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ScetchmasterCullen [2010-04-17 23:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Hey there! This is a really cool piece, but I have to say it lacks in a lot of places.
Okay, first off, Vision.
I can see she is clearly sad about about having to wait, and there is a clock meaning passage of time. But, you didn't show passing of time, you told it. And getting someone to think about things always makes it more interesting. Plus, you can't really tell what she is waiting for.
Next, Originality.
I've seen so many pictures of people just sad laying around. But she has a clock with her, so that's unusual. Good job on that!
Technique;
Was good. You edited it perfectly.
Except the fact that you don't immediately look at her. When you look at this, the contrast of colors brings your eyes to the windows, and she seems more background. Overall, good color editing, bad contrast. Still gets a four and a half, though.
Finally, Impact.
It defiantely stands out, and when you see it, you know something is happening. You can see her emotions (as said in 'vision'), and it's abstract, but still conveys emotion. Great job!
Overall, a good job, but not perfect. Practice makes perfect though! Aweome job, and keep on doing what your doin'

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ElenaDudina [2010-04-18 11:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful

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SilverWynd [2010-04-18 02:13:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is awsome!

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