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Published: 2016-11-14 16:54:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1376; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 3
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BOOYAH, I finished this page in one day! And I like how it looks, especially that panel with the flames
Just in case you missed it: that's the same hat you saw in page 8. Apparently the monster still holds a grudge against this mysterious "Otto Origam" guy. HMMM...
Poor skeleguy. At least he got to burn a house in the other comic. With LEMONS.
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Comments: 45
The burning lemons sight gag is probably the funniest thing I've seen in a comic, at least if you know enough about Cave Johnson. Yeah some of the jokes can easily be missed in this comic and rely on knowledge of other things, but I'll let that aside. Ian Flynn's Archie Sonic and Mega Man comics rely on a pretty deep knowledge of the games to understand some of their jokes as well...
The pacing in this one is also pretty awkward, and I wish we had a Scooby Doo style chase scene extra page before the bear catches Mr. Spoops. It would have added to the halloween theme including at least a Scooby Doo joke in. x'D
The panel with the bear roaring is fantastic, let me say that one though.
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Yeah it's just a small reference, not something the player necessarily needs to understand to follow the story at all
Meh you're right, looking at it now I think I know why. There should be some more panels, and the ones in the second row are too small, that also influences how 'long' the reader would think a scene is.
Sadly I can't fix that anymore...
Vertical motion blur was a perfect effect for this! ^^
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Yeah, but comic paneling is a learning process. I should try comic paneling as well, but I'll have to write it all out first...
I should try out motion blur and special effects.
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That definitely helps! I did that too for this comic, it already has slightly better pacing than my previous long comics I think.
Totally! Nice effects can add a lot.
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Yeah, and pacing is totally important in a comic. Not too little or not too much or it drags on.
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Love this! It's so full of ideas, references, Arctic facts and most of all...penquins!!
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Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like it!
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You're welcome! This must be an awful lot of work!
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It is, but I'm pretty happy with the result and the positive feedback makes it all worth it ^^
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EVERY VILLIAN IS LEMONS CONFIRMMED! Also, dat pokerface in the fifth panel xD!
Rip Skeledude 2016 - 2016
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Haha XD
That's the face of a skeleton who just realized he's screwed!
R.I.P. in pieces...
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Yeah haha
Never forgetti
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I'd say the skeleton dude had it coming to him
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That fire polar bear is gonna choke on that fly coming at him.
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A giant monster killed by a random fly. A bit anti-climactic
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Press F to pay respects
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This is why you do not mess with halloween; Halloween can mess with you!
Also, the penguin had the symbol of mark productions.. this is shivering indeed; Get it, pun + joke = instant win for a comment.
Loving the effects added with that giant roar; Really adds up
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Thanks a lot dude!
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how did you do the motion affect? just asking!
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It's an effect in Inkscape, called 'vertical motion blur'.
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HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMgross
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OH BOY FLAMES MY FAVOURITE
That panel does look real good :>
So was the bear the strange thing Otto saw? :0
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Thank you!
Indeed it was!
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So the bear dies. The. It un-dies :>
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The pumpkin juice stuff resurrected him, that explains the orange goopy effect around him
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Oh yeah. <: D
Looks like Mr. Death has found out about the secrets of life.
(OOOOH, WAIT A MINUTE, THE PUMPKIN JUICE BRINGS MORE LIFE INTO THE VICTIMS' HEARRRRRTS!~ )
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It makes stuff spooky
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Okay. Holiday spirit
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Also, motion blur. Very nice
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Thank you, yeah I thought that effect would be perfect for this ^^
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Chromatic aberration would also be really awesome for the panel :3
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The hat, why did the bear not like it?
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What confused you?
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