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This is a satire.
Here's another rule of hentai, any sweet, dramatic, romantic moment will turn into sex. No exception. A dramatic confession turns to sex almost immediately. A person just let out his or her innermost feeling, and then they almost immediately bang. Also, Weiss probably has seen her family members killed off and most likely be bitter by it. A hentai writer could utilize this insecurity and do something like this. "I don't want to lose you" is a strong way to make a dramatic, emotional, vanilla hentai. There's some crying involved and you end with "I love you" or "Don't leave me". There's usually an after scene after they had sex, maybe you could make Ruby gently playing with Weiss hair while she's sleeping, muttering, "I won't die that easily" or "You're my raison detre".
In fact, a similar cliche like this and previous How To Write, was done in pixiv. There's a mini doujin where Yang was horrified that Ruby was almost killed by Nevermore. They had a talk in their room and somehow ended up having sex.
I'll stop this series for bit for now.
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Comments: 189
riamu3572 In reply to ??? [2013-11-30 18:51:01 +0000 UTC]
never question how somebody knows about hentai... he could have just had it constantly crop up on google... maybe
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Trist2468 In reply to ??? [2013-11-23 19:33:02 +0000 UTC]
Slap my hands.
Slap ALL my hands.
Hell, slap my damn face.
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TristanBelmont In reply to ??? [2013-11-23 15:51:06 +0000 UTC]
Before I zoomed in I thought she said "You were delicious."
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ArchAngelSx In reply to ??? [2013-11-21 04:17:12 +0000 UTC]
now that's escalation right there! and I love the "Osaka" look on Ruby, classic!!!
P.S. can you point me to this mini doujin?
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to ArchAngelSx [2013-11-21 04:23:51 +0000 UTC]
Just search for RWBY in pixiv with the R-18 option. It's a bundle somewhere at the back since it was made pretty early.
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ArchAngelSx In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2013-11-22 06:11:10 +0000 UTC]
do you remember the author?
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to ArchAngelSx [2013-11-22 09:44:17 +0000 UTC]
www.pixiv.net/member_illust.ph…
NSFW.
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LordT1432 [2013-11-19 23:38:02 +0000 UTC]
can you do more 4komas sorry if i spelt that wrong
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LordT1432 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2013-11-20 04:32:05 +0000 UTC]
i did not know that
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OMGthousandrelic In reply to ??? [2013-11-19 22:25:35 +0000 UTC]
can you do a solo thing of pink, you know, from that one comic strip
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to OMGthousandrelic [2013-11-20 01:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Solo thing of pink?
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to OMGthousandrelic [2013-11-20 12:17:16 +0000 UTC]
No, I don't understand what you were trying to say...
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OMGthousandrelic In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2013-11-20 12:23:35 +0000 UTC]
you know that girl were wiess was making plans for the future with her and ruby, and they made a girl named pink...no?
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to OMGthousandrelic [2013-11-20 12:27:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh that, you want me to make 4koma of her? Her name is Prim though, and I likely won't make any comic of her unless if I really ran out of materials, which is unlikely, even when second volume is out.
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OMGthousandrelic In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2013-11-20 13:48:32 +0000 UTC]
no just a picture of her, ruby and wiess
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ChaosSpear18 In reply to ??? [2013-11-19 15:20:36 +0000 UTC]
I like the whole dramatic buildup and somehow I expected something like this from you to turn this around. Also like how Ruby is lampshading the situation.
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ruff1298 [2013-11-19 13:01:09 +0000 UTC]
That last panel and those expressions just complete this. "You were ferocious~" is just even more icing on this delicious satire cake.
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TheWanderingDelusion In reply to ??? [2013-11-19 05:12:16 +0000 UTC]
"You were ferocious."
That line nearly killed me.
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to TheWanderingDelusion [2013-11-19 06:49:08 +0000 UTC]
Weiss just doesn't want Ruby to leave. She's marking her territory on Ruby by leaving scent.
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Shikniful In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2013-11-19 08:30:09 +0000 UTC]
well good thing Ruby's clothes pretty much cover all her body,
so she don't have to worry about any one see Weiss kiss marks all over her body~
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Pinehas [2013-11-19 01:13:41 +0000 UTC]
When you continue this series, can you do Team JNPR too? I want some Jaune x Pyrrha vanilla moments. XD
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to Pinehas [2013-11-19 01:28:22 +0000 UTC]
I have a JauneXPyrrha idea, but I want to do something else first.
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TheNewProtagonist In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2013-11-20 00:06:38 +0000 UTC]
Wait, you haven't actually drawn Pyrrha yet, have you?
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to TheNewProtagonist [2013-11-20 01:18:43 +0000 UTC]
Uhh... in RWBYC I did... if that counts...
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SoulEmbrace2010 In reply to ??? [2013-11-18 06:04:14 +0000 UTC]
Dammit, the jokes were taken. Love me some White Rose, but need more RWBY-H Bumblebee from ya Luna
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to SoulEmbrace2010 [2013-11-18 06:54:52 +0000 UTC]
I did bumblebee in the second How To Write.
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SoulEmbrace2010 In reply to LunarisFuryAileron [2013-11-18 16:07:56 +0000 UTC]
I know, that's why (Thor's voice) ANOTHER!
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to SoulEmbrace2010 [2013-11-19 01:26:58 +0000 UTC]
Heh, we'll see.
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DarkBrother-John In reply to ??? [2013-11-18 04:43:19 +0000 UTC]
so, this what happened behind that close door,huh?...
damn, you miss the detail what happen between panel 3 and 4.
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to DarkBrother-John [2013-11-18 05:08:52 +0000 UTC]
I leave that to your imagination.
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ZeroGunner1 [2013-11-18 03:43:16 +0000 UTC]
Yay! More ideas for fanfics! (There aren't enough RWBY fics.)
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to ZeroGunner1 [2013-11-18 04:19:12 +0000 UTC]
Really? Feels like there's plenty enough of fanfics. 4komas, on the other hand, not so much.
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Lanca226 In reply to ??? [2013-11-18 02:53:04 +0000 UTC]
Is there anything that can wind down Weiss from being such an uptight human being?
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LunarisFuryAileron In reply to Lanca226 [2013-11-18 04:16:28 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm just trying to write her close to canon.
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