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~page 12 and a one-sided monologue of doomPrevious | First | Archive | Next
this is the actual first page that isn't a redo of older pages. Should I keep the 'Redux' in it? ....I think so.
It's no part of the actual name, merely a sign of 'Old - New' distinction, but I like it.
Texas aka. Auntie aka. the German Shepherd got my dad's writing style
and Yerro aka. the mean Collie got my mom's. She's the complete oposite to Yerro in real life xD.
Yerro owns a free ticket for a fly in fury. And he doesn't take Texas' bait for conversation on something else.
For folks with reading problems:
Texas: How was yar day? Anything out of order happened?
Yerro: That was Kijoro, wasn't it?
Texas: Sure, but the-
Yerro: Has he made any progress?
Texas: No, but he ...
Yerro: Then you're way too lax with him. This little orphan needs strict guardiance, I can tell you that.
Texas: Well -
Yerro: You have to keep watching him, or else he'll cause a ruskus. And then it'll be bloody bad for him.
story & everything else (c)
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