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Published: 2011-10-22 02:51:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description I guess this is what you'd call "experimental" comicking. It ended up taking longer than I thought. Mostly figuring out typography things (why is that so haaaard gah DX) and drawing that tree that still looks like I just scribbled on the page. Which I did. hah.

I'm not sure who is doing the talking. It's sort of a mix of the Arnen/someone-who-shows-up-on-the-next-page/just general narrative commentary.


Oh also: does the "painful" bit up at the top look suitably painful? It's hard to portray that on a guy with a mask |'D
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Kiqo7 [2011-11-29 03:08:11 +0000 UTC]

FJDFJSDJFDJ *keeps reading*

That definitely looks like it hurts ;A;

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AngelicDragonPuppy [2011-10-24 12:26:55 +0000 UTC]

1) Holy crap tree didn't notice that until looking back and that is all kinds of sick.

2) Like how Talan's all red and bloody looking at the bottom, poor fellow.

3) YEP THAT LOOKS PRETTY DERN PAINFUL

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lunalupa In reply to AngelicDragonPuppy [2011-10-25 06:58:14 +0000 UTC]

The treeeeee I like that bit. Lots of fun to be had with nerves and portal lighting and whatnot sort of looking like tree branches.

GOOD

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applescruff [2011-10-22 06:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it looked like agony. Good job.

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lunalupa In reply to applescruff [2011-10-22 21:35:29 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I guess. I mean, poor Arnen/Talan really.

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applescruff In reply to lunalupa [2011-10-23 08:50:01 +0000 UTC]

But bad things in stories make for really good reading. It's no fun if nothing bad happens. Talan will just have to suck it up because I want to be entertained.

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lunalupa In reply to applescruff [2011-10-23 15:55:17 +0000 UTC]

pfffft okay. I'm sure he understands. Gotta take one for the team!

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applescruff In reply to lunalupa [2011-10-23 17:40:45 +0000 UTC]

All part of his job. If he gets too messed up he can apply for character worker's comp or something, right?

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lunalupa In reply to applescruff [2011-10-24 03:56:30 +0000 UTC]

He'd better have some good coverage after what all I'm about to do to him...

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applescruff In reply to lunalupa [2011-10-24 06:35:15 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad Talan can't see how excited I am to see what happens to him.

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feelingwhimsy [2011-10-22 05:43:59 +0000 UTC]

I really liked scrolling down this! \o My loading speed was nice enough that it would load the next set of words as I got to it, so that set an interesting kind of rhythm. xD;

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lunalupa In reply to feelingwhimsy [2011-10-22 21:39:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice! That was the idea, pretty much: to make it sort of like an animation

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VoidFire [2011-10-22 03:11:21 +0000 UTC]

It looks plenty painful to me!

Also, I really like how this came out. Very simplistic but powerful. Your tree is quite nice as well!

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lunalupa In reply to VoidFire [2011-10-22 04:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Awesome XD

Thanks! This is one I will almost definitely come back to work on once I get to the end; I'd like to give it the kind of quality I used for the crazyDriza page

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