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buschermoehle-photo [2013-05-13 06:49:25 +0000 UTC]

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Hey,

this is a self portrait in a studio? Thats quietly hard to practice- for that fact it's very well !
But, I have to say some little things are not that well in this picture.
You hold your hand around your belly. That looks to me like you're pregnant. If you're pregnant and wanted to do some pragnance- photos the light acts not with it- for that, theres too much shadow.
The other arm is a little unhappy about half behind your back.
At the left eye, theres a too big shadow- here you would have been better with working with a reflector or putting the deepths up in photoshop. For that fact, the light on the other half of your face is too bright.
The background is really interesting, interesting light and structure- I love it !

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Lothrian [2013-05-24 19:05:47 +0000 UTC]

Lovely, lovely shot

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Gabby76 [2013-05-02 23:43:16 +0000 UTC]

A compelling photo, all of them are stunning and more than worth a look.

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Buntcone [2013-05-02 18:47:14 +0000 UTC]

i really like this. you look so vulnerable. probably why i like it

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Sarah--Elizabeth [2013-05-02 15:44:56 +0000 UTC]

Pretty <3

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