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who knew that colouring was so much effort. D;anyways, i thought i'd try my neeww army of colouring stuff and this is what happened.
it was kind of a toss up between batman and spiderman, but spidey was more colourful. xD so there ~ lol.
i pretty proud of this one, colouring is never my strong point & i'm not too confident with it yet but hopefully i've proved myself wrong.
i know, i know. i suck at the titles.
done in copic markers and prismacolor pencils on smooth bristol board.
ref : [link]
spiderman is (c) to marvel.
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Anime-Akuma [2014-10-10 20:18:22 +0000 UTC]
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I'm not an artistic critique but I can say, this is very great. Being 'original' I say is lower, because Spiderman does have the black spider-man version. This looks very realistic and there is well lighting and shading. The detailing is magnificent, and so is the coloring. I could never do a work of art like this, and Wish I would. I love how the detailing upon the black on the upper-arm, you can see how it is overtaking him. That is my favorite part.
I am surprised on how you put the reflection of buildings in the eyes, unlike lot of artists. This work of art is just marvelous and you should be proud. All I can say down is there is a small crevice-looking part on the head side. But simply wonderful.
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aevrynn [2014-07-14 21:11:24 +0000 UTC]
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Well, this was so awesome I had to write a critique. This is my first critique, actually, so sorry if it sucks. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/> And yeah, I lack the ability to use formal language and shorten stuff. So.
ANYWAY. Umm, yeah... I'll just go through the things one by one. Though I'm not sure what all of them mean. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/> Oh well.
Vision is great. On a first glance, everything is perfect. The picture's full of details, you clearly spent a lot of time on this, and you even made Spidey's eyes reflect the buildings. The shading and lighting is lovely and smooth and the colours match well together. I also love how detailed the spider on his suit it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="
(Smile)"/> And you can actually see his nose through the mask. Now THAT is what I would call paying attention to details. And those eyes. Love those eyes.
But, after a while, you notice small mistakes in it. I guess I've got a few reasons for only giving it 4 stars for vision. Firstly, those buildings are a bit scrambled. I'd recommend using three-point perspective for them. Some of them are a bit slanted, like they've half-sunken into the ground. Otherwise, great work on the details (windows and such) on the buildings. And you also made the further-most buildings lighter, which gives it an extra amount of realism. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="
(Big Grin)"/> I don't have any idea what that venom thing should look like, I don't even know what it is, so I can't say anything about that.
Now, one thing is his hand. Or the fingers, specifically. His thumb looks okay, but the rest of them... Well, they're a bit short and that index finger looks weird. I don't know why. It looks like it's in an unnatural position or something. But I like the cross-hatching and shading on the hand. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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And then the sky. I absolutely adore the colours, but those don't look a lot like clouds. Or whatever those light things are supposed to be. I don't know a lot of skies myself, so I don't really know how you could improve that... Just look at pictures. A lot.
As for originality, a lot of people have probably drawn Spidey in mid-air with a city behind him. I guess the venom stuff adds a tad of originality, so it's not just Spidey in mid-air. It's Spidey in mid air staring at some venom stuff on his hand.
...yeah. Still not very original. :/ But it's kind of a portrait-ish piece, and those are hardly ever very original.
I think I accidentally said a lot about technique in the vision thing. Uh... Well, you certainly seem like you know what you're doing with all the shading and lighting and stuff, even though you said you're not still that good with colouring. Sure, we can see some of the individual lines... but does it really matter? It still looks very realistic. Stop saying you're not good with colouring, there are people who aren't half as good and don't say anything about it. Okay, I'm several years younger, but... it's gonna take a whole lot of years of practice before I reach your skill level.
And yeah, I guess those scrambled buildings have to do with technique. Three-point perspective is a technique. Use it. Or a ruler, at least. I know those buildings are probably very small and hard to fir details into, but for example that building on the bottom-right corner doesn't look rectangle-shaped from above. Which it supposedly is supposed to be?
Um, okay, what the heck is impact supposed to mean? Uh, I checked the faq about critiques. Yes, it truly does blow my mind. Yes, it does evoke strong feelings in me. My fave part about this is still Spidey's eyes, which are awesome. Truly. Very. I guess they're the first thing that caught my eye. And the buildings in them look perfect. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Smile)"/>
And now I noticed that this is two years old. Oops. But you don't really have any similar newer work (except the iron man), so I can't really tell how you've improved.
Sorry for the incredible length of this critique. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="19" height="19" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/> Keep up the amazing work!
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p4ntsu [2014-04-26 20:34:50 +0000 UTC]
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Great work! One thing I would like to say is, did you straight draw it or just shade it in? Anyways, besides that the originality is okay but everyone knows spiderman! Maybe you could make up your own fancy character eh? The technique is amazing! I would just ask you to make the background a little more detailed e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title="
(Smile)"/>. The impact on my eyes is like amazing though. This is so eye catching and how can you not miss it? You overall did a great job! I have to say this artwork is very, very nice. But I did forget one thing, I think you could use a little more detail on the black streaks going into spiderman.
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Sketch-Shepherd [2014-04-09 02:33:30 +0000 UTC]
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Even though I'm not such a fan of Spiderman, I must say this is quite an amazing piece.
The coloring is top-notch. All the light and shading is where it's supposed to be, and all the attention to intricate details from the reflection of the city in the eyes to the black venom things (I forgot what they're called e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/>) crawling all over the suit to the stitches and pores in the clothes is really impressive.
The only problem I have is the fact that the top of the highest building seems to "blend" in with the background, and almost all the buildings in the background look really crooked and unaligned.
I hate to sound like I'm asskissing by pointing out so very few flaws in this drawing but most of it is drawn so well I have very little negativity to say about it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Lawleighette [2014-03-11 13:16:54 +0000 UTC]
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Brilliant work here! I love the lighting and the shading... it looks very realistic. And the detail... Woah! So super detailed!!! You made everything stand out the way it should... and I really like the way you did the reflection on Spider Man's eyes. I also like how you drew the venom thingy, you know. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="
(Big Grin)"/> The buildings are a little bit messed up, especially the ones on the bottom right, but that does not really matter because you did it all so perfectly that the viewer wouldn't even notice it! I didn't notice it until I looked at it closely. All in all, it's amazing!!! Keep up the awesome work!
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jorani2194 [2012-09-06 21:22:13 +0000 UTC]
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e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="10" height="10" alt="
" title="Bullet; Yellow"/>Firstly, this is really awesome work! Congrats ^^
I can tell there was a lot of effort put into it, and that's great.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="10" height="10" alt="
" title="Bullet; Yellow"/>When i first look at it, its very eye catching, because of the great contrast of colors and the interesting perspective. And the detail is amazing. The reflection in his eyes is super cool too, making it look more realistic. The way you did the background a little fuzzy and a bit out of focus also creates a really distinguished foreground and background, also making it look more real. The whole work itself appears very clean and crisp too. No mistakes or smudges, etc are visible.
e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="10" height="10" alt="
" title="Bullet; Yellow"/> I really like how you did the texture on his hand with the cross-hatching kind of style. It makes it look more like a glove. And the shading is awesome, i like the different colors in it, giving it depth. Theres lots of white and highlights and it looks great. (I myself have trouble keeping small white areas clean and white ><)
I think you chose a great medium to do this picture in, pencil crayons are great for detail and they are quite versatile.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="10" height="10" alt="
" title="Bullet; Yellow"/> I only think the sky could be more blended, with less harsh lines/spots.
Anyway, nice work! I looked at some of your other things and you have really awesome portraits. Keep up the great work!
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lrguyart In reply to tony0501 [2017-03-15 23:25:02 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much! i'm glad you like it.
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lrguyart In reply to KodyBoy555 [2017-03-04 21:56:22 +0000 UTC]
exactly. the best bit, haha. (:
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mirounga6854 [2015-05-22 18:05:43 +0000 UTC]
Amazing !Β
He's wonderful ! i love it ! <3Β
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CharliDrawz [2015-05-08 13:06:02 +0000 UTC]
SPIDER MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Β
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lrguyart In reply to CharliDrawz [2015-06-06 13:04:25 +0000 UTC]
haha, YAYYYYY! thankies!
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arya-tabs [2015-04-20 18:38:09 +0000 UTC]
love that spidey logo.....and the next best thing is the awesome sky and its reflection(in spidey's eyes~~)
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lrguyart In reply to arya-tabs [2015-06-06 13:04:53 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much, i'm glad you like it. (;
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arya-tabs In reply to lrguyart [2015-06-11 18:56:24 +0000 UTC]
u have done a real cool job...and the appreciation is the least i can do for ya
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chris-the-sword [2015-04-09 22:08:11 +0000 UTC]
great spiderman drawing, it looks LIKE the actual thing, wow!
i really really like your work, the shading/lighting is sublime, and the coloruing/details are very good, and this means that you are a great artist.
keep making stuff like this, sir.
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hellxwrks [2015-04-01 00:26:42 +0000 UTC]
I simply enjoy so much to those details on his eyes!
very good job!
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Shradis [2015-03-12 20:25:52 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome i love it
Also did you know for all Marvel Fans in Earth 15 Spider Man gets the carnage symbioteΒ
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KoiCatCreations [2015-02-26 17:42:17 +0000 UTC]
The details are amazing I love how well you captured it moving up ant overtaking him
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TigerRose1329 [2015-02-03 22:53:47 +0000 UTC]
Definitely showing this to my nephew! Β (He's a huge Spider-Man fan )
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KStarrLynn [2014-10-11 22:15:44 +0000 UTC]
This is so good! Spidey is my favorite. You used the markers so well!
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LauraTheStrange97 [2014-10-11 20:07:23 +0000 UTC]
I love how the city is reflected in his eye patches, wow!
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Queenfancy [2014-09-16 20:58:34 +0000 UTC]
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING OH MY GOD YOU'VE PUT MY STUFF TO SHAME CONGRATULATIONS PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING!!!
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meloetta123 [2014-09-11 01:52:32 +0000 UTC]
i didn't even notice this was traditional art until i zoomed in! wow! this must've took a LOOONG time!
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Digital-Star-Wolf64 [2014-08-13 22:43:33 +0000 UTC]
I can't believe this is a drawing, it is so amazingly well done. From the angle, to the colors, to the background, I thought it was a screenshot or something. Amazing, mind-blown...I have no idea what other words I can say to describe this.
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ashbasher22 [2014-08-05 09:29:58 +0000 UTC]
How the hell does this have not a DD yet, it's amazing art.
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Lets-Get-Saiko [2014-07-25 14:50:18 +0000 UTC]
I couldn't even tell this was a drawing at first! Well, I can also say the same for just about everything else in your gallery. You also drew the skyscrapers in the background really well, although it looks like some of them are facing different directions than others. Is this intentional? At any rate, great work!
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Halley-Comet [2014-07-24 13:42:47 +0000 UTC]
That's amazing!
It seems to be an official film artwork. Every detail (from Empire State Building to Spiderman's eyes) is perfect.
I'm sure you have spent time and attention on this work.
You've choosen a particular moment too. And you've caught all the dramatic atmosphere.
Very good.
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RuvisH [2014-07-24 05:14:39 +0000 UTC]
this is so awsome..the shading, the background, the coloring, spiderman himself...everything is just perfect..thumbs up
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