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LunarisFuryAileron — How To Write RWBY H 5
Published: 2013-11-17 08:00:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 40419; Favourites: 488; Downloads: 82
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This is a satire.
Here's another rule of hentai, any sweet, dramatic, romantic moment will turn into sex. No exception. A dramatic confession turns to sex almost immediately. A person just let out his or her innermost feeling, and then they almost immediately bang. Also, Weiss probably has seen her family members killed off and most likely be bitter by it. A hentai writer could utilize this insecurity and do something like this. "I don't want to lose you" is a strong way to make a dramatic, emotional, vanilla hentai. There's some crying involved and you end with "I love you" or "Don't leave me". There's usually an after scene after they had sex, maybe you could make Ruby gently playing with Weiss hair while she's sleeping, muttering, "I won't die that easily" or "You're my raison detre".
In fact, a similar cliche like this and previous How To Write, was done in pixiv. There's a mini doujin where Yang was horrified that Ruby was almost killed by Nevermore. They had a talk in their room and somehow ended up having sex.
I'll stop this series for bit for now.
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She needs to be launched out of a cannon .....
Someone give her a puppy, or something!
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The transition .... actually caught me off guard.
*brain melts*
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Aw a pause in this series. Its so informative and funny. XD
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Lol, 'informative'.
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Knew you'd laugh. ;D
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im going to just...okay forget it some criticism has to be made....i have nothing this is too perfect thank you...again my point remains your EVIL!
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How am I evil, they had a good ending. No one died from the risky mission if you consider this a continuation from the previous 4koma.
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i wouldnt say evil....no thats....too harsh..more like a genius...you make the most simple things, more epic than they are supposed to be, as i said i love your art even if im too terrified to venture beyond your RWBY fan art,but regardless, amazing.*claps* you win this round.i have nothing left to back up your masterpiece.
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Meh, the only terrifying Touhou stuffs I did is the tentacle series. Other than that, I recommend that you read 'em.
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excuse me while i go and browse through your gallery i have to see this now seeing as i love the touhou girls. i can only imagine what horrors/amazing pieces lie back there.
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Are you telling me people in hentai are different from realistic people? say it isn't so
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Well... very interesting development XD
hahaha! it was so fun to read this XD haha!
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Thank you, glad that you enjoyed it.
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ur welcome >:3
and im glad that i viewed it..
She's quite ferocious XD
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I'm kinda glad you're stopping this series a bit, at first it was pretty funny, but now it's kind of "meh".
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Why couldn't I be in Weiss' position...
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All the rules of hentai make "entertaiment" so much easier.
At first Weiss is worried about Ruby and the she's ferocious? She needs to decide. Then again thinking about the situation she was ferocious in it's entertaining this way too.
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Weiss don't want to lose Ruby, she was attached to her. That's why she was 'ferocious' in bed since she only focused to Ruby.
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Ahh okay that makes sense.
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She is Tsundere.
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aw Weiss is all worried that's so cut- oh. OH. OK SURE
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We call it 'hentai logic'.
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These are so entertaining. XD And you've been dead on with all of them haha.
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Well, I did my 'research'.
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Weiss was "ferocious"? Never thought that she would be the seme (or whatever the yuri equivalent is called) .
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I think Ruby and Weiss could be either seme or uke. Maybe they switch around whenever they like, iunno.
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Well that escalated quickly...
At first I thought there was gonna be a 'plot' joke but that only really work with Yang.
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Um...Ah...Nevermind.
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you must be doing some major reserch "WINK"
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Eh, I had some study on the subject matter.
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Why can't something like this happen to me?
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If you live in hentai, you will be in constant exhaustion.
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LOL! I love the way you end these with them in bed all the time. Makes my day.
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Well, they could 'do' it elsewhere, but that'll be so lewd however sexy exhibitionism and outdoor sex can be.
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Weiss is "ferocious", eh? Somehow I don't doubt that.
and yet I find it hilariously improbable.
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this is what all of deviantart is about nice work ^^
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"You're my raison detre". Typo or actual term?
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Actual term. Meaning 'reason of existence'.
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As Tucker from Red vs Blue would say- "Bow Chicka Bow Wow"
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"In just a few minutes"? Were they having that discussion in their room or did a bed magically appeared before them?
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I let you fill in the minor details with your imagination. For me, they're walking to their room, Weiss confessed, grabbed Ruby's hand and swiftly dragged her to their room and shove her onto her bed.
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