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So as I mentioned before, I'm doing a comic called the Third Accelerator. Well, during the recent commissions I've been doing, I really liked how they turned out, and a lot of that was simply due to me putting more time and effort into my lineart, basically less cel-style lineart and more traditional lineart. The Question commission was the one that first brought it to my attention, and the rest of the recent commissions helped me realize that, and when I looked back at the pages I had already done... I realized that I should have done a better job on these pages.

It's all coloring, AGAIN, and while I'm sure it's fine to many... I want to push myself to be better. And this is an important project to me, and I don't wanna screw it up by just settling for "good enough". I want to be better. So these pages have been rejected as I try something out here to push myself toward that direction, the recent commissions had set me on the path toward. (Not to mention, the opening sequence here looks a little too "fanservicey", which is NOT the point of the story.) So yeah, they're rejected pages, because I'm going to redo them all better. But I figured I'd show off the work I've done already. (Story's retweaked too, so it's not like it's spoiling anything.)

I hope you like them, and I hope you'll like what's coming even more.

Description
So as I mentioned before, I'm doing a comic called the Third Accelerator. Well, during the recent commissions I've been doing, I really liked how they turned out, and a lot of that was simply due to me putting more time and effort into my lineart, basically less cel-style lineart and more traditional lineart. The Question commission was the one that first brought it to my attention, and the rest of the recent commissions helped me realize that, and when I looked back at the pages I had already done... I realized that I should have done a better job on these pages.

It's all coloring, AGAIN, and while I'm sure it's fine to many... I want to push myself to be better. And this is an important project to me, and I don't wanna screw it up by just settling for "good enough". I want to be better. So these pages have been rejected as I try something out here to push myself toward that direction, the recent commissions had set me on the path toward. (Not to mention, the opening sequence here looks a little too "fanservicey", which is NOT the point of the story.) So yeah, they're rejected pages, because I'm going to redo them all better. But I figured I'd show off the work I've done already. (Story's retweaked too, so it's not like it's spoiling anything.)

I hope you like them, and I hope you'll like what's coming even more.