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Lunix17 — All these things
Published: 2011-01-25 16:34:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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While I sit today,time keeps pace as I play.
And I think of good things near
these people
these places
these things…
all to me, are thoughts quite dear,
but as the time marches on
I know that things move on and on
And
those people
those places
those things
Remain just as they were,
just a memory.
For as I come back and I see
Things aren't as they used to be.
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just how the world goes...
so important one day, forgotten the next...
It's cool how you said it. I like.
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Yep, Life moves on. I wish it could slow down a moment.
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i submitted it to #Masters-of-Poetry and they said that it was too distant and stuff... I'm starting to wonder if my poems are ever going to be good enough to make it into that group because not one of my poems have made it... and i see some really good poetry denied by that group... it kinda makes me sad.
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that can make someone sad, that even makes me sad! because this is some REALLY good poetry that you have! compared to mine, its like a god O.o
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thanks lol, but i don't think i'm that good.... amateurish at best... *sigh* sorry... the whole deny thing is getting me discouraged.
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welcome, and aww, its alright! dont be discouraged!
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