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for future reference, the swear word "shit" isn't used often in star wars. however, "frack" and "kriff" would suffice
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True, I kind of took some risks with the language and subject matter.Β In all honesty, when I wrote the story, I never expected it could become a comic at the time.Β Then came along, and a ball got rolling.Β I sort of forgot all about it.Β I do use a lot of swear words in the story, but I only used them to really emphasize the moment, and not make the characters into potty mouths.
Still, thank you for the advice.Β I'm writing the next adventure of Ahsoka, Bariss and Asajj, and I want to take that into consideration if wants to continue making this into a long running comicΒ
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glad i could help
AGH, KRIFF! i dropped my chocolate!!!!!! D}=
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LOL!!!Β While I have time, I am going to go through the stories being worked on by and to re-examine the language I used and change some things before the comic adaptation reaches them.Β That way this can be suitable.Β I'll probably keep some moments, but I will give it a closer look.Β Thanks again for your thoughts
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okay, cool, i'm sure the final products will be awesome!
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