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MarexDev — Azel Ref (May 2017)
Published: 2017-04-30 21:52:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 485; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 0
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So, Azel's gonna be in classes soon so I decided to make a ref for him with all his clothes and stuff.Also, his arms are bandaged from the wrist to elbow.
NEW UPGRADES:
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Smooth Mouth - Enrolled in Wind Class
Coatala Ears
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Update:
IT IS FIXED
OMG
MY STYLE HAS GOTTEN SO MUCH BETTER!!!!!!!!
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Update:
Fixed a part of his coat.
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Comments: 19
[Mod Message: Hi there! This is a really cool design! But there's some issues that need to be resolved before drawing Azel some more!
- Those paws and arms are much too big! Biped wyngro have small arms and paws compared to their legs and feet.
- You cannot make your character blind as this is not an upgrade option.
- The upgrade feathered tail tip appears to be missing its animation! This upgrade will need to be removed.
- The animation used for the whip tail upgrade is too sketchy and not coloured. You will have to ink and colour this animation for it to count.
Please make these changes and reply back to me once you have, thank you!]
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Okay
- I understand. This is just for colors but I will fix it.
- He is not blind just light sensitive. He can see but it just hurts for now. He will not have the bandages when it heals.
- I will redo the animations for both the whip tail and feathered tail tip upgrades
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It is important that you stick to anatomy, especially if anybody wants to draw your character so I appreciate that you will change them!
Wyngro cannot have disabilities nor can they cover their eyes! These bandages have to be removed immediately.
It is advised that you remove these upgrades if you cannot complete the animation before classes start and update the reference.
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Gotcha.
Is it okay though if the animation has the bandages? I already did it....
But he'll have no bandages now
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The bandages need to be off due to you being told previously they were not allowed. The tail tip also needs to be removed from this animation as the tip can only be applied AFTER the requirements are met. You cannot count wyns for this until these changes have been made.
He also now has a scar which did not get its requirement fulfilled properly! You need to write 600 words of story or more for it to count as an upgrade!
You also need to declare upgrades when they are first shown! Please remember to declare upgrades! Further ignorance of the rules will result in a warning! This character is really cool, but they need to follow the rules like everyone else.
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Thank you for the wonderful constructive criticism. I will definitely take it to heart when I draw more wyngro drawings.
The animation is fixed and the story is added to the picture where he gets the injury > Sacrafice
I took down Sunshine and I will repost it with the needed declaring.
Again, I'd like to say thank you and sorry for making you go through all this trouble to help.
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The story is great! Good job!
That's looking great! The animation meets the requirements, thank you! Maybe if you wanted to try and challenge yourself, you could add a few more in-betweens to make the motion smoother, but right now it looks great.
The image here still needs the bandages removed and the arms made smaller, however. What you can do for the scar is cover one eye where he got slashed, that would be fine, otherwise both eyes cannot be covered. Can you please make these changes next? Thank you!
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Actually, once you say it's okay I was planning to delete this image
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It is best to not delete the image but rather update it. You can update the image and down at the bottom of the page you can select a drop down menu that has a tickbox to alert your watchers about the renewed deviation. It's in the rules that they can't be deleted, unfortunately. Sorry!
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wow
I never knew that.
Well I'll do that then 
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Hi there! Thought I'd remind you that this image still needs changed. If it doesn't receive a change soon, deviations to the group may be halted until it has been fixed. Thank you!
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Alright that's looking better! Nice work!
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Thanks!
I worked really hard to improve my style before I made his ref afain
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Alright great! Do tell when you've made the changes, thank you!
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Hey, Marex? You might've made a typo for the upgrade name
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Got it! Thanks!
Oh and do you think he should keep the smooth mouth or not?
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Your welcome!
Yeah, i think he should
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