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Loudo In reply to DeviKal [2013-12-02 14:36:03 +0000 UTC]

That's cool, man!
You should try to write that story with your now mature writing skills if you have the time. I'd definitely be interested.

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DeviKal In reply to Loudo [2013-12-02 21:49:25 +0000 UTC]

My writing was maybe a LITTLE impressive, but it was still out of context. Like, there was an influence, however it failed to meet a slow and detailed meet with the plot process. Sure, there was effort, but details were skipped and it was rushed. That's not what I want to see. I want to see something that was built and injected with my integrity and imagination. Taking time, of course. But yeah, I definitely have improved, I suppose. I still just have the lingering conscience of not being a successful writer and knowing that some people may hate it. Some artists are like that, lol. I don't usually criticize my work, but when I do, it's for my good I guess.

Anyway, yeah. I read your story, by the way! I liked it My idea was originally Maxx being an Organization member, however forgotten. I didn't really develop it that much. It followed pretty much the same concept as 358/2 days did, with Maxx disappearing soon later after Xion and Roxas did. Maxx remembers Roxanne, and each day he's mocked by his dreams and sometimes hallucinates him being with her. Since Maxx is obviously Max's nobody, Maxx feels like he doesn't belong where he is and he feels like someone else belonged with Roxanne, yet he's not sure. That's pretty much my headcanon for Maxx lol.

Initially, yeah. That's what I had in mind. I might take my time to publish a small preview, idk.

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Loudo In reply to DeviKal [2013-12-07 14:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm not even a native English speaker, so I know my writing is going to be mediocre at best, no matter how hard  I try. But as long as you aren't charging people for your work, it's alright. If they like they can read, if they don't no harm done.
Btw, I'm glad to know you liked what I've written so far.

And as I said, if you write it, you'll definitely have a reader. I've seen quite a few pictures of KH Max, but surprisingly few fics.

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Loudo In reply to D-Blue02 [2013-10-17 11:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, man. ^_^

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