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Lunix17 ā Hakira
Published: 2009-11-09 11:33:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 466; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 32
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I drew this on ARTGrounds. This is yet another peice for the collection of Gangwarz. I never did a girl looking down before, i hope its to everyone's liking!! ^_^Hakira is the girl that Yusuke falls in love with in the series that I dubbed Gangwarz. I decided that I wanted a blond girl, rather then keep her after my organization thirteen character lunix like i had orriginally intended. She's very shy when she's not kicking butt at Yusuke's side or leading the meeting for their gang the Rebellion.
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Hakira is such a cute little drawing. The artists three samples and drawn different way's was well done. We can see the steps that they took to get to the final product, and in doing this we can see how they progressed.
I really like your first step, you did a great job with your line work, and then moving into your second part you did a great job in line erasing and in fining the details.
The final product on the right is well done, however I feel like the colors are a little flat. I think you should work on your shadowing and highlights some more as to give it a more lifelike image and not so flat and solid. Really good job, keep practicing on what I pointed out and you'll get better before you know it! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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OK, Hopefully this is TheDeviantIndigo reading this, anyways I'm new to the critiques section of this site as I've only had full membership here for a month and prior to that I was just here with the free membership, anyways from what I've seen so far is that apparently its not enough to have the critique feature turned on but rather you have to ask people to do a critique on your art which with me not knowing anyone on this site I just went shopping around and you looked like a good candidate so may I ask you to do a critique for me? My screen name is CaptainClock12 and I have over 20 different pieces of art to choose from, take your pick.
Thanks,
Levi
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Sure
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thanks so much, I will keep it in mind. promise. ^_^
this one was hard as i was trying out a new program... ARTgrounds. its a good site, but this was one of my first drawings.
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Cooool
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i normally do it that way...
you got the wrong dragon, unless you're going after both my dragons. the one that i suggested was the one that is wrapped around the japanese kanji
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Ohhh, that's okay, I couldn't find the other one haha, so I did this one instead. I'll do the other one too if you want
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it should be right in my featured gallery. i'll send you the link though:
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Ohhh, I thought you did it recently so I was just looking on the front page
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nah, its an older piece, it was before i knew how to shade with colored pencils. everything turned out dark, i need to rescan it i think... it's a little brighter in rl.
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Haha, that's okay, I critiqued it. And read my critique first, since I mention the detail and shading. If it's brighter in real life, try to tone it down, its okay to be dark, you don't want it too bright. Just gotta really work on your shading and light sources and shadows. It really makes images get that pop and pulls you in.
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well, i can't really change this one unless i photo shop this. I think i improved it since it was drawn and colored. ^_^ It was my first attempt at coloring my own peice to post.
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Truee. And when I say improve, I don't mean improve the piece you already did, it means for future reference on future images
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i know, but i wanna go back and make it better!
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Haha, well you have it scanned, print it out and draw over it or something if you want
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yeah. i could do that. lolz
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lol xD Take a look at some of my traditional works to see what I mean about shading and shadows. Im working on apiece right now as well that I will have up in a 3 way thing, line work, detail, then shaded.
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yeah, i'm doing better then i used to though, i should post my old work XD
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haha xD Keep practicing
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you're welcome ^_^
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