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luckylisa — Catch Me Before I Fall
Published: 2004-05-11 04:07:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 4475; Favourites: 187; Downloads: 49
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Description Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
For I have already fallen
Hit so hard my body cracked
My heart shattered within
Shutting myself down
Closing up to others
My silence forever kept
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
My horrors now revealed
You're gone forever
And I'm standing here alone
Lost and foresaken
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
My visions now hazed
Coldness seeping in
Freezing my internal organs
Lost in time and space
Frozen expressions of sadness
No longer do I exist
Catch me before I fall
But it's too late
For I have already fallen
Hit so hard I died in an instant
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Comments: 160

luckylisa In reply to ??? [2004-05-13 00:29:18 +0000 UTC]

muhahahaha thanx so much

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artificialconstruct In reply to ??? [2004-05-11 05:26:19 +0000 UTC]

You know... this would make a really good song! I could totally write a guitar part and vocal melody to this... yeah...

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artificialconstruct In reply to artificialconstruct [2004-05-11 20:49:39 +0000 UTC]

Didn't know I played guitar, did ya?

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luckylisa In reply to artificialconstruct [2004-05-12 00:24:05 +0000 UTC]

muhahahaha nope i didn't know u played guitar....

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artificialconstruct In reply to luckylisa [2004-05-12 04:36:07 +0000 UTC]

And I can sing!

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luckylisa In reply to artificialconstruct [2004-05-12 05:25:09 +0000 UTC]

very cool

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luckylisa In reply to artificialconstruct [2004-05-11 14:51:12 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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colormePINK In reply to ??? [2004-05-11 04:14:46 +0000 UTC]

wow...im speechless...and may i say its sooo good to see another deviation from you! its been quite awhile, eh? and this one ROCKS!!!!

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luckylisa In reply to colormePINK [2004-05-11 04:25:50 +0000 UTC]

wow thanx so much for commenting on my crappy poems

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