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luckylisa — Catch Me Before I Fall
Published: 2004-05-11 04:07:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 4475; Favourites: 187; Downloads: 49
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Description Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
For I have already fallen
Hit so hard my body cracked
My heart shattered within
Shutting myself down
Closing up to others
My silence forever kept
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
My horrors now revealed
You're gone forever
And I'm standing here alone
Lost and foresaken
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
My visions now hazed
Coldness seeping in
Freezing my internal organs
Lost in time and space
Frozen expressions of sadness
No longer do I exist
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
For I have already fallen
Hit so hard I died in an instant
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Comments: 160

luckylisa In reply to ??? [2009-07-19 23:11:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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starlight2infinity In reply to luckylisa [2009-07-20 11:57:55 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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paniparanoja [2009-06-16 19:14:51 +0000 UTC]

it's not a crappy poem. It's a good one.

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luckylisa In reply to paniparanoja [2009-06-17 16:47:12 +0000 UTC]

thank you hun

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Heavenly-Succbus [2009-06-02 19:57:16 +0000 UTC]

remains me fo all the negitive thoughts i ever had about being alone or getting hurt by someone.damn...
nice poem

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luckylisa In reply to Heavenly-Succbus [2009-06-02 19:59:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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dupito [2009-05-28 23:31:43 +0000 UTC]

God should have provided you wings. Shame on him!

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luckylisa In reply to dupito [2009-05-29 14:59:27 +0000 UTC]

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DaRk-f0x [2009-05-13 22:03:01 +0000 UTC]

Ohh this one hits close at home.. Great work

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luckylisa In reply to DaRk-f0x [2009-05-13 22:05:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks hun

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DaRk-f0x In reply to luckylisa [2009-05-13 22:06:58 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome

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mimikascraftroom In reply to ??? [2009-05-05 22:07:28 +0000 UTC]

very touching poem...I love it!

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luckylisa In reply to mimikascraftroom [2009-05-06 15:52:25 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you

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LadyMiserable [2009-05-02 09:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very touching!

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luckylisa In reply to LadyMiserable [2009-05-05 20:29:56 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you

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LadyMiserable In reply to luckylisa [2009-05-06 12:02:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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Faded--Euphoria In reply to ??? [2009-04-02 19:19:28 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem (:
Lots of emotion

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luckylisa In reply to Faded--Euphoria [2009-04-26 18:01:37 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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pepelepew251 In reply to ??? [2009-03-31 06:05:30 +0000 UTC]

If few days ago i read this poem,,,i think i will jump out from th 16floor...and would like to say good bye to the world.... :sad: this poem so emotionally

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staatsf [2009-02-23 13:47:38 +0000 UTC]

desperate sad words
staats

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luckylisa In reply to staatsf [2009-02-23 17:18:10 +0000 UTC]

aww

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SuliannH [2009-02-20 20:05:28 +0000 UTC]

It's kinda tragic but good, I like the way things progress in this poem, the succession of events that lead to the final but inevitable end of the character.

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luckylisa In reply to SuliannH [2009-02-20 20:06:33 +0000 UTC]

aw thank you so much

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SuliannH In reply to luckylisa [2009-02-20 20:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome, I enjoyed reading it

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DP770 [2009-02-20 03:32:14 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. I like it.

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luckylisa In reply to DP770 [2009-02-20 03:32:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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DP770 In reply to luckylisa [2009-02-20 06:40:35 +0000 UTC]

welcome.

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EternalSolaceEssence In reply to ??? [2009-02-19 21:49:27 +0000 UTC]

it's so touching. i really !!! fav'n'.

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luckylisa In reply to EternalSolaceEssence [2009-02-20 20:16:43 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you

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EternalSolaceEssence In reply to luckylisa [2009-02-20 21:18:13 +0000 UTC]

you are very welcome.

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irishcompass In reply to ??? [2009-02-18 21:33:33 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one. Have you performed it as spoken word poetry?

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MisakiTheGoreLover [2009-02-02 15:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Simply beautiful and deep.

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luckylisa In reply to MisakiTheGoreLover [2009-02-02 15:42:17 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks

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MisakiTheGoreLover In reply to luckylisa [2009-02-02 15:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem

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SuperiorGraphics [2009-02-01 06:13:21 +0000 UTC]

Powerful. Instantly human. Provokes in me the realities which they refuse to acknowledge. Brilliant.

Flap our wings, for you can never let them win.

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luckylisa In reply to SuperiorGraphics [2009-02-01 16:24:15 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks! i'm glad you liked it.

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esrever619 [2009-01-29 04:47:33 +0000 UTC]

the fast pacing really ups the urgency of the poem, so it was a great choice not to use much grammar. Through that you can feel the need and desire behind the words. That plus the great imagery make sthis an awesome poem!

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luckylisa In reply to esrever619 [2009-01-29 16:19:11 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks!

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21icefox [2009-01-28 02:22:38 +0000 UTC]

very sad, but I like it

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luckylisa In reply to 21icefox [2009-01-28 03:47:30 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks!

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21icefox In reply to luckylisa [2009-01-29 03:31:52 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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xxladouleurexquisexx [2009-01-23 09:31:17 +0000 UTC]

wow I'm just speachless - love it <3

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luckylisa In reply to xxladouleurexquisexx [2009-01-23 15:22:30 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you

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xxladouleurexquisexx In reply to luckylisa [2009-01-24 11:14:07 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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lachrymose1316 [2009-01-21 14:58:11 +0000 UTC]

u write such beautiful poetry...good job ^_^

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luckylisa In reply to lachrymose1316 [2009-01-21 15:46:40 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you so much

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emam013 In reply to ??? [2009-01-20 15:23:34 +0000 UTC]

You say in the description "a poem...."
You didn't say it's a good one

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luckylisa In reply to emam013 [2009-01-20 15:48:51 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks

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emam013 In reply to luckylisa [2009-01-20 17:16:40 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure

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Shadowblader26 [2009-01-15 16:11:36 +0000 UTC]

It describes my feelings right now and when I write my dark poetry

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