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LunarisFuryAileron — How To Write RWBY H 5
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This is a satire.
Here's another rule of hentai, any sweet, dramatic, romantic moment will turn into sex. No exception. A dramatic confession turns to sex almost immediately. A person just let out his or her innermost feeling, and then they almost immediately bang. Also, Weiss probably has seen her family members killed off and most likely be bitter by it. A hentai writer could utilize this insecurity and do something like this. "I don't want to lose you" is a strong way to make a dramatic, emotional, vanilla hentai. There's some crying involved and you end with "I love you" or "Don't leave me". There's usually an after scene after they had sex, maybe you could make Ruby gently playing with Weiss hair while she's sleeping, muttering, "I won't die that easily" or "You're my raison detre".
In fact, a similar cliche like this and previous How To Write, was done in pixiv. There's a mini doujin where Yang was horrified that Ruby was almost killed by Nevermore. They had a talk in their room and somehow ended up having sex.
I'll stop this series for bit for now.
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Boy. That escalated quickly. I mean, that really got out of hand fast.
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Dolt only is what she is right here she is asking a quetion so dolt wouldn't work out as much since that is was Ruby is to Weiss (Her dolt).
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I'm confused since dolt and idiot both mean a stupid person, couldn't they be used interchangeably?
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Well that is how it really works but in this case gfor Weiss and Ruby it means something more special since it is a word just for Ruby and that is the adorkableness of Whiterose.
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... okay then, I still think that I am right.
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It terms of normal yes. But in terms of anime no.
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Ruby: You were ferocious.
lol I don't know why but this made me laugh. XD
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you're not wrong but that is my favorite base.
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I can see that,but i wish with all my heart,soul and faith to unsee it.
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WHAT THE HELL, another thing that I wouldn't want to see?!? stupid Ruby x Weiss fan fiction
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What was the title of the one with Yang called? I want to see how many panels it takes to get from point A to point V.
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Lot of quick escalation here.
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Would've made more sense if Weiss said "Baka Ruby" instead of "Ruby, you idiot".
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dolt would be more appropriate
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i would really like the know where this doujin u speak of is at.
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Can you access pixiv?
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Here's another rule of hentai: Basically, anything and everything will turn into sex.
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What's with the.....Hentia? Wait, Wait, Wait. What the actual hell are these RWBY Hs. Can you even call this Hentai
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Well that escalated quickly. But now that they are done, I can tell Blake and Yang to stop sleeping in my closet! It's a win-win!
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Can I put Zwei back now?
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where is the link of the doujin of YangxRuby of which you spoke of?
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I was reading the description then i read "Yang was horrified that Ruby was almost killed by Nevermore. They had a talk in their room and somehow ended up having sex." RWBY incest, really? why am i even surprised...(great comic btw, but why is ruby suddenly taller than weiss?)
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Correction, it was Deathstalker, not Nevermore.
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but....thats what you wrote....whaaaaaaat
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I meant, I made a mistake when I wrote that.
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I really love these satirical comics of yours XD
I've observed them as well, and it's really funny to put it this way.
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Thanks, I'll try to continue this series in the future.
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I have other comics planned and I'm getting quite busy lately. This series is on hold for a bit.
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Oh.
Cool.
Have a nice day.
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Just wondering is all.
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