Sunset: Morning Glory!
Bertram: RRRrrr!
M: yeah, I'm back!

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DarkValon In reply to urzapw2000 [2017-08-25 06:24:04 +0000 UTC]

I get Starlight is upset... But I never liked her. Even if she's reformed. Heh, Moondancer a "loyal friend of the family" indeed, just because she's best friends with Trixie. Sorry huh, loyalty doesn't work like that. Just because the parents are friends doesn't mean the kids have to or will be. He might have genuinely cared about her once. But BOTH made it clear they sure didn't as they grew up. 

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urzapw2000 In reply to DarkValon [2017-08-26 06:15:22 +0000 UTC]

i'm not sure that you meant to reply to my post...

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spiderwilliam13 In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 05:50:48 +0000 UTC]

And Moondancer descends further into the abyss, not only does he not give a fuck about killing Midnight Abyss but he stood in the room with her grieving mothers, diverted the blame, and lied right to their faces. By now his heart is made of stone and there is no reasoning that will stop him.

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DestinyL In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 04:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Well fuck! I'm so glad to see that Chakra and Midnight wound up playing such big parts in your NextGen, especially since you made them for no reason to begin with.

Also, Moondancer only called her by her given name prior to this, but as soon as he left her parents house, the voice in his head was Midnight, not Morning Glory. Was that intentional?

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AlfieBro [2017-08-25 03:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Okay this is going to be a little weird but in this art Moondancer reminds me of Yuri Petrov from Tiger & Bunny XD

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TheFowlWitch [2017-08-25 02:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Moonie you're getting your ass into some serious shit lmao. For once I feel bad for Chakra. 

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basarakami In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 02:15:20 +0000 UTC]

All your Moondancer and Chakra narratives are so damn well written. I really can't wait to see where this rollercoaster ride of yours will take us and all the feels you'll put us through.

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JibberJibbs In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 01:40:32 +0000 UTC]

I hate Moondancer, what an ass. (Great job on making a character so hated though! He's really well written!) But I gotta say I'm pissed at Midnight's parents. They won't even use her preferred name.

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SillyMadman In reply to ??? [2017-08-25 01:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Goddamn. Moondancer's a piece of shit.

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DatArtisticYoshi In reply to ??? [2017-08-24 23:46:25 +0000 UTC]

I have never wanted to punch a unicorn so much in my life

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ppgzmlpfimlover In reply to ??? [2017-08-24 21:56:17 +0000 UTC]

That moment when AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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TheREALMoistDoritos In reply to ppgzmlpfimlover [2017-08-24 23:46:42 +0000 UTC]

W H A T

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ppgzmlpfimlover In reply to TheREALMoistDoritos [2017-08-25 17:14:28 +0000 UTC]

You know, that moment whenAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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ArtGuruSauce [2017-08-24 21:37:48 +0000 UTC]

Moondancer...you unbelievable shitbag.

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creamy-moon In reply to ArtGuruSauce [2017-08-24 22:45:40 +0000 UTC]

IKR I want to punch him

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Roseart57 In reply to ??? [2017-08-24 21:37:17 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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totally-not-popular [2017-08-24 21:35:22 +0000 UTC]

now I'm really interested in this unicorn is

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EurekaTheDragon [2017-08-24 21:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Moondancer must realise that if he continues to turn ponies to statues that his 'accident' theory will go up in smoke. Just like he, hopefully, will. Just waiting for Chakra to follow up his suspicions of Moondancer and catches the bugger in the act or talking to Morning and his other victims. If he's already feeling the 'hunger' and bloodlust now, there will be certainly more. And eventually, his arrogance will get the better of him. Anyone else agrees with me?

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Pandoramouse In reply to ??? [2017-08-24 20:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Moondancer what the fuck.

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blackangel95 [2017-08-24 20:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Just gonna quietly cheer on Moondancer

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flashf0x [2017-08-24 20:30:29 +0000 UTC]

I have become addicted to these and I am not even a big MLP fan. 

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FruityCup-AJ In reply to flashf0x [2017-08-25 00:15:25 +0000 UTC]

ikr XD

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SandwichGab In reply to flashf0x [2017-08-24 23:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Lmao, same here.

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Colbyr In reply to ??? [2017-08-24 20:30:29 +0000 UTC]

Have we seen Chakra and Midnight's fallout yet? I don't recall it, but I might be wrong. 

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