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1. The Tragic Tale of Mari-lu 'Raven' Phantomhive>> by ObsessiveFangirl83786 reviewsA mysterious, beautiful young girl comes to the Phantomhive house claiming to be Ciel's long lost big sister! How will the household react? And will Sebasuchan be able to resist her for long? SebastianxOC PLEASE R&R!
Rated: M - Poorly written English - Romance/Tragedy/Shameless Smut - Chapters: 85 - Words: 873659832569 - Reviews: Too many - Updated: All the time
This bitch.
FANGIRLS. PLEASE STOP.
EDIT: IT'S NOT A REAL FANFICTION. I made it up.
Now, don't get me wrong, I love reading fanfiction and I'm perfectly fine with original characters as supporting or sometimes even main characters. But I hate, hate, hate when people make up a female original character that is overly cliche (kind-hearted, good-looking, good at everything, everyone likes her, etc.) and insert her into a fandom universe where one or every character falls in love with her, even if it's against that character's nature. All this is is girls who want to have sex with a fictional guy and thus inserting a glorified, overly-perfected version of themselves into said universe and then making up some half-assed plot to go along with the gratuitous amounts of gag-worthy sex.
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Comments: 772
dearhoneylemon [2012-12-16 02:03:48 +0000 UTC]
reading those mary-sue fics are the equivalent to watching a bad animated movie (or a generic sequel), tied to your chair
bravo, you my friend are a comic genius
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KyubiChan95 [2012-12-06 04:00:55 +0000 UTC]
..........Call me cruel, but I would read a fic like this only so that I could laugh at the girls failure to impress Sebastian.........Yep! That's how I would do it!
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Super-Crazy-Weirdo In reply to KyubiChan95 [2013-05-24 14:21:59 +0000 UTC]
I'd do that too. Actually, I recently found this fanfiction that was almost as bad as Tara Gilesbie's fanfiction "My Immortal" and THAT. Is saying something. If you don't know it there's loads of commentaries for the story on fanfiction.net
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Uvia456 [2012-11-26 01:57:06 +0000 UTC]
It actually would be funny to read a fanfic like that
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ArizunoShojo [2012-10-24 14:04:29 +0000 UTC]
Those kind of girls are annoying. Did you just make this character to mock some of the "over perfet oc:s of black butler? This pic is hillarious. But if you where to make a female lead for Sebastian what do you think would be crucial to make that character belivable and not a "mary-sue"?
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HowlingWinds123 In reply to ArizunoShojo [2012-12-03 15:36:23 +0000 UTC]
Well Sebastian is preeeety much like a Mary Sue too.....
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ArizunoShojo In reply to HowlingWinds123 [2012-12-03 16:07:14 +0000 UTC]
care to explain what you mean by that?
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HowlingWinds123 In reply to ArizunoShojo [2012-12-05 11:05:10 +0000 UTC]
He can do anything but I hope your not offended....
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ArizunoShojo In reply to HowlingWinds123 [2012-12-05 18:00:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh so that is what you ment. Well in that prospect yes he is a bit "mary-suey" but he isn't over emotional, have things that scares him (look up how he acts when ciel's aunt comes to the mantion.That woman scares them both witless.) And makes him both happy and sad. In difference to claude that is almost compleatly Apathy.
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HowlingWinds123 In reply to ArizunoShojo [2012-12-08 06:09:35 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh I see. Thanks for the info!
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ArizunoShojo In reply to HowlingWinds123 [2012-12-08 08:57:20 +0000 UTC]
That is just what i think. But what do you think of the Black Butler anime/manga? Do you think it is good?
(Excuse all the questions but i'm a curious person)
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ArizunoShojo In reply to HowlingWinds123 [2012-12-08 10:55:06 +0000 UTC]
True. DO you have any favourite character?
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ArizunoShojo In reply to HowlingWinds123 [2012-12-08 12:26:21 +0000 UTC]
I know this might be an odd question: but which ciel do you like the most? The Ciel in the Anime or the ciel in the manga?
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ArizunoShojo In reply to HowlingWinds123 [2012-12-08 21:16:22 +0000 UTC]
Ok. How did you come up with this (parody) with Raven Phantomhive?
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SoftFishy In reply to ArizunoShojo [2013-01-28 23:40:24 +0000 UTC]
That person didn't make the pic
(don't mean to sound rude if I do)
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-01-29 06:55:24 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the wrong assuption i apologize. And no you don't sound rude.
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-01-30 21:33:45 +0000 UTC]
Did you also find the "Raven" comic funny?
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SoftFishy In reply to ArizunoShojo [2013-01-31 21:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Yes I did, I really liked the concept it was conveying about so many may-sues and how no one except for the writer really like to read them.
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-02-01 07:43:52 +0000 UTC]
What makes a belivable oc and what makes a Mary Sue?
Do you have any idea?
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SoftFishy In reply to ArizunoShojo [2013-02-01 22:32:32 +0000 UTC]
ooo I fell like I'm being interviewed :3
I think that that a mary-sue is a mary-sue when a character is absoultly in love with your oc or of some sort and I also believe that a mary-sue will tend not to bring the other characters into the story.... But I would suggest asking someone who has seen a lot of mary-sue because well... I actually haven't seen that much.
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-02-05 16:37:47 +0000 UTC]
Have you read Kuroshitsuji?
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SoftFishy In reply to ArizunoShojo [2013-02-05 20:52:19 +0000 UTC]
Yep just finished it yesterday, well whats been published. Before you ask it is awesomely amazing but I personally think someparts can be really confusing.
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-02-10 19:49:39 +0000 UTC]
What parts are confusing?
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SoftFishy In reply to ArizunoShojo [2013-02-12 01:06:18 +0000 UTC]
Mostly just when they had the mystery. It is still an amazing manga though.
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-02-12 13:55:53 +0000 UTC]
You mean the chapters that revolved around the different "deaths" that occured. Where even Sebastian "died"?
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-02-14 13:17:42 +0000 UTC]
That was my favourite part. I like the mystery. Not knowing whom and what. To then see them reviel the truth.
What is your favourite part?
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SoftFishy In reply to ArizunoShojo [2013-02-14 21:01:46 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm... When they were on the cruis ship. Mostly at the end though with Grell, Ronny, and Undertaker. But I did really enjoy all of the cruis ship moments.
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-02-14 22:36:28 +0000 UTC]
It was a bit surprising to see Lizzie's "unlady" like side. I also belive that the fact that she had a big role in that part made her more than justa pretty girl that auses trouble. It gave her more character.
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SoftFishy In reply to ArizunoShojo [2013-02-15 01:11:20 +0000 UTC]
Yeah it did. Plus I like the fact that she isn't just another pretty face and can actually kick some butt.
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ArizunoShojo In reply to SoftFishy [2013-02-15 07:28:14 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't want to meet her when she is wielding those swords. I actually think she looked more female and less girly during the fight. Lets face it, Ciel is a "Damsel in Distress" and that is often.
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SoftFishy In reply to ArizunoShojo [2013-02-15 12:11:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, and at least now Ciel has someone besides Sebastian to take care of him.
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LadyVictoria92 [2012-08-02 21:53:14 +0000 UTC]
You are awesome! I agree with your commentary. Finally someone understands. I feel bad for Sebastian and Ciel for being paired up with those so called "Eternal lovers." It drives me crazy seeing fanfictions that pair main characters together with mary sues.
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PTDuckie [2012-07-29 04:40:58 +0000 UTC]
XD This is funny. Sadly true though. Oh, what's this talk about a fic called "My Immortal"?
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iamthedamned22 [2012-07-18 22:15:37 +0000 UTC]
I agree so much with your comments about original characters. I roleplayed for a little while, and I hated when people made original characters that are obviously just a character that is themselves in their ideal form. So annoying -__-
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KitsuneMagicJNC In reply to ??? [2012-07-07 03:02:45 +0000 UTC]
yea, Ive met this........well.....developed........charac-HAHAHAHAHAAAHAHAHAAAAA Im sorry I Couldn't do it!!!!!! OMG I HAVE SEEN DIS BETCH SOOO MANY TIMES ITS LOLTASTIC!!!!!!!
FANDOM!!! YOUR MARY SUES SUCK!!!
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ImAVisitorhere [2012-05-23 10:45:43 +0000 UTC]
And the "fanfiction link" thing didn't fool me. The thing that gave it away was the details...
Seriously... fangirls, don't be THAT dumb.
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ImAVisitorhere [2012-05-23 10:43:38 +0000 UTC]
pfffft.. yeah, right.. and I'm holding a sword *swings toothpick around* be afraid!
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