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Description “It’s been three years since Zim left. Tomorrow I start high school with Dib. He’s become such a jerk. Ever since Zim left Dib hasn’t been as insane, but now he’s hanging with the popular kids. He acts like I don’t even exist. Not that I care, but it does sometimes feel good to know that I have a brother that cares for me even when I don’t care back. It’s just been weird since Zim left with Gir.”  

Gaz sighed and put her journal down. She looked out the window at the edge of her bed. The sun was getting ready to set on the horizon.

Three years ago Zim had set off from Earth to destroy his leaders because they had lied to him about his mission. Over the years Dib had finally given up on aliens and focused on popularity because of peer pressure from others. Dib had made his way to being able to date all the cheer leaders in the middle school. Dib was always so busy he forgot about Gaz. He had never been the same since Zim left. Gaz had become smart enough to get bumped a grade into Dib’s grade.  

Gaz closed her journal and set it on the table next to her bed. She laid her head down and closed her eyes into a deep sleep. The next morning her alarm went off.  She groaned and pulled the covers over her face.

“GAZ! It’s time for school! Get up or I’ll have the robots come up and get you!” The professor yelled from downstairs.

“Fine,” Gaz grumbled as she got out of bed.

She got dressed into her black t-shirt and black short skirt that was almost too small for her. She put her skull necklace on and big black boots that went to her knees. She grabbed her Gameslave and back pack. She headed downstairs to get breakfast. The professor video came up to her and greeted her. She ignored it and went to go get some toast. Dib was at the table listening to his ipod. He was pretty much the same except for the growth. He was seven foot and Gaz was five foot.

“Hey Dib,” Gaz said trying to get her brother to acknowledge her.

Dib didn’t hear her and continued to listen to his ipod. He was head banging to a rock song. Gaz rolled her eyes and headed for the door followed by Dib who realized what time it was. They walked along not speaking to each other at all. Gaz was nervous about her first day at school. Dib on the other hand was perfectly calm. He was smiling and listening to his music.

They finally reached the school. It was HUGE! There were over a thousand of kids just outside. There were kids who were being dropped off by the bus, there were kids who used their own cars and there were kids who were being dropped off by their parents. Everything looked like a movie where the new kid had an embarrassing moment the first day of his first year and it haunted him all throughout senior year. It was some type of Disney movie that Gaz didn’t care about at the moment. She walked around looking at everything. Dib saw a few friends of his and went to them giving them high fives.

Gaz rolled her eyes and continued moving on. She walked down the halls to find her first class. Hopefully her teacher was nicer than the ones she had before. Like Miss. Bitters. Gaz looked at her schedule again. She bumped into this one girl who was wearing a cheerleader’s outfit.

“Hey! Watch it freshman!” The girl yelled pushing Gaz.

Gaz flailed and tried to gain her balance.

“Don’t you dare touch me again! Got that?” the girl yelled.

“I got that you have the brain the size of peanut,” Gaz mumbled under her breath trying to walk past the girl without causing trouble.

“What did you say!?” The girl asked standing in front of Gaz’s way.

“I said you sound like a very popular person,” Gaz said trying to kiss up to her and have her leave her alone.

“That’s not what you said! I heard well enough to know that isn’t what you said!” the girl shouted.

“Then what did I say pea brain!?” Gaz yelled at the girl.

“Hey Kate! Is this freshman bothering you!?” A big, bulky guy asked.

He was around 8 foot and was wearing a football jersey. He had bruises and scars all on his face. He had blond hair and big green eyes that looked like they were blood lust.

“Johnny. This girl is being mean to me. Make her stop,” Kate said giving him a puppy dog look.

Johnny cracked his knuckles. Gaz grew frightened at what the giant monster boy would do to her. Johnny grabbed a trash can and grabbed her. He shoved her but into it. She sat in the trash can. She tried to get out. Kate and Johnny were laughing along with several other football players and cheerleaders. Gaz continued to try to get out. Everyone in the halls was laughing at her. Gaz was totally embarrassed.

“My first day and something has already gone horribly wrong!” Gaz said trying to bury her face in her legs that hung out of the trash can.

After a few more attempts of trying to get out Johnny got bored.

“Let’s do something else now,” Johnny said grabbing the side of the trash can and putting it at the edge of a stair well.

Gaz’s eyes grew wide with fright.

“PUT THAT GIRL DOWN!” shouted a voice.

Johnny turned around to see who would challenge him. Gaz looked past Johnny’s big body to see the one person she thought would never stick up for her.
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Comments: 147

mancan71 In reply to ??? [2008-04-11 19:54:04 +0000 UTC]

chapter?

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jackskellington562 In reply to mancan71 [2008-04-12 05:26:17 +0000 UTC]

I dunno.

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mancan71 In reply to jackskellington562 [2008-04-12 13:43:07 +0000 UTC]

ok then. and speaking of chapters....chapter 22 of ZAGF is up!

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jackskellington562 In reply to mancan71 [2008-04-12 18:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you know you keep me waiting on alot of these chapters.

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mancan71 In reply to jackskellington562 [2008-04-12 22:05:20 +0000 UTC]

is that good or bad?

i like to keep suspence. it makes people wonder what's gonna happen next.

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jackskellington562 In reply to mancan71 [2008-04-13 04:02:20 +0000 UTC]

It's good, but I just want the things to get in in like two minutes.

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mancan71 In reply to jackskellington562 [2008-04-13 19:27:02 +0000 UTC]

sorry. i havn't been making a lot of chapters lately(it's not writers block, i'm just lazy) and i need to start. i'm running out of already made chapters!

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jackskellington562 In reply to mancan71 [2008-04-15 02:07:03 +0000 UTC]

It's fine, do it on your own time.

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mancan71 In reply to jackskellington562 [2008-04-15 17:17:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks! and so far i've got 27 chapters made. i'm gonna put 23 up soon.

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jackskellington562 In reply to mancan71 [2008-04-18 00:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Gewd, can't wait to read it.

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zimhatesu In reply to ??? [2008-02-23 01:13:44 +0000 UTC]

omg. this is awsome. poor Gaz

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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-02-23 14:22:18 +0000 UTC]

yea, gaz got thrown into a trash can.

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zimhatesu In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-23 14:26:42 +0000 UTC]

Thats so cruel but you did a really good job on this chapter. And when I read this I got so into it.

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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-02-23 14:29:26 +0000 UTC]

yes,yes it is. and thank you! that's what i was planning on doing! i'm getting better at writing stories! yays!

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zimhatesu In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-23 14:30:47 +0000 UTC]

you are I get so in to it when it's over I want to to read it again and again, ect.

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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-02-23 14:38:20 +0000 UTC]

cool! glad you like it! makes me feel good!

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zimhatesu In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-23 14:56:24 +0000 UTC]

Thats awsome!!!

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Lubiniki In reply to ??? [2008-02-22 14:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I'll go read the next chapter now. *runs of*

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mancan71 In reply to Lubiniki [2008-02-22 18:39:41 +0000 UTC]

sweet! thanks for the fav too!

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Lubiniki In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 18:48:05 +0000 UTC]

^^ Your welcome!

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oreo-cookie30 In reply to ??? [2008-02-22 01:31:09 +0000 UTC]

lol. i like it ^^ you better continue it! :] i guessed that ZAGF meant zim and gaz friendship.

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mancan71 In reply to oreo-cookie30 [2008-02-22 01:36:13 +0000 UTC]

yea. didn't i say that in the description? and don't worry! i'll continue it! sometime soon.

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oreo-cookie30 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 03:48:51 +0000 UTC]

yes you did. and ok =^^=

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mancan71 In reply to oreo-cookie30 [2008-02-22 04:25:15 +0000 UTC]

i was bored tonight and decided to do some more of this story. i'm up to chaper 3 three now. i'm gonna do chapter 4 sometime later.

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oreo-cookie30 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 23:17:34 +0000 UTC]

ok! ^^

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mancan71 In reply to oreo-cookie30 [2008-02-22 23:20:42 +0000 UTC]

i now have 5 chapters made up! tomarrow i'm gonna put chapter 3 up on DA.

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oreo-cookie30 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 23:39:39 +0000 UTC]

ok! ill be waiting. :3

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mancan71 In reply to oreo-cookie30 [2008-02-22 23:42:07 +0000 UTC]

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cupcake208 In reply to ??? [2008-02-22 01:03:19 +0000 UTC]

OH NOES! Dibs a jerk ><

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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-02-22 01:06:47 +0000 UTC]

yea. i thought him being a jerk would help out the story.

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cupcake208 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 11:04:36 +0000 UTC]

yep.

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cupcake208 In reply to ??? [2008-02-22 00:53:55 +0000 UTC]

wow! I really liked this chatper a lot! poor gaz T-T never thought that people would just do that to her.

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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-02-22 01:06:26 +0000 UTC]

high school is a whole new world. let's just say that.

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cupcake208 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 11:02:53 +0000 UTC]

yeah..surpose so.

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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-02-22 11:56:20 +0000 UTC]

yup.

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cupcake208 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 12:01:34 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! I couldnt say goodbye to my mum and dad! I was like laughing and trying to say bye!

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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-02-22 12:12:09 +0000 UTC]

lol. i hate when it when i try to say one thing but another thing comes out instead. like brian regan.

brian: these friends were leaving the other day and i started to say "hey take care!" but i deided to say good luck like half way through. so it came out neater!
guy: see ya later brian!
brian: take luck! take luck and care, take care of the luck. Good luck takeing of the the luck you may have if you take it and care for it! *starts to yell jibberish*

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cupcake208 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 12:17:36 +0000 UTC]

lol funny XD I did get it!

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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-02-22 12:38:58 +0000 UTC]

i know! brian regan is funny! and jim gaffigan, bill evengal(can't spell his last name), and the amazing johnathan!

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cupcake208 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 13:07:47 +0000 UTC]

cool! what chanel are they on?

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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-02-22 13:56:40 +0000 UTC]

there sometimes on comedy central. but i can send a few vids of them! i sent that bacon vid remember!? that was jim gaffigan! and my invader zim brian regan thing on youtube was....well...brian regan!

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cupcake208 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 14:40:00 +0000 UTC]

oh yeah!! I remeber! lol that was funny XD.

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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-02-22 18:40:36 +0000 UTC]

yea. if you want i can send more comdiean vids. i'll send them when i get a chance. k? ^_^

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cupcake208 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 22:04:45 +0000 UTC]

oh! okay that be great!

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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-02-22 23:29:49 +0000 UTC]

sweet! when i get a chance i'll send them to ya! ok?

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cupcake208 In reply to mancan71 [2008-02-22 23:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay dokay!

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