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UPDATE: I was just too caught up in everything else going on to be able to finish a second prize for this I'm sorry! T^T /cry
BUT! I have chosen a winner: Elephantfreak 's Bao Qu
Their entry wasn't one of the very long ones, but I feel it captures the essence of a what a spiritkin should be~ The way that it appears, the boon that it grants, and especially the strange behavior of not being able to travel vertically, all really appealed to me. It gave me that, "Huh.. that'd be really weird" feeling when trying to picture this creature in the world. Many of the entries were very extreme without giving me enough of that.. certain something.. and just giving the spiritkin some bombastic boons/curses xD Which isn't wrong, necessarily, but they're supposed to be a fey race, a race that defies common sense and logic and just gives you the willies when you interact with them... not just because they can be scary (which many are), but because you don't understand their thoughts and motives. They are alien to our realm, and should should feel alien.
A few other entries really made me happy and will be receiving "as time permits" semi-custom tokens as a high-five and thank you for making me smile.
Elix-e The Spinster entry was probably a super close second place. Honestly I was torn which one to choose. *o* I really loved the aesthetic and general feel for this entry, I definitely got that creepy vibe trying to picture it appearing outside of some random village, oh man! I think the effect of the magic thread was maybe too potent in the end, but I am so tempted to run a story around this spiritkin in the future! Very well done!
giz-art Holy crap that picture made me so giddy xD Pawndigs sound so adorable!! The only reason I didn't feel like this would be a good winner is that the pawndigs seem too traditionally sentient? They seem like they could be a normal race of creatures living in the world, and not something fey and mysterious. Still, the entry was well presented and the race itself gave me the "awwwwwww"s x3
CitrusBun Pretty much for the same reasons I listed for Giz, the Eolas gave me lots of good feels, but ended up sounding more like an actual normal race without the heeby-jeeby vibes of the spiritkin. I loved the art accompaniment and.. ok I admit I might have a huge soft spot for big libraries ><;;
I will note the four winners later on after I've finished a few errands, but that's all folks! Thank you everyone for entering, I really enjoyed reading through your entries!! <3
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- ADVENT CALENDAR DAY 9 -
~~Candlelight and Storytime~~
Yesterday, I posted a brief introduction to one of Eyre's important races, the Spiritkin (over here if you missed it! { ADVENT DAY 8 } ). So today I'm going to have a little contest centered around them!
Spiral, one of my NPCs, is collecting stories about the fey Spiritkin. There are so very many different types of spirits on Eyre, it's almost impossible to count. She wants you to tell her about a Spiritkin that you've heard about or encountered! With her is a very bed-headed little elnin that seems to be quite interested in the idea of storytime, and will likely follow you home if you tell them a good one.
CONTEST SPECIFICS:
* The purpose of this contest is to create and describe a type of Spiritkin.
* By submitting your ideas to the contest, you will be giving me permission to use the concept for future events/stories/etc within the Mana universe (even if you don't win). I will credit you for the concept if used.
* Spiritkin are creatures based on fairytale and legends. There are many Spiritkin on Eyre with analogues to our own myths (such as the Dullahan) but are typically different in some way. There are also, of course, types that are completely specific to Eyre (so you're welcome to get at creative as you like, they don't need to be based on any existing creature or myth).
* The Spiritkin are always bound by a set of rules (or jinxes as many people call them) that they cannot break and that determine the way they react to just about everything. These rules can be absolutely anything, from not being about to touch the color blue, or only being able to use their left hand to open doors, etc anything at all!
* The jinxes also apply to what happens when something upsets or pleases a Spiritkin. Like receiving a golden brick on your doorstep for giving an old treefolk a nice back scratch, or conversely getting your garden infested with poisonous frogs because you kicked a fey toadling off a hiking path.
* Spiritkin are generally a neutral race as long as you play by their rules.. but do not be fooled! They are terribly dangerous if you break a jinx or otherwise upset them in any way. A harmless little grey gremlin taking sugar from your kitchen should be ignored unless you want to wake up with needles in your ears.
* It is also important to note that Spiritkin are not bound by conventional physics or common sense. They can appear/disappear as their rules allow (one common jinx is the inability to vanish or teleport if you maintain eye contact with them). And just because you're carrying an easy and friendly conversation with a beautiful fey elf, it doesn't mean that at any moment she won't turn into some horrible vision of decay and drag you into an early grave for letting her see your uncovered wrists.
ENTRY REQUIREMENTS:
* Create your own type of Spiritkin! Describe their appearance and where they like to live.
* Tell me about their jinxes, how do they act and what kinds of things they're known for.
* Very important: tell me about what kind of interactions make them angry or scared and which ones make them happy!
Examples: The Dullahan is a terrible creature that will always attack you if you see it.. Unless! You have gold on your person, it hates gold and will not go near it
House elves will clean your home at night, but only when you are sleeping. If you thank them for their hard work in any way (like leaving treats out for them), they will vanish and never reappear. It's best to ignore them.
* You can just give me the straight facts about the creature, or for bonus points you can tell me about them in a short story! (Please not too long, I have a short attention span xD)
* More bonus points if you draw/sketch the Spiritkin for me!
* Post your entries at my comment below so that I can keep track please!
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Q & A! Will add any answers to questions and stuff here if they come up:
Q: Do Spiritkin have a specific appearance? Or do they just look like anything your mind can imagine?
A: Pretty much anything at all! I would encourage making them at least a little.. odd.. in some way. Like if your Spiritkin takes the shape of an animal, have some part of the body be unusually shaped/colored/etc to mark it as an unnatural creature.
Q: Can Spiritkin die? Do they kill each other?
A: Technically, it's possible. But it would have to be by some very special/dramatic methods. In most cases when a Spiritkin is rendered unconscious or otherwise defeated it is usually banished back to its home realm instead of being outright killed. And sure, Spiritkin could kill each other under the right circumstances/motivation. ^^
Q: Can we enter more than once?
A: I would prefer one entry per person (to keep things as tidy as possible), but I will accept up to two.
Q: Do Spiritkin only come out in the winter?
A: They can show up at any time during the year, however it's much easier/more common for them to appear during winter.
Q: Can I still use the design after I submit it?
A: Of course!~ You're just giving me permission to use your ideas as a resource to populate my setting with unique creatures. If you want to use your idea in your own work, I have no issues with it. After all, Spiritkin come from a whole different dimension, so it's entirely possible for them to visit other places as well (which is why there are a lot of Spiritkin that are similar to myths from Earth!).
Q: What will you do with my entry exactly?
A: Like I mentioned above, I'm going to use these entries to inspire actual Spiritkin that will appear in the world. I will also compile the entries for other people to browse whenever they'd like to create or choose Spiritkin for their Manaverse pets to interact with (in roleplays etc). I may use part or all of your entry, or mash two entries together, who knows. I will likely make changes to things and mish mash ideas to create new creatures, so bear in mind that your original concept may not appear (canonically) as you originally wrote them.
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CONTEST RULES:
End date: Entry must be received by Sunday, Dec 13@ 7PM PST
-- May extend if there's enough interest? --
The winner receives the candle elnin!
(There is a second elnin I might add before the contest ends, in which case there will be two winners)
No co-ownership!
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[Traits]
[Candes]
Mane (Hair): Short [-]
Fringe (Ear Tufts): vv.Long []
Tail Size: Large []
Tail Style: Glade []
Crown: n/a
MP: [8]
Rank: Adventurer
Notables: Potential fire hazard. The candles are made of a special floating wax, so should be tethered if possible to keep them from wandering away.
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Elnins are a close species by myself manaberry <3 Please do not make your own!
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Comments: 142
Elephantfreak [2015-12-24 02:15:14 +0000 UTC]
Wow! Thank you so much for choosing my entry! Really glad I was thinking about how I had a tendency to trip up or slip down stairs when you posted this. Also, got inspiration from the Á Bao A Qu entry in the Book of Imaginary Beings.
Congratulations to all of the other winners too!~
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giz-art In reply to Elephantfreak [2015-12-24 10:31:59 +0000 UTC]
Congrats !!! Your concept was so AWESOME !!!! <3
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Elephantfreak In reply to giz-art [2015-12-25 01:48:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I thought your concept was super cute.
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cyymin [2015-12-23 23:09:30 +0000 UTC]
Eep! Congrats to everyone-- you guys deserve it!! c:
//hugs Elix-e
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Elix-e [2015-12-23 21:04:56 +0000 UTC]
[*passes out*] OH man I can't believe this!! Thank you so so much for hosting this contest, it was really a blast to enter and read everyone's entries c: I would be honoured if you did end up writing a story and including entry in the future~
And a semi-custom is more than I could ever ask for, thank you so much!! <33
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Thlyatara [2015-12-23 20:15:27 +0000 UTC]
Well, I tried. As I have an elnin I adore I don't see this as a complete loss. Anyway, I'm freely giving up the rights to the critter I made. I'll be sure to draw it at least once so you can see what I imagined it as, but the Veranút is yours to do with what you will.
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Jahpan [2015-12-23 19:37:24 +0000 UTC]
Super awesome congrats all!!!!
I will prob try to make some fanart for the new owner, I could not for the life of me make a writing prompt!
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Gerce In reply to manaberri [2015-12-19 00:12:57 +0000 UTC]
oh yeah i forget that its not all the same XD hehe im excited
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manaberri In reply to Shibaan [2015-12-17 20:06:19 +0000 UTC]
Yes! You have until tomorrow evening to enter ^^
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Lady-Abbington [2015-12-17 04:12:19 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh it's gorgeous!! This is still open, right? I have time to enter? *puppy eyes*
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manaberri In reply to Lady-Abbington [2015-12-17 05:20:23 +0000 UTC]
Yup! It's open until the 18th <3
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Lady-Abbington In reply to manaberri [2015-12-17 13:41:25 +0000 UTC]
Yay! *hurries to think of something*
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cyymin [2015-12-14 11:56:34 +0000 UTC]
Eep~! An extension!! So exciting~
Also, if it's alright, I'm not sure why, but I can no longer edit my entry?? Is there any way that you could maybe help so I could be able to do that? ^^"
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manaberri In reply to cyymin [2015-12-14 15:21:04 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure why you wouldn't be able to edit your entry any more o3o if you have to, you can try putting the changes in a new comment ( as in reply to your old entry along with a quick mention that you're submitting edits, so that I can see it's related)
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cyymin In reply to manaberri [2015-12-14 20:26:13 +0000 UTC]
Sounds good! ;v; Thank you very much~
Hmmmm, I'll def. try to make it work if I can.
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ClefairyKid [2015-12-14 11:37:46 +0000 UTC]
it's a really subtle expression and nice candles too c:
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Hugbell [2015-12-13 23:21:17 +0000 UTC]
ohhh I need to see if I can come up with an entry tomorrow *A* This one's so cute.
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Jahpan [2015-12-13 22:32:31 +0000 UTC]
OMG I LOVE THIS ONE, i saw her before but didnt see she was a contest, amazing, gorgeous!!
are you against pixel art at all?
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manaberri In reply to Jahpan [2015-12-13 22:34:25 +0000 UTC]
Not at all, I love pixel art @ u@)-b
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Jahpan In reply to manaberri [2015-12-13 22:37:20 +0000 UTC]
would i be able to draw both of them together or would you prefer just the spirit?
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manaberri In reply to Jahpan [2015-12-13 22:40:44 +0000 UTC]
Unless there's a reason for the elnin to be there, I would suggest just the spirit is probably best. ^^
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earthcult [2015-12-13 21:19:47 +0000 UTC]
ALRIGHT I JUST HATCHED A COOL IDEA--
all i need is some welch's grape juice, cookies and ill be writing this bad boy up B)
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SnippedHerStrings [2015-12-13 18:50:04 +0000 UTC]
Come now, my adventures, take a seat! This day I will share with you all the tale of the Will-o’-the-wisp!
Now, as you continue your travels, there may be a time you find yourself in an unfamiliar place. Among the winding treks, the daunting tree stands, or the expansive plains, there may be hope yet to return to your nice warm beds. If no other way can be found, you may call upon the wisdom of the Will-o’-the-wisp.
However -heed this warning- , the Will-o’-the-wisp is an ancient spiritkin and is not to be taken lightly. Call upon it only as a last resort and mind your manners. Else you forget them -and everything else- completely.
Legend says, to request an audience with the spiritkin, you must follow these three steps: wait until dark, turn out your lights, and in a calm voice clearly state “I cannot seem to find my way. I am lost and am looking for a guide.”
You will hear grass whistling, then old wood creaking, just before nine hollow lights appear before your eyes. But do not turn to look! Do not move an inch! Remember your manners and wait your turn, never interrupt the Will-o’-the-wisp. Its greeting depends on the traveler but, once welcomed, you may turn to face it.
Neither friend nor foe, it will appear before you as a fellow traveler; though with its eyes of moss, a mane of reeds, and a lagoon tail intertwined in cattails, its shape certainly is unsettling. Through its hymns and rhymes, request of it what you will, all the while keeping in mind the price for your desperation.
The fee for the assistance of the Will-o’-the wisp is a memory. Pleasant, painful, or precious, it all depends on the spiritkin. If a traveler is lucky, it will be satisfied with just the tale, however, if it so chooses, it may take the memory; storing it away in its damp little wooden chest that hangs around its neck.
Seal the deal and you’ll find yourself being led to your desired location, decline the deal and you’ll find yourself alone, but BREAK a deal and find yourself wandering for the rest of your existence lost, not being able to recall a single thing; about what happened or even about yourself.
So stay safe, everyone. Feel free to stay for the night. And, as you continue your travels, do not stray from the path, always head straight home, and always mind your manners~
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Spiritkin Name: Will-o'-the-wisp
Description: A shape shifter, it is most famous for it’s elnin shape; eyes of moss, mane of reeds, tail of cattails, and a little wooden chest that hangs around it’s neck. No one seems to know it’s true shape. Though, the thing that always remains constant through its shapes is the hole in it’s back. Damp and decaying, looking very much like a rotting log.
Lives: Prefers areas with stagnant water but will always be found in a dark place; will come if sincerely summoned
To summon: Wait until dark, turn out your lights, and in a calm voice clearly state “I cannot seem to find my way. I am lost and am looking for a guide.”
Known for: A neutral guide that is willing to help lost individuals find what they seek whether it be their way home, their companions, or even riches. Though, there will always be a price. The fee for its assistance is a memory. Pleasant, painful precious, it all depends on the Will-o’-the-wisp. If you are lucky, it will be satisfied with just the tale but, if it so chooses, it can take the memory, storing it away in it’s damp little chest covered in moss.
Jinxes: Cannot touch iron
Cannot be seen in bright/unnatural light
Forced to stand still if the hole in it’s back is starred at; often times out of discomfort and resistance, it will try to shape shift even when frozen in place. This jinx is broken the moment eye contact is lost.
Cannot enter through a doorway, must manifest on the other side
Likes: Listening to others talk, especially about memories
Not being starred at
One-on-one interactions; will shy away fro large groups, lost or not
Being thanked after leading someone home. Typically won't accept physical gifts but if thanked, or even invited in, fireflies will decorate the home; A sign of the Will-o'-the-wisps blessing.
Dislikes:
Iron
Being interrupted
Having to repeat itself
Large groups
Hates: Bright/unnatural light
Having it’s back starred at
Mannerisms: Often speaks in metaphors, alliterations, and quotes. Very rarely will speak more than a “yes” or “no” to clarify itself so pay attention and stay on your toes.
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manaberri In reply to SnippedHerStrings [2015-12-13 19:28:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your entry! If you would please be so kind as to post this in reply to my comment over here: comments.deviantart.com/1/5770…
So that I don't lose track of your entry when I'm doing the judging! <3
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SnippedHerStrings In reply to manaberri [2015-12-13 19:37:43 +0000 UTC]
Welp. This is embarrassing! I will be sure to do that. So sorry, I must have pushed the wrong reply button...
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manaberri In reply to SnippedHerStrings [2015-12-13 19:39:34 +0000 UTC]
>u< It's no problem at all! (I do the same thing ohuu =A= )
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MowenDesigns [2015-12-13 18:32:31 +0000 UTC]
I just wanted to say this is a gorgeous design and a lovely idea for a giveaway. I'm not much of a writer myself so I won't be participating, but I think it's so nice of you to hold this event!
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manaberri In reply to MowenDesigns [2015-12-13 19:31:16 +0000 UTC]
Oooo ;u; thank you so much! I'm so happy people seem to be having fun with their entries x3 It's easy to forget to do free events sometimes, so I'm going to try to make them fun when I can!
<3
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cyymin [2015-12-13 16:16:00 +0000 UTC]
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this is so exciting hhh
One question about Spiritkin dying~
So can Spiritkin kill one another??
//I love this elnin too much
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manaberri In reply to cyymin [2015-12-13 17:57:35 +0000 UTC]
Sure, spiritkin could kill each other under the right circumstances/motivation. ^^
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cyymin In reply to manaberri [2015-12-13 21:54:11 +0000 UTC]
Sounds good! Thanks for the quick response~
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PatchworkPrince [2015-12-12 20:06:35 +0000 UTC]
Can spiritkin be killed or destroyed in some fashion?
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manaberri In reply to PatchworkPrince [2015-12-13 02:43:21 +0000 UTC]
Technically, it's possible. But it would have to be by some very special/dramatic methods. In most cases when a spiritkin is rendered unconscious or otherwise defeated it is usually banished back to its home realm instead of being outright killed.
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Gerce [2015-12-11 21:19:18 +0000 UTC]
i'm so excited to see all the wonderful ideas ;u; <3 i can't wait to see who wins hehe, this elnin is gorgeous..~
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Gerce [2015-12-11 19:14:38 +0000 UTC]
oh no i typed all that out and i thought i copied it but i didnt T_T
Edit: i fixed it yey ;u;
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XXxbunnyloverxX [2015-12-10 05:15:23 +0000 UTC]
This is so awesome ^w^
I just hope my entry isn't to long XD
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Gerce [2015-12-10 04:15:14 +0000 UTC]
soooo...would whatever were designing end up being like the general look of spiritkin? or can each one literally be anything like pokemon sorta .u. ?
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manaberri In reply to Gerce [2015-12-10 04:49:47 +0000 UTC]
They can look like absolutely anything. ^^
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Gerce In reply to manaberri [2015-12-10 16:20:24 +0000 UTC]
alrighty thanks~ i'm definitely going to attempt a submission ^ o ^
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sunnydito [2015-12-10 03:55:35 +0000 UTC]
There is no limit to the number of entries we post? Although quality is the most important thing, if we have more than one idea can we enter multiple?
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manaberri In reply to sunnydito [2015-12-10 05:02:39 +0000 UTC]
I would prefer one per person, but I'll accept up to two. ^^
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inkogeki [2015-12-10 01:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Last question 'v'!! Even if we're submitting the designs do we still own the designs afterwards? Like could we draw them more as long as we don't tamper with the lore or make up extra stories for them? //fell in love with my spiritkin ;_ ;
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manaberri In reply to inkogeki [2015-12-10 01:41:09 +0000 UTC]
hehehe <3 Yeah that's totally fine! The way I see it, the Spiritkin come from a whole different dimension, so it's entirely possible for them to visit other places as well (which is why there are a lot of Spiritkin that are similar to myths from Earth).
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sinpure [2015-12-10 01:19:30 +0000 UTC]
this deisign is very very very familer, and I know I have seen it somewhere, but hmm--
anyway!!
maybe ill try to go for this ;;''
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