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Do you post this comic anywhere on the web?Β Looks real good!
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Thank you.Β Right now it's only on DA sites, but I will see what I can do
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Comicfury (dot) com is a free web comic posting....Β You upload and set dates and times for the pages to be released!Β It is real easy to navigate. I've done several comics on there.Β Once again GREAT work!
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Thank you again.Β i am learning to use Comicfury.Β 
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Not a problem... Also they allow you to advertise through your web comic page so there is the potential to make money!Β The forum on there is also very useful.
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The comic's getting more and more interesting, it's great!
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Thank you
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I'm having trouble putting a comment together that is totally based on the comic. I read the story so I know what happens and all lol. I also wasn't sure to comment on your post or on Bobanns. So I have decided to comment on the story here and the art on his. Commenting on Parts 6-10...
I like how this scene rings with nastalgia from Episode IV when the Falcon was escaping the Death Star. It references dialog and visuals but you didn't just copy and paste. It really aids in making your story feel like Star Wars and not just a scifi story. Then you break free from referencing that scene when Conrad's turret blows. It is a very well written passage. I like the drama and the suspense. You'd think Conrad's situation would either pass or be resolved quickly, but you draw it out giving the "seconds feel like hours" feel.
I must say that I am surprised that you don't provide links to the actual fan fiction in the description. It wouldn't only let those who hate cliffhangers read ahead, but it would also allow people to go back and read up to this point and give everything more emotional gravity.
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I do have a couple links in earlier panels, but I should give a link to the story in each one.Β I'm taking it a step at a time, linking the pages first, then the story itself.Β Of course I'm assuming people start at the beginning, which probably does not happen often, lol.Β But yes, that would be a good idea to do....
Thank you for your critique.Β I love referencing a lot from the old trilogy in unusual places, and I love referencing unusual quotes like Han's "It was a boring conversation anyway.Β We're going to have company!" or "You're far too trusting", etc.Β Reference just enough, then pull the story into another direction.
Though, to be fair, I gave free reign to design the story in his own way, even modifying some of the dialogue, so even I do not fully know how he will interpret the scenes, but I simply love the way he does it.Β I love being surprised.
Awesome thoughts!!
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Thank you, I'm very glad you are enjoying it
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Oh man... a cliffhanger
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Thank you!!Β Very glad you enjoyed it!Β Next 5 pages will be posted in 2-3 weeks
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