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LoveToTheCucumber — And They Grew Up - Part 1
Published: 2012-11-07 23:48:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2945; Favourites: 136; Downloads: 7
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Major file alert, lol xDI got this idea for a comic and this is the "prequel" to it.
I know, I know, this is far from my best work. It's really bad, actually -_-'
Before I finish part 2 and submit it, I'll probably redraw this and give it colors and such instead. Just thought I would share it with you since I don't know when I'll get time to draw again. I seriously need to catch up with school!
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Comments: 36
*Professional Voice*
After carefully viewing this piece, I have come to the conclusion that this artist really has great potential. The technique used to draw these characters was inspiring and I'd like to see more. However, I must confess that some of the career choices are a little baffling. I can't really vision Soul Eater Evans being a businessman, but the rest makes a complete analogy to the show. The impact and originality of this piece suffers a bit because of this fact. Other than that, I am completely impressed.
Also:
This is one of the greatest drawings ever created!
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Well, I must say well done, my dear child.
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Aww, thank you so much for the sweet words, but I seriously think you're overestimating this drawing ^^'
Hehe, yes, you're right. Soul as a businessman is kinda out of character. But I just imagine him being good at it if he was born into our world or something, hehe xD That's just a bit of fan service for myself, I guess xD
Anyway, thank you so much for critiquing this! It's really, really appreciated
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You make a good argument, it is kind of creative to change the character a bit.
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AU has always been a "friend" of mine, hehe xD
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Vision- great, the thing is funny to look at and has a good sense what the gang will do in the future, maybe you should show them at their jobs to give more eye candy
Originality- i never seen what gang has done after school. I seen people do it but only tell about them in couples, which i love but is continous. Good job
Technique - the color make them look as a foreshadow to the past but could add a little more color, also you need a little work on drawing the boys musle because kids arms look to big
Impact- it shows what they will do in the future thats more realisitic in the regular world but no so much for adventure. But it was cool to look at
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Thanks you so much for the critique 
About the muscles, yeah, I really need to learn anatomy. That's why I'm practicing so hard 'cause I'm really, really bad at it xD
THANK YOOOU
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Vision- I love the fact that you uses shades instead of colours and that the shading is almost perfect. And is kid wearing a skirt or?
Orginality- I've seen quite a few of these. But it isn't so common.
Technique- I find that the angles and position is well fit and calibrated,(IS this even tech?)
Impact- Its quite nice to see what they'd look like when they are older. The impact for me is great.
Over all, I think this is amazing. Good job. Sorry if my critique sucks, it's my first. But seriously, very well-done and clean. I bid you good ulck with more of your work. Continue the great work.
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Thanks you so much for the awesome critique
I'm not very proud of this, but I'm glad that you don't think it's complete garbage. It's always nice to get another pair of eyes on your work. Best way to get better
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good picture! although i just can't see soul being a businessman
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You're not the only one, apparently xD
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hehe, they try xD
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wait why's soul a business man ???
I thought he would be a death scythe or any thing cooler
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I thought a business man would suit his personality ^^ And if he was just a death scythe, it would be kind of boring since I was going for a sort of alternative universe. Except for Kid. I guess he's just supposed to resemble a school principle.
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i like it but kids outfixx looks wrong to me for some reson
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I'm not a very good clothing designer xD Not taken, haha ^^
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me to it takes me days to think of an outfit even after i'v done the layout for something even if i trace something an i try to put an cloths on them i'll stile take me a day to find something that looks just right
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Note taken* LOL xD!
Yeah, that never happens to me. I just can't get the clothing right xD Probably because the clothes I walk in are so boring and none creative that I can't relate xD!
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I don't know why, but I always envision an adult Death the Kid as looking kinda like Aragorn from Lord of the Rings.
He could have the Lines of Sanzu in his beard.
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Lol xD Oh Kami, the lovely dane, Viggo Mortensen *-* Maybe he could look like that xD? But I wouldn't want my dear Kid to have a beard D:
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Eh, maybe it's just me (but you have to admit that having the Lines of Sanzu in his beard would be pretty damn cool)
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I admit, it could look pretty cool xD!
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Black star in MMA is the best idea ever. I like this continue please
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Thanks^^! I'll try to continue it soon, but I'm very busy at the moment D:
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OH you're welcome XD
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I cracked up as soon as I saw Soul's. I love Kid's. And Black*Star's suits him well.
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Glad it made you laugh ;D
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XD I am too.
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I'm not sure if a business man fits Soul. I think he should be a muscian. Love the drawing , though!
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Yeah, thought about making him a pianist, but the businessman fit my comic idea better. Well, a musician could have done it as well... But I like the idea of him being all formal and stuff xD
Thanks
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