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Zim, Tak, and Gaz rode the hover boards to the mall. Gir was on top of Zim’s head with Mimi on Tak’s. They reached the front door and got off the boards.“Great. We’re gonna have to carry them all around now,” Gaz complained without thinking.
“No we’re not!” Zim said with a smile.
Zim pressed a button on all of the hover boards. They folded up and went inside his pak.
“Whoa! That was cool!” Gaz said.
Zim smiled again and they all headed inside.
“So what do you want to do first?” Zim asked the two girls.
“TOY STORE!” Gir shouted running towards a toy store.
Tak sighed.
“I’ll go after him. Come on Mimi,” Tak said heading for the store with Mimi.
“Well….I guess that leaves whatever you want to do,” Zim said to Gaz, “So what do you want to do?”
“How about the video game store?” Gaz asked.
“Ok! Sure!” Zim said happily.
They started walking around looking for the game store. They passed a fountain that had a statue of a man in the middle of it. The man had water coming out of his mouth.
“Who’s that?” Zim asked while passing it.
“It’s the guy who founded the city of New York. Don’t ask his name cause I forget,” Gaz said.
“Ok,” Zim said looking at the statue.
“Hey girly! Come here for a second!” a voice shouted.
Gaz turned around to see a group of boys heading their way. They came up to them. The leader had black hair and brown eyes. He looked like one of the blues brothers. Both him and his dopple gangers.
“What do you want?” Gaz asked.
“I was wonderin if you wanted to go out on a date wit me. All you gots to do it ditch the freak here,” the leader said pointing at Zim.
Zim grew angry and wanted to lunge at the boy. Gaz put her arm in front of him so he didn’t.
“Thanks, but no thanks. I’m not into boys like you,” Gaz said turning to leave.
“Oh I think you are!” He said grabbing her around the waist.
“Hey let go of her!” Zim said trying to lunge at the boy, but getting grabbed by the other boys of the group.
“What if I don’t want to?” The leader asked.
“I’ll kill you!” Zim said with an angry look.
“I would like to you see you try!” the leader said still holding Gaz.
Gaz struggled to get out of his grip. He laughed as she did.
“Don’t worry pretty girl, I don’t bite hard,” the leader said putting his hand down her skirt.
“Let me go you big jerk!” Gaz shouted.
“No, no I don’t think I will,” the leader said.
Zim got out of the other boys’ grip and punched the leader in the jaw. The leader let go of Gaz from the impact of the punch. The leader landed in the pool with the statue.
“Oh you’re so going to pay for that!” the leader yelled.
“Oh no he’s not!” Gaz yelled.
She started after going to attack the leader but the other boys grabbed her.
“Let me go!” Gaz shouted.
“Your pretty,” said one of them.
Zim turned to help her out but the leader grabbed Zim and threw him into the pool of water. Zim started to burn, but didn’t care. Zim punched the leader in the gut. They rolled around kicking and punching each other. Soon later the leader punched Zim in the gut as hard as he could.
Zim collapsed on the side of the pool. He started to cough out blood. Gaz stared in horror. She hated it when she was completely useless. Zim tried to get up but was too weak and slipped on the ledge of the pool. The leader walked up to him with a victory smile.
“Now to kill this freak and claim my prize!” the leader said looking at Gaz.
Gaz’s heart raced. She didn’t know what to do. She struggled some more from the boys’ grip, but they kept it tight still. The leader took out a gun from his pocket. Gaz’s face had fear all over it. Her eyes had tears and her mouth was dropped. She didn’t want him to die. She had just become friends with him.
The leader pointed the gun at Zim’s heart. Zim kept his eyes closed and waited for what he was expecting. “Come on! Come on! Why aren’t you here yet!?” Zim shouted in his brain.
“Gir! Mimi! Attack mode! Now!” Tak shouted running towards them.
Gir and Mimi leaped at the leader. They started tearing him to shreds. The boys who were holding Gaz let go of her to help their leader. Gir and Mimi attacked them too. Tak and Gaz ran up to Zim.
“Are you ok!?” Gaz asked helping Tak pull him out.
Zim managed to nod his head. It was hard for him to breathe and speak. They set him down on the other side of the ledge of the pool.
“I’m sorry I wasn’t much help,” Gaz said to Zim.
Zim gave thumbs up.
“I guess that means its ok,” Tak said smiling.
Gaz and Tak helped Zim up. They walked over to a bench near them.
“Did…they…hurt…you?” Zim asked slowly feeling a pain in his side with every word.
“No they didn’t hurt me,” Gaz said shaking her head.
“Good,” he said smiling.
Zim’s sides hurt. He cringed in pain.
“Let’s get you home,” Tak said.
“Ok,” Zim said cringing in pain again.
Gaz and Tak helped Zim get up.
“Gir! Mimi! Come on!” Tak yelled.
Gir and Mimi came up to them. Gaz looked at the boys to see them beat up. They walked him out the door. Every step Zim took had him cringe in pain.
“You want one of us to carry you or something?” Gaz asked after a while.
“No…thanks,” Zim said, panting.
They finally reached the base after an hour. They walked in and sat Zim down on the couch. Tak walked to the kitchen to get a bag of ice for Zim’s black eye from getting punched. Gaz sat down with him and started to apply some ointment for the burns Zim had from the water.
“Thank you Zim. For everything,” Gaz said hugging him around the neck and trying not to get ointment on herself.
“No problem,” Zim said being able to breathe a little better.
Tak came back with a bag of ice.
“Here you go,” Tak said handing it to him. “It’s not as good as meat for a black eye but if I put meat in your eye it’s gonna make it worse.” She said.
“Thanks,” Zim said taking it and putting it on his eye.
Tak smiled.
“I’m gonna go check on Gir and Mimi and see how they’re doing. When they go into water their wires go all weird. I’m gonna see if they’re ok,” Tak said going to the chute that led to the lab where they were.
“Ok,” Gaz said feeling weird about being left alone with Zim.
Tak went down the chute. Gaz looked at Zim who kept holding the ice bag to his eye.
“Sooo…” Gaz started.
“What?” Zim asked.
“Never mind,” Gaz said shaking her head.
Zim smiled. Gaz’s cell phone started to ring. She answered it.
“Hello?” Gaz said.
“Gaz! What did you do to your brother?!” the professor asked on the other side of the phone.
“What do you mean?” Gaz asked.
“Your brother is at the hospital! What did you do him that had him sent to the hospital!?” the professor asked.
“Oh…he umm…he got me angry. Sorry,” Gaz said.
“Well come to the hospital so you can apologize to him! Now!” the professor said before hanging up.
“I have to go Zim,” Gaz said hanging up.
“Ok then. I’ll see you tomorrow?” Zim asked.
Gaz smiled and nodded. She got up and walked to the door.
“Tell Tak I said good bye,” Gaz said opening the door.
“I will,” Zim said.
Gaz smiled and walked out, closing the door. She walked to the hospital to see her brother with a smile on her face.
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Comments: 54
QueenofDoomyDoom [2011-06-24 01:26:16 +0000 UTC]
Dib needed his ass kicked too... without medical aid
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Stomei97 [2010-08-23 07:39:57 +0000 UTC]
ok,that wasnt what i was hoping what would happen.but those jerks soooooooooooooooo deserved it.
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irkangirlq1516 [2010-07-21 04:18:47 +0000 UTC]
oh noooes Zim got hurt. hehehe she sent dib to the hospital.
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Leigha-Leigh13 In reply to mancan71 [2010-04-22 00:44:16 +0000 UTC]
my friend rebecca is startin her own fan fic for it itz called GALR so far itz rlly good but urz iz rlly good...
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mancan71 In reply to Leigha-Leigh13 [2010-04-22 00:44:45 +0000 UTC]
cool. ^_^ what's GALR stand for exactly? and thank you as well...
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Leigha-Leigh13 In reply to mancan71 [2010-04-22 00:47:13 +0000 UTC]
GALR stands for Gir and layla relationship..itz rlly good so far...my friend actually asked u if u she could use one of ur characters
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mancan71 In reply to Leigha-Leigh13 [2010-04-22 00:48:23 +0000 UTC]
uh huh...ok...i'm not usually a fan of people pairing their characters with origional characters...but ok.
depends...which character and how well does your friend know them? wait...is it the one who's asking about theo?
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Leigha-Leigh13 In reply to mancan71 [2010-04-22 00:49:51 +0000 UTC]
yea...she wanted to no if she could pair him up wit my character may...but i had no part of it what so ever O.o
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mancan71 In reply to Leigha-Leigh13 [2010-04-22 00:53:15 +0000 UTC]
theo already has a girlfriend and a son...i've told her that and she understands.
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Leigha-Leigh13 In reply to mancan71 [2010-04-22 00:58:12 +0000 UTC]
i no she was tellin me dat.....do u hav a sir unit and a invader???
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mancan71 In reply to Leigha-Leigh13 [2010-04-22 00:59:38 +0000 UTC]
no. none of my irkens are invaders. they just own SIRs...well...only tallulah(the owner of theo) does. the other irken got rid of his and gave it to someone else...jhonen vasquez hates people who make themselves invaders...
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Leigha-Leigh13 In reply to mancan71 [2010-04-22 01:02:46 +0000 UTC]
o....my sir is sorta slow like me...and weird cuz rebecca drew my master and it looked exactly like me...except she had blue eyes nd i have brown...
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invader-yor [2010-01-10 02:23:37 +0000 UTC]
did zim forget that he has four robot spider legs in his back in his blind rage?
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rougethebat1096 [2008-11-29 04:07:16 +0000 UTC]
nonononono! prof. membrain isn't mean! he's a nut case! remember? "NOT NOW SON! i'M MAKEING..... TOAST!" "i'm flooatiinnng!" "my poor insane son"
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mancan71 In reply to rougethebat1096 [2008-11-29 14:36:39 +0000 UTC]
i didn't make him mean..i just made it so gaz got her just desserts for beating up her brother. i made him parental.
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DarkHeart3 [2008-08-10 08:43:41 +0000 UTC]
You keep amazing me with this cool story it just gets better as I read Yay
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ZAGRclub [2008-03-12 07:04:19 +0000 UTC]
this is getting good! i like this and how this is going! i hope this keeps up! great fanfic! a !!!!
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mancan71 In reply to ZAGRclub [2008-03-12 20:33:51 +0000 UTC]
thank you! i'm glad you like it!
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iamZIMbowdown [2008-03-07 00:12:42 +0000 UTC]
aw................therez no moreeeeeee...........*tear* it makez me cry...............
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iamZIMbowdown In reply to iamZIMbowdown [2008-03-07 00:20:13 +0000 UTC]
o................i feel better now.................*smiles like a pyshco*
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mancan71 In reply to iamZIMbowdown [2008-03-09 02:14:50 +0000 UTC]
good! i don't like it when people are unhappy! unless i intend to make them unhappy! then i like it! but i didn't intend to make you unhappy. so i don't like making you unhappy. hopefully i will get my chapters up soon.
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mancan71 In reply to iamZIMbowdown [2008-03-07 00:17:07 +0000 UTC]
there is more! i just didn't put it up yet! don't worry. there is more soon. ^_^
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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-03-04 23:13:48 +0000 UTC]
yea. zim got hurt. but it was all to save a fair maden! i feel bad for gaz mostly. zim probably faced worse things then that during the 3 years he had taking down the tallest. gaz never got a chance to help him out. i hate it when something is going on and there is no way i could help!
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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-03-05 21:08:40 +0000 UTC]
"you know seriously" what? the feeling bad for gaz part or the zim should be used to it from the three years he had been gone?
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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-03-05 22:58:51 +0000 UTC]
don't worry. it's ok. and ok! i should REALLY start thinking of doing a story with tak and zim taking down the tallest. maybe after a fin both my ZAGF stories and my old story "the girl who came from the stars" story. i think i'm gonna have to just post like 5 chapters of the girl who came from the stars chapters in a row when i'm done with the ZAGF story. or i'm just gonna cancel the TGWCFTS(the girl who came from the stars) story. idk.
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zimhatesu In reply to mancan71 [2008-03-05 23:01:16 +0000 UTC]
dont cancel TGWCFTS I want to know wat happensssssssss
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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-03-05 23:21:56 +0000 UTC]
really?! ok then! i just have to get the chapters up on my new com. along with the chapters of ZAGF on here as well. i have none of the chapters of those two stories on my new com.
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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-03-06 01:29:30 +0000 UTC]
i know! sorry. i'm trying. it's hard cause i ask my dad and he says he'll do it and then an hour passes by and he still didn't do it! i hate it when he does that!
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zimhatesu In reply to mancan71 [2008-03-06 01:30:59 +0000 UTC]
im srry. that sucks or bites.
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mancan71 In reply to zimhatesu [2008-03-06 01:37:29 +0000 UTC]
it's both! it sucks and bites!
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mancan71 In reply to cupcake208 [2008-03-04 22:15:27 +0000 UTC]
yea. he got hurt BAD! but he was helped by Tak and Gaz. they helped him out. isn't it great when you have friends that help you out when you're really hurt?
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