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luciddreamer4423 — My Own Prison

Published: 2004-08-02 19:44:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 824; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 36
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Description A court is in session, a verdict is in
No appeal on the docket today
Just my own sin
The walls are cold and pale
The cage made of steel
Screams fill the room
Alone I drop and kneel
Silence now the sound
My breath the only motion around
Demons cluttering around
My face showing no emotion
Shackled by my sentence
Expecting no return
Here there is no penance
My skin begins to burn
So I held my head up high
Hiding hate that burns inside
Which only fuels their selfish pride
We're all held captive
Out from the sun
A sun that shines on only some
We the meek are all in one
I hear a thunder in the distance
See a vision of a cross
I feel the pain that was given
On this sad day of loss
A lion roars in the darkness
Only he holds the key
A light to free me from my burden
And grant me life eternally
Should have been dead
On a Sunday morning
Banging my head
No time for mourning
Ain't got no time
So I held my head up high
Hiding hate that burns inside
Which only fuels their selfish pride
We're all held captive
Out from the sun
A sun that shines on only some
We the meek are all in one
I cry out to God
Seeking only his decision
Gabriel stands and confirms
I've created my own prison


My first attempt at nude self photography.
Kinda scary huh?
Wasent sure if this would go in nude or emotion....its got more emotion i think then nudity....so move it if u wish
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Comments: 20

queerfantasy [2009-03-26 12:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Creed fan huh? Nice. First album was the best. Picture looks great by the way. nice job.

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to queerfantasy [2009-03-28 20:25:54 +0000 UTC]

yeah i liked creed before they went to god rock.

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queerfantasy In reply to luciddreamer4423 [2009-03-29 03:52:47 +0000 UTC]

me too, I heard their first album and loved it so I was excited when they brought out the second but it wasn't as good. and thats the one they made it famous on. and they became a little preachy

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Shadowmancer12 [2008-09-19 20:34:52 +0000 UTC]

Very deep, the emotion is so vivid!

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to Shadowmancer12 [2008-09-19 23:38:53 +0000 UTC]

ty very much.....the first and i think last time i ever did a timer self portrait

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Shadowmancer12 In reply to luciddreamer4423 [2008-10-05 19:53:52 +0000 UTC]

You should do more like this, it's very meaningful and relatable. It has a message for everyone.

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to Shadowmancer12 [2008-10-05 23:53:35 +0000 UTC]

i did this god knows how long ago and it was my first attempt at a self portrait. but ty i will try some more....only downside is i let my niece borrow my camera and she lost it

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Shadowmancer12 In reply to luciddreamer4423 [2008-10-06 00:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Ouch, that's a shame. Well good luck!

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to Shadowmancer12 [2008-10-07 04:19:28 +0000 UTC]

you to

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likesalotaart [2007-02-27 07:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Neat

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to likesalotaart [2007-02-28 09:48:06 +0000 UTC]

the ladies love it

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cokeandcandy [2004-09-19 01:38:15 +0000 UTC]

I think it goes in emotive portraits ...
Great composition and I like the effect of the mist kind of blurring things in the picture.

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to cokeandcandy [2004-09-19 01:42:53 +0000 UTC]

im glad u liked it

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crossouthei-s [2004-08-12 21:52:38 +0000 UTC]

wow, very nice...for a first attempt..thats quite impressive...

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Heidi-V-Art [2004-08-04 03:52:50 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful photo! So deep and emotional!

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to Heidi-V-Art [2004-08-04 14:43:26 +0000 UTC]

ty sweety

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rzero [2004-08-03 17:20:48 +0000 UTC]

dude, this is really good. great job man

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to rzero [2004-08-03 20:28:47 +0000 UTC]

ty very much...this is what u get when ur parents leave u laone in ur house and u get hella bored

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TheLoneJellybean [2004-08-02 20:29:55 +0000 UTC]

That is awsomely moving.

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luciddreamer4423 In reply to TheLoneJellybean [2004-08-02 20:52:58 +0000 UTC]

ty very much

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