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Published: 2010-12-16 21:58:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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I've done so much for youbut what have you given me?
I know it's selfish
but three years you took from me
I've done my best
you've had your time
if you return nothing
why should I give you mine
My time is valuable
I'm in college after all
it's because of you
my emotions do fall
What do you want from me
what have I done?
that you give me these grievances
just like before
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Comments: 7
"I'm in college after all
it's because of you"
What do you mean with this?
I think it's written very fine.
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Its two seperate things "i'm in college" refers to the "my time is valuable"
"its because of you" starts a new thought.
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oh, okay. I just found this strange... XD
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all humans are strange
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It's nicely written, but this person needs an ass whooping!
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that person did get one.... he knows who he is...
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