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Mark-Up — Once
Published: 2008-08-23 21:08:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 213; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I asked him what he wanted once;he said, “nothing”
I asked him what he need once;
he told me, “everything”
I asked him what he felt once;
he didn’t answer me
I asked him what he thought once;
he said, “fantasies.”
I asked him what he knew once;
he told me, “all”
I asked him why he did it once;
he said, “because”
I asked him if he was sane once;
he just smiled
I asked him who he was once;
he said, “me”
I asked where we were once;
he just stared.
I asked if we changed once;
he said, “yes”
I asked him when once;
he told me, “now”
I asked him what he saw once;
he said, “beauty.”
I asked him where he saw it once;
he said, “here”
I asked him if he knew once;
he asked me, “knew?”
I asked him if he knew how I loved him once;
he said, “yes”
I asked him what he knows now;
he said, “you.”
Used: Puppeteer by Jelloween [link] and Victor's Pixel Font 1.0 [link] by Tybee as well as Microsoft's PMingLiu.
Original Poem by me
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Comments: 2
I absolutely love this. I would try to crit but there's nothing I can honestly say is bad about it. Amazing poem, and the way you chose to display it just makes it that much better. Great job. ^^
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Thanks, I rather love my poem too, and it just seemed too simple to put it in normal text format. Thanks for the comment!
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