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1. The Tragic Tale of Mari-lu 'Raven' Phantomhive>> by ObsessiveFangirl83786 reviewsA mysterious, beautiful young girl comes to the Phantomhive house claiming to be Ciel's long lost big sister! How will the household react? And will Sebasuchan be able to resist her for long? SebastianxOC PLEASE R&R!
Rated: M - Poorly written English - Romance/Tragedy/Shameless Smut - Chapters: 85 - Words: 873659832569 - Reviews: Too many - Updated: All the time
This bitch.
This bitch right here.FANGIRLS. PLEASE STOP.
EDIT: IT'S NOT A REAL FANFICTION. I made it up.
Look closer. It's not a link. Thank you. The fact that some of you thought it really was an actual fic makes me sad. D: Because that means there are fics that look just like it.Now, don't get me wrong, I love reading fanfiction and I'm perfectly fine with original characters as supporting or sometimes even main characters. But I hate, hate, hate when people make up a female original character that is overly cliche (kind-hearted, good-looking, good at everything, everyone likes her, etc.) and insert her into a fandom universe where one or every character falls in love with her, even if it's against that character's nature. All this is is girls who want to have sex with a fictional guy and thus inserting a glorified, overly-perfected version of themselves into said universe and then making up some half-assed plot to go along with the gratuitous amounts of gag-worthy sex.
That's like saying 'I love these characters, but I wanna be in there with them and make them fall in love with me! This story's all about MEEEE~' There's a lot of it. And I'm a little sick of seeing it.
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Oh no! Kuroshitsuji has become Twilight! Abandon ship! Aahhhhh.....
Lol.
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I write fanfic...you just made me want to stop XD Really good point though...I mean my characters aren't perfect...one has anger issues, ones kinda loopy, ones smart but with no common sense onece so ever, extera...I hate it when their perfect...It just isn't possible...I'm going to switch to drawing...hopefully...I don't suck XD
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I was hoping it was a link to a gag fiction ;3; I wished to laugh....XD
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This pic made my day! I even posted a warning on my fanfiction that said" THIS IS NOT A MARRY SUE STORY"just so people know that something like this (female character being to perfect)would happen. Very nice picture, I love Ciels faces :3
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Totally agree with you there..... tired of reading crappy fanfiction.
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I actually like this character....
..... the look, not the background story D:
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FINALLY SOMEONE WHO UNDERSTANDS
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This is a funny little comic XD
but I totally agree with you on the description, I'm just sick of stuff like that.
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THANK YOU FOR DOING THIS
The only thing I hate about fanfics is when they don't follow along with the show that their using in the fanfic.Cause the orignal is needed to follow up with the story-board.
And I hate when they claim that their realated,for example like in the pic,to Ciel in some magical way.
anyways..I LOVE HOW YOU DREW THIS,and the last panal
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So true. Thank you.
will you marry me?
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I just found a fanfiction that, I shit you not, is this exactly, but with the character having a name from the Sound of Music.
[link]
I lawled.
Hard.
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THANK YOU SO MUCH.
I love you so much for saying that. It's been in dire need of being said for a long time now.
WAY too many fans are doing exactly what you described nowadays, and sometimes their obsession goes so far as to try and ruin it for others. I'm glad that there are others out there besides me who are sick of it. XP
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Even i, who has tons of OCs, and as someone who often directly writes them self into a fanfic (usually for comedic purposes) really hate characters like this. It's like they're not even trying to make their characters realistic D: Christ, at least i try not to Sue me and my imaginary buds up....
Anywho, i love this
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Well, it's not thinking that it's a link that's bad, because, sadly, there are stories like this out there. It's being disappointed that is just shameful to yourself. God, I hate, hatehatehatehate Mary Sues.
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SO TRUE. THANK YOU FOR DOING THIS.
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this is very nice i love it keep up the nice work
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Ugh. I hate running into fan fics like that. I mean, fine, put your Oc in, but does it really have to come with some sadly thought out plot line like that? (And I'd like to sadly say there Are a lot of fanfics like that.) Honestly I just want to punch some people in the face. Like really? I'm very sorry but 1: No one gives shit about your mary-sue Oc. 2: If you're going to put them in have all the other people act in character still Please! You're already fucking things up anyway. 3: Does EVERYONE really have to love them? REALLY?! 4: Something that bugs me so much is that the Oc that pops in is usually some all powerful bitch who everyone recognizes as great. It really bothers me. and 5: Seriously if I wanted the main character to be someone I didn't know I wouldn't be looking at a place like fanfic.net for something to read! And seriously it seems like most of the Ocs put in are just the same dumb ass friggen person at some point. It's just annoying and why I don't even bother w/ fanfics that have Ocs anymore.
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I have no idea what this series is, but dear Lord yes. It's true, as is your worthy rant in the description.
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Hell my oc isnt perfect at all.....she somehow manages to piss off certain characters(pfft) though sebastian's "sister", who likes ciel....who's fiance is lizzy (yes i made this story a long time ago so even i think its a bit kinky)
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My oc would only have a crush on the char shed like.
And, like me, my oc Ebony is the biggest little prick one would ever meet. She'd still remain a asshole all the same, with her many flaws, as a mere supporting character. I hate Mary-sues, but I made a complete opposite (AKA Mary sue) version of ebony, and I torture the mary sue more. I kill her off violently, or make Ebony laugh at her.
I read a couple fanfics here and there, and I would love to punch the owner of every oc who is a lover to a character who would either not like that character, who already has their own lover, etc, in the face. I read a fanfic, where this chick had a
Curvy, blond, ditzy, giggly, perfect Mary sue, in love with Link. Like, no. Just no. He has Zelda. Really.
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Lol. I think we all hate mary-sue characters in fanfic. Which is why the only time I use OCs is when I want them to be the badguys 
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Somehow, the epic fanfiction "My Immortal" springs to my mind...
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There are much worse ones out there.
Trust me, they get fucking scary.
My Immortal was pretty hilarious though. XD
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I agreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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I've found people who understand TT_TT
I agree, I have nooo problem with OC's whatsoever but if you make them please no mary sue. Please.
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my inner grammar nazi wanted to shoot her in between the eyes but I'm too nice I would have just wasted a bullet :T
This made me laugh, honestly [as do most of your work] Laugh in a good way, just to make sure..
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I feel your pain I hate Mary sue's
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LOL omg anyone named Raven needs to gtfo anyway
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so funnnie~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^O^~!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A fantastic point~ Brilliant job.
Seriously. o_o
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Gosh, finally people get it! I hate fanfictions loaded with mary sues who have all the guys fall to her feet. Where's the problems? This was a wonderful point, glad you made it.
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funny thing is, i have found someone with a Kuro Oc that looks a lot like your Raven 
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This is why I'd NEVER make an original character for Kuroshitsuji.
There's perfectly good characters already there waiting to be thrust into the die-hard fan's world of yaoi and shounen-ai fanfiction XD
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My Immortal. My Immortal, right there in a nutshell.
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WORST STORY EVAR!!!! you are talking about the Harry Potter one, correct? xDDD
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Oh hell ya!! I wanted to make my own version that would only last a single chapter in which every Non Mary Sue OC would go to Enoby and use their powers to wipe her pitiful existance off of the face of the universe and everything would return to normal, but there were 2 things wrong with that.
1)I have no OCs beside my own
and
2)I would probably die after the first word.
KANA-CHAN SAYS HE LOVES YOU!!!
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oh my gods. You might die but that would be awesome. She turned Harry into this stupid wannabe emo-Satan worshiping... UGH.
I would help you make OC's xD
TELL HIM I LOVE HIM TOO!!
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Oh hell ya!! I shall include your OCs if you wish...
WILL DO!!
Me:KANA-CHAN!!! DarkAbyss2240 LOVE YOU TOO!!!
Child Kaname:YAY!!!!
I got him from Sagakure. He is sooooo cute!! He is an Otaku Mascot!!!
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