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Published: 2012-04-04 21:31:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1479; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 23
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A red-line critique I gave for on his drawing of a vixenKeep in mind - this is my first red-line picture, I'm not perfect at drawing and if you think you know something better than what I've stated here and such - don't hesitate to tell me.
Critique my critique so that the next critique I make will be more accurate
the original picture is ©
the red-line picture is © Dovydas Širvinskas, aka , but you are free to ( possibly ) learn from it ^^
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I've been wanting to draw vixens for a while and I know you didn't intend this as a tutorial but this will be a huge help!
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It is incredibly old and probably tons of wrong with it.
But even so, I hope it ends up helping you along the way of drawing more vixens!
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Looks pretty good to me! You corrected the angle beautifully :3
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I'm ALWAYS ! love you Design
Your Eyes Style is make me feel Passionate
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This is very cool and informative here dude.
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Thanks ^^
It's a bit of all the observations I've made over my time practicing female anatomy
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Well, you certenly are very good at it. I could really use the practice thats for sure.
Btw, feel free to do one of these to any of my pics if you ever get bored. I'm sure theres several things I could improve on.
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If you want me to do it, please choose one artwork you'd like me to red-line
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The only one I can think of at the moment, is this one.--->[link] All the other ones I have are either have too much detail or have other characters in them. Besides, I may just ask for another one when your done.(I'm kidding.XD)
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The huge ears part got me thinking, for someone who likes to draw characters with huge ears I've never seen you draw anything that naturally has huge ears. Like a bat or an elephant.
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Well usually I draw what I like and well - elephants I don't have much liking in their appearance and bats... well... it will probably one day reach me, but still...
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Suggestion for bat character names: if it's a boy, Bruce. If it's a girl, Barbara. ^_^
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Not sure if I'll have em though
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Maybe one could be a night watchmen. They wouldn't even need a flashlight!
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but would suck during the day
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Unless they were blind... as a bat
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Well with their echo location, and gigantic ears that you'll give them (ones being bigger that their head no doubt) it shouldn't be a problem.
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Your comic, your decision ^_^
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Oh you meant comic
my comic already has characters planned, their species as well
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^_^ I hope some of them are skunks, and that they're cute
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Not sure about that, but still xD
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Now, this is a very interesting way to do this! A great way to help people out, Coin. Just brilliant
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Wow.... This really helps! I know I failed on the head MAJORLY, thnks for showing a better (and cuter X3) way of doing it!
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Glad to know it's helpful ^^
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I could never get heads right XD That and hands and breasts, those are the things I am the WORSTE at (oddly, I did good on the breasts this time)
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Hands are awfully hard for me
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I will never understand why hands are friggin IMPOSSIBLE! Its like they dont want you to do them right!
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They are magicaly denieing us!
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I rather like how you did this here Cion. Would you be willing to do one for the reference picture I showed you of Tava, or would you rather want to take a look at some writing?
Or are you now closed? XD
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You could post a link on my journal :3
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OK I'll give you the link to Tava's reference sheet again.
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