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1. The Tragic Tale of Mari-lu 'Raven' Phantomhive>> by ObsessiveFangirl83786 reviewsA mysterious, beautiful young girl comes to the Phantomhive house claiming to be Ciel's long lost big sister! How will the household react? And will Sebasuchan be able to resist her for long? SebastianxOC PLEASE R&R!
Rated: M - Poorly written English - Romance/Tragedy/Shameless Smut - Chapters: 85 - Words: 873659832569 - Reviews: Too many - Updated: All the time
This bitch.
This bitch right here.FANGIRLS. PLEASE STOP.
EDIT: IT'S NOT A REAL FANFICTION. I made it up.
Look closer. It's not a link. Thank you. The fact that some of you thought it really was an actual fic makes me sad. D: Because that means there are fics that look just like it.Now, don't get me wrong, I love reading fanfiction and I'm perfectly fine with original characters as supporting or sometimes even main characters. But I hate, hate, hate when people make up a female original character that is overly cliche (kind-hearted, good-looking, good at everything, everyone likes her, etc.) and insert her into a fandom universe where one or every character falls in love with her, even if it's against that character's nature. All this is is girls who want to have sex with a fictional guy and thus inserting a glorified, overly-perfected version of themselves into said universe and then making up some half-assed plot to go along with the gratuitous amounts of gag-worthy sex.
That's like saying 'I love these characters, but I wanna be in there with them and make them fall in love with me! This story's all about MEEEE~' There's a lot of it. And I'm a little sick of seeing it.
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I totally agree with you. There are many girls who do that . FANGIRLS.PLEASE STOP.
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I have something to say... i totally agree with you ^^. But there are many girls who do that.
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-nod-
Sorry sweetie,
Sebby could never love a Sue. (not realistically anyways)
But I really love this comic. X3
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Iloveyousomuchrightnow.
I RP as Ciel, and I see this constantly, and it drives me up a damned wall.
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I didnt try to click the link... (1) Cuz I hate fanfics that make the main characters act unnaturally...(2) Because the third panel was effing hilarious xD!!!
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you scared the hell out of me when i saw the first panel... but i was recovered after i read the last xD
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Could not have said it better XD This is awesome!
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That little bitch got owned. XD
Epic, simply epic.
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Thank you. That's what I want to say first; I was actually going to write something similar to this (but without all the sex, mind you) and I thought my character Isabella was completely original. I had absolutely no idea I had put myself into the storyline until I happened to see this. Sure, to me, it was like a slap in the face, but a good one, you know?
So thanks for helping a young writer be better.
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I laughed at the comic, I laughed at the description, I almost died when I read the edit! It's just the way you said it, it was hilarious!....and true...
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She looks stalkerish and a whore o___o..Awesome artwork! ^^
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Actually it is..
With a girl named raven..
And it is terribly written.. lol.
Thats why I was like ''Oh my goodness she's seen it too??'' lol.
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Okay wait arent regular main character anime girls mary-sues too?
because they arent perfect but are in a cutsie way (just explaining how i see it) and they ALWAYS end up with the main guy in the anime stuff?
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you bring light into the darkness of fangirlism. :tearplz:
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lol i love this! thats amazing~
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Ok, what's so wrong with OC's? Can't people use their imagination and not get harshly criticized for it?
Don't like it, don't read it.
Anyway...
I see your point about the whole Mary Sue thing though. I don't like them either. If I made a Kuro fanfic my character would not be with Sebastian...or be a Phantomhive...that's just too...typical...
I think this is hilarious. I'd be annoyed by this too.
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*claps* I love you for this!
This is brilliant!!
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I just hate that kinda fanwork... Not THAT but u know what I mean.
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+ Ciel x Sebastian is. So. Cool. + So true if you don't notice...
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+ Love Ciel's face in last panel :
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well acutually i have switched i have now gone to ocxoc so ill change my pics soon because ocxrealanimechara never happens 
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Of course you would ~GothGurl86 since you're obviously one of THOSE people who bring the OC!MarySue's into our world because you just want to fantasize yourself with the guys & thus you're just butt-hurt by this illustration
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well for me something worse is the yaoi pairings on this show its like sebas-chan(lazy to write full name)xCeil Yuck! I HATE Yaoi
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Its called Mary Sue Writing Syndrome. Unfortuantely, there is no known cure other then to stick said writers in a room with anime and just leave them there for all of eternity. Please donate all you can to savethesuers.fangirl.bbnet to help the noble cause of finding the cure.
(No, it's not a real site.)
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I will admit to acting like this sometimes, but I know where to draw the line.
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these perfect female characters are called Sues. They are of the evil Sue-niverse and must be destroyed lest they make canon disappear, proper grammar into turd and characters into stupid dopplegangers to highlight their own perfection!!
Oh and I love your drawings, comics and stuff. YOU'RE AWESOME.
Kill the sues o____________________________________________o
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I have a fanfiction.... It's mostly torture though and the closest thing to a mary-sue in it would be the girl that got her head cracked open in the first chapter. It's Invader ZIM however but Invader ZIM is a AWESOME show! Amazing comic!
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Yeah.... I just keep my OCs to myself (only share them with my closest friends who help me make them) because... Well... Yeah... I just feel like my fantasies stay in MY head (and on MY iPod)
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I respect you so much right now.
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awwww thanks!
( i do mention my OCs but i don't give the background stories from the ones in fan fictions)
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Me and my friend are working on basically a GIANT fan fiction where we just screw around mostly with the Death note cast, Kuroshitsuji, Pandora hearts, etc. We keep it to ourselves and one friend so It's kind of awesome.
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yeah that's what i'm doing with my friend, but we are just sticking with Kuroshitsuji and our many OCs
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How long has yours been going on? -sparkles-
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.....ummmm..... since...sometime in june i think....
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Oh my, our's has been going on since the start of last year.
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well, i really just got in to anime this summer, soo yeah
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I see fucking kuro oc's everywhere. EVVERRYYWHHEERREE.
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Tell me about it, I swear to god I saw one just like that on FFN
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Ohh sad but true x_x
But don't forget:
She has got a super-hyper-wonderful Sue-Best-Friend, too x_x
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the sad thing is that half the fanfics on that site are just like that. ahhhhhhgggg (facepalm) thats why i don't go on there anymore.
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